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Yesterday i wrote the longest review i've ever written and just when i was about to post it to your LOVELY fic i accindentaly deleted it all!! you could call that fucking annoying...:/ i've already forgotten most of what i wrote, but the main point was to extol you fic for three reasons: 1. the characters are so IC that i feel they are even more IC than in the actual series! i've lost my interest on naruto as a series long time ago, but your fic is something so great, that i don't even think about the original series when i think about naruto, i think about your fic! you've taken the characters to a whole new level, you've developed their personalities and other qualities further than in the series, i like that!

I knew it poor guy he's lucky Sasuke only gave him that little warning. Anyway another well done plot filled chapter I wonder if this is the last time they'll see the family. Anyway i want to see them training together again, i always find that enticing when they're rolling around on the ground sparring it's great and gets this fan girls mind working over time XD

2. the PLOT! as you said in the AN of 24th chapter, there is a plot! and what a plot! this really could be a real novel or a script for a series...you can tell that you have put time and effort into writing this :) 3. the pairing: sasunaru is such a great set because of all that has happened in the series and it's 'easy' for a author because of all the elements that are already there...but you've managed to take that, too, one step further...their relationship in your fic so interesting and it feels so real...down to every little detail it's just perfect...like the whole fic.

i really have no bad word to say about your fic, i've already accepted the fact that i'm your fan :D meaning that every tuesday and saturday i sit on my computer waiting for the new chapter to come and i've enjoyed every single one! so, thank you for writing this fic, it really is the best fanfiction i've ever read n__n
-wempu from finland-

yay, awesome chapter as usual; the bandit attack was an interesting way to let the cat out of the bag about naruto's disguise lol--it both broke the news in a big, sudden, dramatic way but also let them know they could still trust him because he and sasuke saved them. i'm glad sasuke really did know the girl was a kagebunshin and also glad he was still upset by the idea of it; and the tender moment and hug with naruto made he wanna tear up and gush at the same time!! and i just LOVED the whole subtle yet glaringly obvious (at least to ryou) show of possession sasuke made lol! i love possessive!sasuke XD

ooh and i bet i know when sasu picked up the lube--when he was refilling their medical supplies at that last sound lair, ne? i'm right, aren't i?? aren't i??!! :p

kyaaa what'll happen next, i can't wait for saturday!!

i'm afraid to ask just how many chapters you're shooting for with this fic, but i certainly enjoy each and every one you post. this one was very action-packed. i got a laughed out of sasuke's needle complaint, and naruto's realization that he was in his boxers the entire fight, and especially ryou finding out naruto's secret. omg, and sasuke's "claim"! you tell him, sasuke!! he may be in denial with himself, but he certainly accepts it when others try to gain naruto's interest.

anyway, great chapter. i'm so looking forward to the man-smex, but i do love what you're doing to get there. and then i'm sure the plot will be all the better with all the build up. keep up the great work!!

I still am in love with this fic! I must say I appreciate the gradualness of the erosion of Sasuke's unfeelingness. It's very convincing and well-done.

I remain a faithful fan.

i want some narusasu action soon ;_; the first lemonish scene when naruto seemed to be so experienced was so damn perfect ;(

Wow...I think I'm deeply in love with your Jealous!Sasuke.
absolutely.. and does the fact that Sasuke picked up the lube mean he's seme?

“I would do anything for you.”

gah! that line, so simple, got me!
this chapter made me laugh, especially at Ryou

as always, brilliantly written
would write more, but i've been up since 6 and really need sleep
but im glad i checked to see if you had updated!
its nice to read this just before bed, takes all the stress of the work i have to do straight out of me!
thanks!!

:D