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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person animejo
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story makes my NaruSasu heart sing. Is there any way I can be alerted when you update? A yahoo group or something?

Can you post on ff.net? Deleting the too-graphic sex scenes o course, which I really enjoyed btw--Sasuke is soooo an uke! Fanfiction.net has an alert system, you see. Plus, you'll get more reviews! ^_^
person ShikamarutoSoccer333
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!You rule so much!This is my first time waiting for a chapter of this so please realease it soon! You are a godess! (Lol were both girls) I so hope Sai tells everybody coming with him EVERYTHING about Naruto because I feel so bad for Naruto having to keep himsels a secret. :-( But anyway you still rule! Ps. Everytime I read your stories I get so hyper and sucked into the story m mom has to shut of the moniter to get my atention :-)
person Avonne
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter, didn't feel like filler at all! More informational if anything. I'm so happy for all your hits and reviews, this story really deserve them as it's great! Can't wait for the next chapter and all that smut you're talking about too. :D
person elict
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. Oh my. There are so many things in these chapters that makes me giggle and feel all warm inside. Like the "food battleground". Lovely choice of expression. And you are not afraid to write about (perfectly normal, but still looked down upon) bodily functions. I admire that you're not tryign to prettify anything.

I hope that they get away from that place soon. Every time they're in any of the Oto's hideouts, my heart's beating like it means to jump out of my chest. I'm terrified of what will happen, really. Even if I know that the boys can take care of themselves ^^'';

As wonderful as always.
person animehead
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter my dear. I loved it. You ability to express so much detail is amazing! It's funny, every time I log on to aff, and I feel like that most authors haven't updated in forever, you always pop up with your next update. LOL Anyway, thanks for that chapter, hell...thanks for the story. You rock! Love, ya? Yeah...I love ya!
person ladygizarme
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whooo yay, i really liked sai's musings and opinion on things in this chapter--that boy amuses me to no end! i can't wait to see how the future confrontations play out! and, hey, no complaints here about you becoming a smutaholic and having it dapple lots of upcoming chapters!! *smirk*

~ lg
person AnA La PaNa83
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fast update there! Me likey. Anyway, so things are intensifying here. I have to say i haven't an inkling as to where this could be going, which is great. So once again Sasuke is a missing-nin. Just what those two needed, sigh. What type of training are Naruto and Sasuke gonna do hmmmm? And when will Sasuke make the first move? I'm still waiting to see when Naruto's gonna teach him to kiss properly. Update soon!
person Allys
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're early :), and don't worry about it even filler can be entertaining :), ja ne! See you Saturday.
person DevilLived
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, the Konoha-nins are on the move!! I can't wait to see what happens when/if they find Naruto and Sasuke.

It's okay to have lots of smut. :D:D No complaints here!

Awesome chapter, anyways. It was cool to see what was going on in Konoha.

Update soon!
person Kim
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay yay yay. Doesn't matter if it's a filler. It's still cool. Can't wait to read the smut-tacular episodes you hinted at. :P What can I say smut is fun... I'm at adultfanfiction for a reason. Anyway. Your stories brilliant with or without smut. If you haven't figured that out by now... wel then you should hurry up and figure it out. :D Keep it coming!