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*punches you in the face with giant fist of love!*

Don't be afraid - my affection is very volatile. I cannot get over this story! You're interactions between Sasuke and Naruto are so strong! The dialgoue is amazing and so very nicely in character. The tone and their respective voices are very well constructed.

I adored these last 2 chapters SOOooOoOOoOO much. Let me tell you why I love you:
a) the whole peeing in the snow thing. Ridiculous and so very, very EXACTLY what these two would do. *sigh* boys...b) the whole "see-food" thing with Naruto & Sasuke c)the handle-my-large-pointy-thing innuendo...and there was more but I'm addled and it escapes me.

OH! OH! I really enjoy how you are able to toss little surprising tidbits in there to keep things nice and edgy i.e. the whole seal acting up/slitted eye "wtf I thought he was a chew toy" instance. You really had me thinking Orochi-kun was ready to make trouble again. Nice! Uhhhh what else? What else?

Once again, I applaud your pacing. It's perfect. Not all slow like me getting up in the morning, but not too fast as to sacrifice its appeal.

Wonderul job! *licks you*

<3~

I'm still on chapter 5 but I decided to review this story now because it's so worth it. It's been such a long time since I read a good Naruto story that was truly well-written. It was so refreshing for me to find this gem and the only thing spoiling the fun is knowing that it's going to end soon. I still don't know whether this story is complete or not but I hope if it isn't that you would take this review as encouragement and work on continuing it. I'll post a more elaborate review once I've read all the chapters. For now let me say thanks for writing such a great piece of fiction.

Yeah. I didn't notice this was updates until just now. But as usual: Fun fun fun fun! I love this story and the mastery in which you weave it. Keep it up and all that jazz.

OH! i like your story so much! it follows the plot of Naruto! I like your story!!!! (",)

awesome new couple of chapters! i'm so tired right now that i feel i can't review properly but i at least wanted to say i loved them immensely, loved seeing the boy's journey beginning and glimpses of their traveling interactions and how they still manage to easily fall back into their natural bickering/teasing banter (lmao "big pointy objects"); the sharing of blanket for warmth and sasuke's routine of helping naru with his hair is immensely sweet to me. and i'm sure you know how RELIEVED i was that naruto's eyes goin' all oro were only because of borrowing the chakra to make it real *heavy sigh of relief* soooo yeah, look forward to more and glad it's still got a ways to go because i love it so much!!

***oh yeah, no prob on catchin the spelling errors, glad you were cool w/me mentioning them*** ^__^

~ lg

Great! This is great! I love big pointy things... specially when they are being pushed into blonde, blue eyed shinobi...nyan!!! *perverted grin*
Yeah! I hope the snake doesnt try anything nyan... Sasuke is right to worry about that... >.>
<.<..
Update, please?

Oh my gosh the imagery of Naruto with the long hair *drools*
I like the interactions between characters, and I am very
interested to see how Naruto will help Sasuke as he promised
him to help with the avenging...

I am so thirsty for the rest of this story! Please continue!

Ohhhhhh...
So that is what happened!

This chapter (12) was as great as the others...i just can't help loving this story above everything i've ever raid (i mean fanfictions)...I'll be waiting for the 13th chapter to come. it'll be saturday, right? well, anyway...i'm speechless once again. O__O <3

and btw, in my opinion you should update mote often :P something like every other day would be fine :DD ;) <3