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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person severedwings
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Grins slyly*...I can see a foxly, sly, grin on his face as he rubs his hands together. LOLOL...nicely done!
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I can't wait for the next chapter! Good job with the pacing, and it's a believable plot. If Sasuke ends up screaming Naruto's name, that's just icing!
person Allys
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! The dobe is soo CUTE!!! Drooling on himself and getting all flustered, KAWAII, and the pounce at the end was even better, AH-DOOR-ABLE! And as soon as Sasuke finishes his sail down that river in Egypt, they'll be adorable together :). I can't wait for the nest chappie - Sunday is now officially my new Favourite day!! Hooray for smut!!! Oh and yes, can't forget: special mention to that shower scene = TEN POINTS!!! Strikes the *nice guy pose* That was HOT!!!
person Avonne
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Chapter 17 is gonna be soooo good!!!! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! :D
person animehead
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe..I loved the last chapter. Hell, I love the whole story. It's great. I can't wait until your next update! You're awesome!!!
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful chapter! i was hoping sasuke would be rescued soon, and naruto's 'acting' at the end... so brilliant and hilarious. sasuke has no idea what he's in for, does he? great work! update soon!
person wempu
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU are a menace to MY sanity because your writing a story like this! :D a great chapter once again, i have nothing to complain about. i just can't wait for the smut to come, i'm sure it'll be worth waiting for ;) merry christmas to you and thanks for updating in time :) see you on thursday ;)
person Allys
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh (bristles) Stupid ANBU Bitch. Get away from Sasuke! Naruto is gonna flip XD. I LOVE this story, it's soo Good, and you have an amazing sense of humour, the entire chappie with the sharp pointy objects and the "messages" in the snow is HILARIOUS!! And then just the concept soo GooD, and your right I love "Forgive Me Cause I Love You" excellent fic one of my favourites. I can't wait for the new update which if your old A/N is still good may be today! SoOO eXcited!! I started reading this last night and couldn't stop I stayed up til 5 am :S.
person Allys
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe Naughty Naruto!! TEN POINTS!!! and YAY, you're AWESOME, you really did update today :D (Does a happy dance). Merry Christmas!!
person not telling
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. This story is so funny^-^ Naruto is going to drive Sasuke insane, flirting with him all the time while they're staying at the base. This is soooo great! Please update soon!!!