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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person DevilLived
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. The ending was hilarious. Awesome job.

Great chapter, I really liked. :D:D:D:D Update soon, okay?
person animehead
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew I loved it. You keep them both so in character it's amazing, and the lemon was to die for! When Naruto called him baby I giggled like a school girl..LOL I'll be wiating for your next update. You are so awesome.
person Lila
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude that has got to be one of the hottest/funniest chapter's of Naru/Sasu i have ever read. I like the way you're writing this very believable and true to the character's. This was a good way to start the day before new years, I like to read Naru/Sasu or Sasu/Naru and to laugh. Your story brought me both thanks :).
person Allys
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! That was ADORABLE, I was a bit sad the sucking never came to pass, but the way you wrote it fit really well, I mean duh it's your story, but still, it was pretty excellent for a first time, actually when I think about it, it was PERFECT. It gives them so much to build on, I can't wait for Naruto to teach the bastard the finer points of kissing and to remind him that he's totally allowed to touch back XD, I love this story, and I love the regular updates, that was an excellent idea, I can't wait for Wednesday!!
person Allys
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wait!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
person KaraQ
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....That was just SO awesome! And Naruto having sex with his clones. Kinda made me go eeeew at first, but when you also said that he turned them into looking like other people it was really great.
So Naruto is the seme? Hmm.. .Normally I don't read too many of those, but I have the feeling that you will even out their 'relationship'. ^^
Great work, and the smut was really tasteful (though still HOT!) as well.
Happy new year! XD

~KaraQ
person Silk
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks like the lemon is about to start! I can't wait! This story is simply awesome =D (Though I'm curious about who's going to be *seme*. Naruto certainly seems aggressive enough, but then again, he was the one who offered and it's usually the ukes who do that... I'm rooting for Sasuke anyways, being the total Sasunaru fan that I am.) Yet, the way you crafted this story, it's a complete mystery who's going to top. I'm betting there's going to be a big struggle over that issue, and the roles will probably switch around =D
person rabid_fangrrl
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“Alright, let the master get to work! I’ll have you moaning the name of Uzumaki Naruto in a matter of seconds!”
’What have I done?’ Sasuke asked himself faintly.


KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Oh ho ho! How exciting it is getting! What HAS SasUke gotten himself into? I am interested to see what type of scrolls he pulls outta the vault. In addition, I am intrigued to how the confrontation w/ Itachi will pan out and conversely the interaction Naruto will have with the shinobi from Konohagaure....
Dun DUN DUUUUH!

Happy Holidizzles!

ps i = rabidicity@hotmail.com
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update, that last chapter got me all frisky.
person makkura arashi
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you cannot stop there!! please don't stop there!!!