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hooray, thank you for your kindness in allowing annon reviews; not that I'm someone who is going to leave flames but all the signing in was starting to get to me, lol. Great chapter, your jealous Sasuke was well done. Poor Naruto can't even talk to someone, well the guy was flirting with him true but it meant nothing to Naruto. Glad those two are coming to some agreements . . . though I did get a little worried at the part when Naruto asked him if he was going to brand him; Sasuke seemed to like that idea . . . just a bit to much. Made me picture Sasuke holding Naruto down while tatooing an Uchiha fan on him with 'property of Sasuke Uchiha' over it. Nice cliffy by the way. Can't wait to see what is happening. Hmm, a raid by bandits? Missing nin's? Or maybe it's Sai and his team? Will Naruto be dropping his henge to help the civilians? OOOh, what will the artist think if he finds out Naruto isn't the Girl of his dreams? LOL, well can't wait. I'll keep my eyes out for more. Take care.

Oo! What a good (yet treacherous) way to end a chapter. One of my favorite parts about this fic is that Sasuke is sexually inexperienced XD
It makes for a lot of wonderful moments. What makes it even better is that Naruto is sexually experience and is teaching Sasuke!! That's awesome. I always enjoy when Sasuke gets to be a possesive bastard. The part about the branding was wonderfully executed. This chapter felt like a little breather chapter--important but a little slow (this is relatively speaking to most of your other chapters...though maybe I only feel that way because there is no imminent threat looming). Really, it's like when you move two other pieces on the chess board for a fantastic checkmate.

I shall be waiting for the fantastic winning move. ^_^

WOW, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

Sasuke finally acknowlegded his posessiveness over the dobe. Bout damn time too. Thank you so much. It was quite entertaining to me this lovely saturday. Anyway, that artist dude better watch his step cuz Sasuke could fry him in an instant. Also the way Sasuke feels about Sai...i can see things getting slighty uncomfortable again if Sai acts 'socially abnormal' again. But i have to say it'd amuse the hell outta me again. The smut there was so very good. Too bad they had to be quiet! I'll anxiously await chap. 27 till then lol. Now i'm wondering what that scream there at the end was all about. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

ahhh! cliffhanger
i've said pretty much all i've wanted to say about brilliant this fic is in my other reviews
so yeah ... ahhhh! cliffhanger!
i love that you update :D you make my week, twice a week XD

i am half tempted to say that the scream originated from either an akatsuki or sound attack, or sai trying to be sneaky, and then half tempted to say it's just the merchant's wife who has happened to see naruto curled up with sasuke instead of sasuke's sister. though i know that's probably not the case and i'll just wait for the next chapter. ^.^

this chapter was hilarious. i couldn't stop laughing. jealous!sasuke is just too cute. i absolutely adore this story. i look forward to your next update! (and when you say "the big event" do you mean sex or itachi, cause it could go either way ^.~ )

ahh sasuke is so CUTE!! the part where he bought the cheewy vitamins just made me go AWWWWW ^_^

it seems really sweet in a sasuke kinda way

not a cliffy!

"The older boy had just been screwing around with him in his weird, socially abnormal way." I love that sentence so much..lol!

Anyway, another GREAT chapter. Honestly, this is one of my most favorite stories. I love everything about it. A jealous Sasuke is always a good thing. The two of them in this story are just so "right" together. You so rock! I can't wait to read more!

Akkk....cliffhanger. Love this story, avidly looking for more. Me