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OOH OOH, i liked this chappie. You've made Sai into someone i like! Anyway, the bastard's reaction to Sai near Naruto was positively interesting to me. And since Sai's gonna be around, I wonder what else is gonna happen! I'm glad you update so often, it really is a good story!

Nooooo! I've reached the end of the latest installment! T_T

I just found this fic today and I haven't been able to put it down. I kind of wish I had timed it but I know I've had two snacks since I started ...the fudge poptarts were delicious.

I am envious of your story-telling skills. You move things along nicely, the smut is tasteful and (like I think you mentioned in an author's note) adds a lot to the development of the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke--so I guess I'm saying it's not 'porn-what plot?.' Jealous!Sasuke is super-cute, even if he is a little bloodthirsty ^_^

Having read the fic straight through, some of my favorite parts:

-When Orochimaru is having Naruto-istic moments--like when he buys the orange pants and starts wearing the orange-beaded hair-tie.

-That Naruto has a vitamin and mineral deficiency from living off of ramen...I feel kind of like it's subliminal messaging. "Look kids! Even ninja need to eat their fruits and vegetables to grow!" lol

-Naruto's clone turning into a white fox with blue eyes...I want a plushie that looks like that. XD

-Naruto practicing the naughty with his own clones. *rawr*

-*shifty-eyed* the whole Kyuubi/Orochi scene. Whimpering Orochi just sparks a sadistic flame in my heart, me thinks. O_O

-the 'toxic fumes' that Sasuke blames on the ramen but probably has more to do with the sleeping potions.

-any Sai moments--usually the guy drives me nuts and I don't like him at all, but you've shown me the humor intrinsic in the character. The bugs biting him after he asks if Shino is ugly was a lovely touch. Implied in the same statement--thank you for giving Shino a hint of a personality! A lot of people leave him out of fanfics (I suspect they don't know what to do with him) but I think he has the potential to be a very interesting character.

And a question from an aspiring writer to a writer--what kind of daily schedule for writing do you maintain? Do you write in big chunks or do you set time aside every day? If you have time and if you want, you can hop over to my fanfiction account and send me a personal message from there (same penname). I'm usually not logged in here long enough for my e-mail to remain unhidden.

With that, I shall wait anxiously for your next update.

Thank you for this wondrous gem. Now if only I knew why I didn't start reading it sooner. *scratches head and shrugs sheepishly*

OMFG!!!
I love the last chapter!!!
Oh the scene with Sai was great!!!
Oh I hope you update soon that would be great!!
But I think you said that you update every Tues and Sat.....that makes me sad that I have to wait for Sat.
Oh well its worth the wait.
Thanks

ooh, nice nice.
I like the jealous Sasuke, he makes an interesting story.
Ahh!! I'm excited to see where this story is going next.
So please post another chapter soon, I look forward to the great read!
A long lasting fan of this fiction,
Fujinakaheero

Awesome. Just freaking awesome really. You have such an amazing handle on these characters and I so envy you for that. I didn't see anything that needed concrit, so I'm sorry, but you'll just have to make do with encouragement and praise. ;P Keep up the wonderful work and I'll see you on your next update! Ja ne~

that was hot! more more more

I gotta say, I LOVE how Sasuke is totally useless after sex. It's addorable.
I love your story. All of it.

*Now let's pretend I said something profound and/or witty here.*

kyaaaa *squeeee* totally LOVED it, omg, tender sasuke in the beginning!! even if it only lasted a lil bit then--squash that stupid little voice into oblivion sasuke, you know you wanna let yourself love naruto!! umm oh yeah! haha, sasuke finding out 'his toothbrush' is pink, and the whole discussion about perverted Sannin XDDDD loved that too! naruto's performance for the hotel woman made me giggle.. and of COURSE who doesn't love shower sexxxxx??? that was totally hot, i love how out of it sasuke is after too *smirk* ahhh, have i told you yet how much i love this story? i'm SO glad you have it written so far ahead so you can keep this update schedule! until next time, ja

~ lg

*Waves* Hiya! New reader here ^^. And damn shocked one too. Why-oh-why did I never stop to read this fic before? It's mind-blowing and amazing *splutters* not to mention, hot too (mewls@the SasuNaru). I was so shocked when Orochimaru took over Naruto's body. I never even CONSIDERED that that was going to happen, or that that had ALREADY happened (I had to reread it a couple of times to double check my mind wasn't playing tricks on me o_O). After that chapter, I sat back in awe thinking "Bloody genius..." (excuse my language XP).

Oh! And I actually quite liked the Kyuubi/Orochimaru scene *dreamy faraway look*. When Kyuubi touched his hair I almost melted. Ohhh... it's love *heart heart* I hope Orochimaru doesn't get out again though X[. B*st*rd...

I hate the (necessary) moments of weakness that Sasuke has where he tries to detach himself from Naruto. It pains me, and it kills me, but then the story moves on and I'm left on the edge of my seat (barely and inch from the screen) in anticipation. Oh you're an amazing author. This story is so fantastic XD.

Naruto's stupidity and happiness (and plain dobeness) is so adorable ^^. I swear -- "Makes you wonder what poor Sakura is having to do for her training." -- that line had me cracking a rib, it was so hilarious.

I loved the shower scene *giggles*. Ah, it was so steamy (in more ways than one XP).

Update soon!

ooh, very nice. I love the chapters <3
very great job. I love this story so keep up the good work.
I look forward to your next chapter, I want to know what happens next.
So until next time, je ne!
Fujinakaheero