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zomg!

This is pretty astounding. I am rapt, do you hear? Rapt! I can barely wait (but I will - I will be ever so patient and good! It's the Promise of a Lifetime!) for the next installment. Things are getting pretty hairy for my favorite little bastard aren't they? OooooooH! That dirty Takako.....not that I wouldn't do the same thing... (O_o)'

Ooh OOh! Is it ok with you if I recc your story on LJ? Yes? OK! I am so excited. I haven't been this excited about a story in a while. I think the last narusasu I got all squeey over was Erisabesu's "everybody's got secrets" on ff.net. It's a real good read - and it is almost complete. Fifteen chappies of goodness. You should check it out! I would be excited to know what you think.

ps - I don't think you have to worry too much about overdoing the details friend. As long as it doesn't bog down your flow, I say get down with the world building! I do enjoy smexy goodness in my stories - but I absolutely love an actual story with a plot. Keep it up smexy beastie!

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ohhh..thsi chapter was so vivid. I could picture Sasuke's face when he had to go pee!...LOL I love it. I'll keep reading, as long as you keep writing!!!

Nice to see that you updated fast! Poor Sasuke, he's being manhandled, i know he doesn't like that knowing his hesitancy to being touched...Oh well, he could stand to learn a little humility lol. There's my sadistic streak. At any rate i hope that Naruto saves him in time. No matter how much of a bastard he is, Sasuke should be reserved for the dobe, dammit! I wonder what'll happen next. Naruto's gonna have to be real sneaky. Update soon!

omg, sasuke was captured! was that furry thing trying to free him a fox perchance? ahahahaha this chapter was great, though i couldn't believe that cloud-nin woman! who is she to touch naruto's sasuke?! damn her! anyway, update soon!

aiyaaa so they seem to have escaped the Sound nins but now sasuke's under arrest and the real naruto's far away *bites nails* gahhhh and that damn woman molesting sasuke!! no one but naru has the right to do that! heheheh :p ahhh anyway, still lovin the story, don't mind the pace--i like plot too, even when i desperately look forward to the actual hookup lol

Zrina,
just a quick note to say I am enjoying your story, "Sound of Dreams," and to give you praise for your writing style. I look forward to the upcoming smutty parts of this tale!

Thanks for writing and sharing,
Booby.

Ah, another interesting chapter. I apologize that I hadn't responded earlier to your note, finals have got me chained down. Anyway, if my story was able to do all that for you, it makes me wonderfully happy. You're welcome and thank you. I dearly do appreciate the fact that my humble little story was able to inspire such a entertaining story and great author. :]

Awesome... just pure Awesomeness! Please update NOW! O_O Its like laaaaaaaate and I'lll have to wake up early, yet I still stayed up all night long reading this... *siigh* This was awesome... Its so beautiful! I mean... YOu dont even have a "OMG NARUTO I LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH" saskue... ANd i just love that! O_O YOu're keeping them so in character... SO real. You have an actual plot! GOSH I LOVE YOU! lmfao. Please dont give up on this flick. :D

Well, it seems that Sasuke will continue being his usual cold self bastard for a while... not that I don't like him that way!
And well, Sasuke was right after all, Naruto had find a way to fuck things up!

(I'll paste this reviw in sections, because it turned out to be quite long :D)
wow. chapter 13 behind and absolutely no smart thoughts in my mind *stops wondering why she started to write this review in the first place* oh well, i might just as well try saying something instructive, now that i came here :D your story just keeps getting better and better, and i have a serious love-hate relationship with your chapter endings :D they just keep pissing me off by being so gawd damn exiting, but at the same time i love them, just for the same reason :D heh. *schizo..*