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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the part where Naruto had changed his clones into his friends from Konoha. It was hilarious when the Sakura and Ino ones fought over Sasuke. I love the yummy stuff at the end of this chapter too. :)
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your evil. Seriously. You cut it off there? I'm just soo sooo... I'm just not happy. :P Not to say you didn't write it brilliantly... it's just... why cut it off there? I feel sad and incomplete... and I want my smut!
Keep posting please please please please. And please please please post the next bit soon (I'm under the impression that you've got a fair bit of this pre-written). Anyway. This is my review. It's ment as encouragement. So Cheers! Kim
Keep posting please please please please. And please please please post the next bit soon (I'm under the impression that you've got a fair bit of this pre-written). Anyway. This is my review. It's ment as encouragement. So Cheers! Kim
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am a lurker and frankly it takes an awesome story to get a review out of me. But, since you are now in my favorite authors list and I find myself looking for updates every single Tuesday and Saturday, you definitely deserve a review from me.
I love this story. I love that you're taking your time. That Sasuke and Naruto didn't just jump into bed with each other. I love that there's plot. It makes the smut that much sweeter. I love how you've captured Naruto and Sasuke. They're the characters I fell in love with in the manga/anime.
I love that Naruto and/or Sasuke don't have feminine hips/hands/etc, because Naruto and/or Sasuke aren't girls! They are male and they are ass-kicking ninyas. Thank you for keeping them so in character.
I can't wait until Sasuke and Naruto get hit with the clue bus (and the smut!), but I'm also really enjoying the twists and turns it's taking to get there. Definately watching for more.
Rivent
I love this story. I love that you're taking your time. That Sasuke and Naruto didn't just jump into bed with each other. I love that there's plot. It makes the smut that much sweeter. I love how you've captured Naruto and Sasuke. They're the characters I fell in love with in the manga/anime.
I love that Naruto and/or Sasuke don't have feminine hips/hands/etc, because Naruto and/or Sasuke aren't girls! They are male and they are ass-kicking ninyas. Thank you for keeping them so in character.
I can't wait until Sasuke and Naruto get hit with the clue bus (and the smut!), but I'm also really enjoying the twists and turns it's taking to get there. Definately watching for more.
Rivent
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. I truly enjoy it so I definitely look forward to when it's updated again ^^
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was short and sweet and finally naruto told him about why he left! will you have itachi kill him! or will this be a good so what happy ending?
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING DOWNTIME!!!! gahhhhh urgh, so i had this nice, long review typed out and stupidly didn't copy it before i tried to submit it and what do ya know--of course, daily fucking downtime!
grrr anyway, so of course i loved the chappie! woot for naruto's luck! ^_^ the whole shrine part was cute/sweet, with naruto insisting sasuke pay his respects first, being creeped out by the idea of ghosts and worried about sasuke angering something, sasuke leaning against him to sleep, naruto's kissy way to wake sasuke and half asleep sasuke *needing more* when naruto broke away *huge grin*, and sasuke stretching on purpose to watch naruto check him out heheh
ahh and now sasuke knows why naruto left and that he left w/out permission.. but gahh freakin sasuke and his "mutual kill" idea.. i mean, gahh that is SO him! ok naruto, now it's time to start training and show that thickheaded, shortsighted bastard he's got a future when you work together!!!
grrr anyway, so of course i loved the chappie! woot for naruto's luck! ^_^ the whole shrine part was cute/sweet, with naruto insisting sasuke pay his respects first, being creeped out by the idea of ghosts and worried about sasuke angering something, sasuke leaning against him to sleep, naruto's kissy way to wake sasuke and half asleep sasuke *needing more* when naruto broke away *huge grin*, and sasuke stretching on purpose to watch naruto check him out heheh
ahh and now sasuke knows why naruto left and that he left w/out permission.. but gahh freakin sasuke and his "mutual kill" idea.. i mean, gahh that is SO him! ok naruto, now it's time to start training and show that thickheaded, shortsighted bastard he's got a future when you work together!!!
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay... That was really good. Though it was sad at the end with Naruto and Sasuke and Konoha and the thought of Sasuke dying.
Very well done, I can't wait until the next chapter!
Very well done, I can't wait until the next chapter!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, or course i'm still enjoying your story ;) it's just that i've been kinda busy and i've only had the time to read the newest chapters but not to review, sorry :/ well, anyway. to the review now :D
YAAAYY! This is getting more and more exciting, can't wait for the training to start! *remember THE LUBE* and hmm...some other ACTIVITIES between those guys, hehe *drools all over the keyboard* :DD as i said before, i really REALLY like the way naruto and sasuke's relationship developes in this story, it's very well figured out. I like it slow and complex, not like in many sasunaru fanfictions where the plot simply is "he's my best friend -> i think i love him -> gah i'm gay -> let's have sex" ;< I'm so glad i found this story! i was really getting fed up with those kind of sasunaru fictions.
Great chapter once again, nothing to complain about! ;) when sasuke was talking about those scrolls he had with him i remembered the srcoll naruto manipulated earlier in the story :D the one that made sasuke's toothbrush turn pink xD i was just wondering if it'll play some bigger role in this story later on...we'll i guess we'll see that in time ;) well, thank's alot for updating in time once again :D it was nice coming home after a cosy day with friends and sit on my pc and read the latest chapter of The Sound of Dreams n__n See ya next week! (on thuesday i hope...for your sake ;DD you don't want to disappoint a fangirl, do you? they say angry fangirls can be really violent sometimes ;D)
YAAAYY! This is getting more and more exciting, can't wait for the training to start! *remember THE LUBE* and hmm...some other ACTIVITIES between those guys, hehe *drools all over the keyboard* :DD as i said before, i really REALLY like the way naruto and sasuke's relationship developes in this story, it's very well figured out. I like it slow and complex, not like in many sasunaru fanfictions where the plot simply is "he's my best friend -> i think i love him -> gah i'm gay -> let's have sex" ;< I'm so glad i found this story! i was really getting fed up with those kind of sasunaru fictions.
Great chapter once again, nothing to complain about! ;) when sasuke was talking about those scrolls he had with him i remembered the srcoll naruto manipulated earlier in the story :D the one that made sasuke's toothbrush turn pink xD i was just wondering if it'll play some bigger role in this story later on...we'll i guess we'll see that in time ;) well, thank's alot for updating in time once again :D it was nice coming home after a cosy day with friends and sit on my pc and read the latest chapter of The Sound of Dreams n__n See ya next week! (on thuesday i hope...for your sake ;DD you don't want to disappoint a fangirl, do you? they say angry fangirls can be really violent sometimes ;D)
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey! sorry i havent reviewed the last few chappies...love the story and hope you update soon! bye for now :P