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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
right on. sai's hilarious, like how he 'socializes' with the rest of the team. 8)
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
moah....you tease! *grumble*
na anyway great chapter :)
hope we're going to see more of this sasuke.
a possessive and jealous sasuke is a good sasuke!
just keep on...i love this story!
na anyway great chapter :)
hope we're going to see more of this sasuke.
a possessive and jealous sasuke is a good sasuke!
just keep on...i love this story!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was so cool! but5 what happend it was just to short ! Sasuke is going to be mad as hell! that is going to be funny!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... I love Sai <3 And I especially enjoy Sai and Naruto's interaction ^^ Great work. I look forward to more (and thank you for updating so often)
~KaraQ
~KaraQ
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful!! bravo!! encore!! or rather, upload another chapter. this was great. i don't know why, but i love when naruto's missing and people find him. and i love how sasuke knew something was up. *sigh* again, i hope tsunade can do something about that snake-bastard if and when they finally get back to konoha.
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaaa!!! I love Jealous Sasuke!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it, Good Sai :D Piss Sasuke off. I Love when Sasuke gets all jealous and possessive - "My Dobe!! MINE!!" XD.
Oh and advice for Naruto =^.^= if he sits on the washer as a girl it's a whole different type of fun *Snicker* LOL.
Excellent chappie as always can't wait for Saturday - Sai and Sasuke showdown?? I hope so, it would be way too much fun.
Oh and advice for Naruto =^.^= if he sits on the washer as a girl it's a whole different type of fun *Snicker* LOL.
Excellent chappie as always can't wait for Saturday - Sai and Sasuke showdown?? I hope so, it would be way too much fun.
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot, loved the jealous!Sasuke, it made up for the stick-up-his-ass!Sasuke. LOL
Great job, loved the conversation with Naruto and Sai. Keep up the great work!
Great job, loved the conversation with Naruto and Sai. Keep up the great work!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bah. Log in? Log in!
Right right. I only had to try about ten times to remember my password so I'm not too upset. And I must love your story heaps and heaps to have bothered at all. Seriously. I'm a lazy bugger by nature and logging in to review isn't usually on my 'to be bothered' list.
Anyway, you continue to amaze, intrigue and astound with your wonderful story and I'm anxiously waiting for more every day. Umm... I'm suffering a lack of words today so update soon and I'll write a better reivew then! Yay!
Kim
Right right. I only had to try about ten times to remember my password so I'm not too upset. And I must love your story heaps and heaps to have bothered at all. Seriously. I'm a lazy bugger by nature and logging in to review isn't usually on my 'to be bothered' list.
Anyway, you continue to amaze, intrigue and astound with your wonderful story and I'm anxiously waiting for more every day. Umm... I'm suffering a lack of words today so update soon and I'll write a better reivew then! Yay!
Kim
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now I like my smut, but I find the more and more I read it, the more and more I find that sometimes things get a little monotonous. He kissed, he licked, blah, blah, blah. It's disturbing when I can skip entire paragraphs and still know what's going on.
With that said, I wouldn't skip a single WORD in chapter seventeen! It was witty, engaging, and rawr!yummy. I loved that Sasuke melted like a kitten in sunshine, I thought that was very cool, and the line about clones, man, I just about lost it!
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And i love this fic! It's one of the best action/adventure fics I've read since "Naruto no Hohoemi" by Nazo over on fanfiction (though that one's aLOT more angsty). I'm entranced thus far and so exicted to read the next chapter that I keep forgetting to remember stuff that I think would be helpful criticism. Absolutely fantastic!
will probably review again after I've read more. ^_^
With that said, I wouldn't skip a single WORD in chapter seventeen! It was witty, engaging, and rawr!yummy. I loved that Sasuke melted like a kitten in sunshine, I thought that was very cool, and the line about clones, man, I just about lost it!
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And i love this fic! It's one of the best action/adventure fics I've read since "Naruto no Hohoemi" by Nazo over on fanfiction (though that one's aLOT more angsty). I'm entranced thus far and so exicted to read the next chapter that I keep forgetting to remember stuff that I think would be helpful criticism. Absolutely fantastic!
will probably review again after I've read more. ^_^