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Another wonderful chapter! You know I am working on a song fic that will be dedicated to you and this story. Oh, and I am working on updating my stories. I promise!

Aawww... This was a sweet chapter, with cute limey bits :)

Another good chap. You know, one of the things i like about your writing style that i noticed alot in this chapter is how thorough you are with the details and quick explanations. Sometimes stupid lil things like, well how would they have electricity underground and crap like that that one wonders vaguely, you answered quite efficiently. Kudos to you for that. Nice to see Sasuke didn't snap at Naruto at the end, they are a very good team despite it all. I wonder how Sai and the others are gonna pan into the story later. Anyway, so i'm mentally on the countdown to smut lol. Update soon!

...can I be a fangirl? Well, I guess I'll have to give it a try...

OMG ZRINA UPDATED!!! OH JOY FILLED WITH WHIPPED CREAM AND MARASCHINO CHERRIES!! I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH AND I LOVE YOU MORE FOR YOUR CONSISTENT UPDATES!!

*embarrassed* How was that?

in the words of peter griffin, "oh, you are dark." well, more like bitter sweet. jeez, everytime i see that you've updated, i get this fear that this is the chapter where orochimaru will make his comeback. and i so don't want that to happen. so can you give me an estimate about when that bastard is just going to die already? i'll sleep easier. *bats eyelashes*

and great chapter!! i'm loving how they're interacting with each other. keep it up!!

Well this has taken an interesting turn hasn’t it? The progression of moods in this fic is very smooth, making the chapters flow well instead of feeling forced together as I have seen happen to other similar plot lines. Sasuke and Naruto’s gradual relationship change is also excellent. It’s more believable than “one day they hate each other, the next their head over heals and googly-eyed.” I also would like to commend you on your plotline. You’ve quite a number of chapters but the plot hasn’t gone stale, that of course being due to your writing as well. The only thing I have to say against you is that I hope that you don’t turn Sasuke into an emotional pile of mush not that he’s becoming more in touch with his feelings. I just don’t think it would be realistic given the past you’ve set up for him. Anyway though, I can’t remember if I’ve reviewed before but just in case I haven’t, I’d just like to say that this is a fantastic fic and extremely engaging, not to mention captivating. I always look forward to your updates. My best wishes for you and your writing.

Woohoo! Man... do i adore this fanfiction so much... It really, really should be illegal how much i'm enjoying it.... But really, i can't wait 'till chapter 27, since that's when you've seemed to allude that there's going to be the hard core smut scene.... Hmm... *rubs her chin* I hope it stays the way it has been so far, with naruto and sas-uke.... x3

Zrina! It was wonderful! I love the way you play jealous lover with a dense Sasuke! It's so cute and endearing. I can't wait for another chapter! Thanks again.

Ja na,
SeveredWings

love ur story! anyways Sasuke seems getting soft where naruto is concern. If it makes you feel better ur story always seemed to have a plot to me!

This is an excellent story so far! I like the pace of how things are being set up and I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. I like it so much that I've posted the link to your story on my livejournal: http://kitsuneshadow.livejournal.com/ Please continue your great writing!