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-Jaw drops- How could you end it /there/?! We were finally going to get some Sasuke and Naruto lovin' each other in bed, and you left it off! Well, they were /really/ going to 'love' each other in bed, Sasuke, the stuck-up prick, doesn't 'love' our adorable blond, supposedly, anyway. However, you get what I mean! I will love you forever if you update soon.

You know I've been meaning to read this fic for a while but I admit that each time I see it, I decide to read it later, and then when I see it again I decide to read it later, and so on and so forth. However, now that I have read it, at least what you have so far, I must confess that I am very impressed.

Your use of the language is nothing short of refreshing, reframing from using too many truisms and yet still managing to write in a way so that your readers understand your chapters perfectly. I was very pleasantly surprised at your vocabulary choices as well. I’ve actually had to delve into my own extensive vocabulary in order to remember the meanings of such a scholarly lexis as the one you have employed.

In regards to your plot line, I enjoyed that very much as well. I have not yet come across such a fic and I am very interested in seeing where your creative license takes this twisting design you have come up with.

I would also like to comment on the pace of this fic. The chapters aren’t very long, and so neither is the fic, and yet I feel as if this fic is more in-depth (plot-wise and character-wise) than many other fics that I have had the pleasure of reading. It is my impression that the pace of this fic is perfect for your purposes and I advise you to keep it this way. You have a wonderful style and it is my hope that you do not change it, or question yourself either.

However, it was not my intention to write you a story of your own so I will stop here. My best wishes for you and your writing.


Dryad1789@hotmail.com

Hey! This is the 1st time I've ever reviewed on this website: your fantastic fanfic made me do it! ^__^

Wow!! I really like what you have going here! The situation is simple yet it's opened so many chances for a great plot and lovely smex between two characters which you've really written well. They're really in character and Naruto makes me laugh!

Can't wait until Sunday; why didn't I read this sooner?! What has Sasuke done? Well, he's gonna enjoy Naruto, I hope! I get the feeling that Naruto has some experience in the bedroom area, any reiteration of this in later chapters? Like a few sentences? I'm curious XD

Keep up the great work!

Hahaha! That was great you can just count on Naruto to be a mood breaker. Sorry that this is gonna be short, but I have been traveling all day so I'm really worn out and tired. The chapter was great and I loved the part in the shower, only Naruto would be that absent-minded to not feel Sasuke's eyes on him. But he had it coming anyways. Love the chapter and can not wait till you post the next one! -Kirai

nyahhh stupid sasukes, why doesn't he just admit he loves his naru-chan already >.< bah...well cant wait for update ^_^ yay smut smut smut *jumps up and down excitedly* haha i feel so perverted

Ohh you evil, evil soul! You left us hanging! Why does Sasuke keep deluding himself? He has the hots for our dobe, but maybe the dobe is smarter than him cause he aint afraid to admit that he wants 'stress relief'! I was laughing at how he just came out and said it. I'm sooo anticipating the next chapter. I've been waiting for this one! Tight work. Update soon!

ahahahahaa wheeeee!! ahh the sexual tension just keeps rising and rising, it's so fun to watch, it's almost hard to say which i enjoy better: naruto's antics or sasuke's internal dialogue of denial :p their interaction together is always continuously great, i especially enjoyed naruto's "display" towards sasuke in front of the other guy when they first got to the most recent lair, and of COURSE the shower part!! oh and sasuke's mental box of "all things dobe" lmao nyahaa so great! and now we're finally gonna get down to BUSINESS lol, can't wait to see!! oh sasuke, you're already in deep, you just won't admit it yet :p besides the highly anticipated sex, though, i keep wondering if/when sasuke will find out why naruto doesn't care about going back to konoha. (i imagine eventually they'll run into/be found by konoha nin so will it come out before or during that i wonder..) i can't wait to see how the rest of their adventures together play out!! *huggles the author and story*

~ lg

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGGGGGGGGGGH!! i hope sunday comes soon or otherwise i'm definitely going to die!! I___LOVE___THIS___STORY!! <3

Poor poor Sasuke. I have a feeling he's in pretty deep with this one.

Loved the whole Dobe Box thing. That was funny.

Great job! Happy New Year to you too! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I can not wait until the next chapter is up. You are a big old tease for stopping it there! But I am still addicted and still loyal and will still read when you update (please god make it soon).

This is a short review this time, anticipation has stolen the words from me. But your still a legend!