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lmao how is it that you were even able to turn something like THAT into a perverted comment XD way to break the tension there from that whole incident.. even sasuke couldn't help but see the humor lol oh i can only hope sasuke finds out about kyoshiro's attempts at sleep poisoning naruto and takes the whole thing out on HIM. hmm so if that lair has some pretty important stuff going on, i wonder what it is.. i guess if it's plot-important we'll find out ne..

That... was... hilarious. It was very very fun to read. I was grinning the whole way through (apart from the part where that evil guy was plotting to poison Sasuke and Naruto. I was hissing then). I loved how you described the plates after Naruto had eaten lunch. I bet it was quite some battlefield. :D:D

Update soon!

Lol, that was a wonderful chapter. Just what they needed, something to laugh about. Great story, just love it. Keep up the great work, I'll keep my eye out for more from you. Take care.

Hey... Um, your description of Kyuubi in human... esque form, inspired me, do you mind if I draw him out and post him on deviantart? If that's all right with you that is... If so, shoot me an e-mail and we'll talk about it a bit more, I really would like to do it, so ^^'... Anyways, this is an excellent story, please keep posting it, I'm eagerly waiting to see the end!

would you mind if i recommened your story on livejournal? i seriously love your story and i cant stop thinking how IC they are which i know is often really hard to do, and the fact that its narusasu, and theres so little of that around, if its ok to post the link i'll leave my email address so you can get back to me, aditya284@hotmail.com
just want to share your story with all the deprived fangirls out there XD

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"take it bitch" MWAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHhahaha, jeez orichi sure gets wat he deserves....almost feel bad for him!...not quite tho

zomg.

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Holy crap that was intense! I think this, despite its "darker" material, is a nicely constructed chapter. The interaction between orochi and Kyuubi = very interesting and mildly disturbing. Despite the fact that Kyuubi is a yokai and not the nicest fellow, it's curious to ponder how Naruto might affect him.
Is it wronng that I am more concerned about Kyuubi than Orochi-kun? I think, Since Orochimaru is a big fat manipulator, and if Kyuubi is affected in a emotionary way by Naruto, that Orochi-kun would try to utilized that "weakness" in some way. That fathead. That is, if this is headed where I think it is - which it very well may not be (I was genuinely concerned Sauce-cakes was going to molestarioed in a bad touch kinda way).
Thank goodness I was wrong! *whew!*

You're very very tricky! And o-so-intriguing.

Keep it up hotness! *flings cookies into your cage* (n_n)

as i've been unable to get online since just after christmas, i was so excited to find three chapters of this wonderful story waiting for me!! but i'm certainly not liking how orochimaru is conniving to get out of naruto's mind, or rather, kyuubi's cage. dammit, i hate him! and i hope kyuubi's not falling for the bastard!

these three chapters were so good, though! especially how sasuke loses all sense of self when naruto gets into icha, icha mode. i can't wait for the next chapter!!

Oo; KyuuOro... Now there's something that I've never seen coming. There's a part of me-the part that absolutely can't stand Oro-pedo-ecchi-that thinks that the Sannin really has been asking for what Kyuubi did to him as punishment for contemplating doing something similar to Sasuke. There's another part of me that's saying nobody, not even that lecherous pedophile, deserves to be raped. -Sighs- I am at odds with myself, lol. Eto, about that little speculation from Orochimaru about Kyuubi, and said demon's tiny show of affection. Wouldn't it be funny, despite the utter crack-ness of the idea, if Oro and Kyuubi became lovers? I can see it now. "Hi, I'm Uzumaki Naruto. I also happen to be the container of two lovers-the Legendary Snake Sannin, Orochimaru, and Kyuubi no Kitsune! What's your name?" Hahaha! LOL That is so utterly crack. Kudos on this wonderful chapter, btw. I absolutely adored it, and I await the next chapter eagerly!

I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions I have ever read. Ever. My brain has possibly exploded from your genius. I mean, you've kept on par with the manga, but made it your own, and all the while kept them in character. It's just.. amazing. I love the funny bits, too. I love their bickering, I loved the smut, I just love it all. Your writing style is perfect, too. It's all together a wonderful story and I'm very impressed. Please, please for the love of god (and my sanity) do not stop writing this.