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wow i really loved that
i've spent the better part of my day reading the entire thing, when i'm meant to be revising for my exam next week, but it was SO worth it.
you're writing is amazing and i love how IC it is, AND the fact its NaruSasu, theres so little of it out there :(
and smut = one of the best i've read
keep it up!!
XXX

This story is delicious. I can't find any other way to describe it. I stayed up until 2am last night (this morning), reading all 17 chapters and now I can't wait for more. You've really got a style, and a sense of plot that i adore. Plus, the characters are all believable and so very IC. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is growing beautiful in all of its awkward glory, and I can't tell you how exciting it was for me to read Naruto trying the initiate the 'fooling around' with Sasuke. this is the first time I've found Naruto being the first to initiate anything believable, which is great, because Sasuke deserves a little humility and relaxation at the hands of his wonder-blond. hehe. I love what you've done with this fic, all of it, and I can't wait to see where it goes. ^__^ Thanks for an unbelievable read! Ciao for now.

OMFG!!!
In the name that is all things HOT,SWEET, SMEXY!!!
I've been waiting for this chapter. I just thought that it was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wonderful!!
You have their personalities down, I'll give you that. The way Naruto teased and the way Sasuke was...well Sasuke. Mouth watering goodness. THank you for updating!!

Ahhhhh, New Year's smut. I feel soooo much better! I was waiting for this, thank u! It woulda been funny to me if when Sasuke asked Naruto who he'd henged to have sex with and said something like Neji lol. That's me being devious. Anyway, I'm VERY interested in seeing how Naruto plans to teach Sasuke to kiss, VERY interested. Update soon!

omg yay!! the smut!! sooooo yummy, i loved naru's game of ground rules.. heheh and so did Sasuke *smirk* hmm the idea of naruto practicing with clones is hot too XD and of course, jealous sasuke is one of my favorite things, thanks for all the hotness and the giggles at the end ^_^ look forward to the next one!!

I keep reviewing and telling you I love you (maybe I only said that once... I do try to refrain from sounding scary) but once more I have to tell you: I love you!

You are great, legendary and all that matters in this world. So many writers can write really well but completely freak when it gets to the sex, and don't publish to that part. I'm so stoked that you are not one of these people. I'm so so so happy that you wrote this scene. It was brilliant.. and still in character (how the hell do you do that so well?).

Anyway. I'm glad I started my new year with your story to read. Cheers and keep it coming!

Kimra

Awesome smut! Naruto's such a little expert and I'm really glad that Sasuke's the inexperienced one here - he'll definitely open up to Naruto more this way since he'll have new things to learn [and love about the Dobe, it seemed like he was really really enjoying himself!!]. And Naruto and his bunshins were a great touch, that cracked me up. Lovely chapter, can't wait for the next!!

Happy New Year!!!

"Apparently this train of thought had many stop-overs before it reached its destination." <- I LOVED that line! also, love the story so far. can't believe you've left it there tho! dammit effing jeebus crap [& more swearing] I wanna read the next part. oh well, take yer time so it comes out good. 8) hope you had a good xmas and happy new year!

where the duce did the rest of my review go?! [stupid aff.net!!!] k, well I think it went somethign like this: I love the train of thot line. and I love the story so far, but jeebus effing crap dammit [and more swears], why'd you haveta leave it there?! ah well, take yer time, I'm sure it'll come out good! 8) hope you had a good xmas, and have a great new year.

OMG! that was way CUTE, funny too. all together I'd have to say that was the best citrus I've read in a fanfic [well i guess ever since i don't read romance novels] and hell yeah for naruto practicing with his clones...ultimate masturbation. of course the chapter woulda been nothing without the story you've weaved so far. good work as always and keep it up. 8)