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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person ladygizarme
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaa jealous sasuke is fun.. and i think i've said it before but i LOVE how you write sai, it's so.. HIM lol, i love reading how he sees the world and his observations and actions on everything hahaha

naruto's dream was hella freaky, and the convo after sasuke woke him up was.. sorta sweet to me, like sasuke was trying to reassure him but naruto was to confused to get it was a dream and.. idk, i liked it; i love how you describe naruto's eating habits too lol, like the Gullet of Doom and a few chaps back how it was like the empty dishes were white ceramic corpses XD

ahhh and the smexy "make up" stuff in the tent was hotness, loved it, can't wait for chap 27!! wheeee (woot for fruity chewable vitamins too lol; sasu's such a sweetie even if he won't admit it and rarely shows it..)

omg and now what? what's with the scream? ack!
person ching1
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet! I certainly see Sasuke as the jealous type. In a way, that was why he left Konoha, wasn't it?
person roely
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it ! Sasuke was so jealous! the lemon was hot and i just love the possiveness of sasuke!
person Lila
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew Sasuke would be a jealous boyfriend, but that just makes it hotter. Very well done chapter i fell bad for the artist guy if he wishes to keep his life he better back off. Anyway another chapter that is fantastic. Make up lovin' is always hot. Another well done chapter i can't wait till i know what that shrill scream was. : )
person Allys
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOooohhhh!!! Beware the evil cliffie :(. But I still have to say, I LOVED THIS!!!!! *Happy Dancing* A whole chapter of jealous, possessive, obsessive Sasuke, and make up smut :D!!! hehehe 4 chapters till we're out of denial!!!! Soo Happy *swoons*

I'm up!!! EXCELLENT - Zrina is Fabulous - Zrina is Magnificent, and I'll sing your praises forever as soon as I get some Full On MAN SMEX!!!! I didn't miss Sasuke stealing the lube, come on boyo put that shit to good use. *sighs happily* Naruto is just to sexy for his own good.

Okay, Tuesday needs to speed its way here cause I have NO idea, what the hell is going on. But as usual I'm dying to find out.
person Stephy
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. The best I have read since months. I was desesperate with all the shit I read until now. Reading a good fic like yours after an exam, it's... you made my day. I think it's what we say in english. Thank you for writing this fic and for sharing.
Don't mind my english. It's not my first language and i lack practice. Don't even know if i make mistakes.
person burr
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't review after every single chapter but i want you to remember that i love the story and can't wait for the usual update :) aww it's so wonderful the chapers come out regularly :)!
person dana
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah for another great chapter. a jealous possessive sasuke is the s**t. are you going to have sasuke as a seme i could really see that (not that your story isn't blazin because it is) i usually don't read narxsas stories but yours has got me hooked. can't wait for the next update.
person Total Truth
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A jealous Sasuke is a smexy Sasuke!
person DevilLived
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay- I don't haveta take the time to log in anymore to review this! Lol, I'm so lazy.

Anyways, awesome job. Sasuke is s cuah a jealous person. I wonder why Naruto hasn't slapped him yet for his over-possessiveness. Mind you, it is a bit endearing.

Great job and udpate soon!