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A-h-h, I see... phew, I was worried... *big grin* So-o-o-o, our Naruto is a naughty little devil now, hm-m-m? (and Zrina-san too, I have to add :-)) it was a good idea to insert Sasuke’s burning seal into the picture – that's why I thought it was really Orochi)

*angry* And what about this:

"He never touched me that way," Sasuke added quietly. He didn’t feel it prudent to tell the upset blonde just how close he thought the Sannin had been to that point, however."

Well, that dirty old snake... *gr-r-r-r* Kyuubi, come here boy, take your toy and CHEW him a little more please... and KICK him a few times into the wall while you are at it!!!... and you may repeat the exercise twice a day, that’s what your toy deserves :-))

P.S. Another wonderful chapter... and I feel we are coming closer to the "interesting" part *wink*

Ahh so thats what was going on. Very smart of Naruto using the snake bastard's chakra! Anyway, i liked this chapter. The banter between those two i could read forever in this story. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, always in such denial...what are you gonna do. It's obvious though that you can't stay cold for too long around the dobe. Sasuke's already unconciously doing small things in consideration of him. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Pls update very soon!

i'm sorry i jumped to conclusions in my last review *bows* but i'm certainly glad that snake-bastard didn't return. *swipes brow* oh, it's so obvious they want each other. stupid sasuke being all cold and distant. anyway, great chapter! keep up the great work and update soon!

This is the first time I leave a comment about a story (don’t dare to call it a "review", in my language only the professionals can write a “review” about a book, he-he-he :-)))... not because I am lazy, but English is not my native language and it is quite difficult to write in it. B-u-u-u-t, it is a pleasure to read, especially such wonderful stories as yours here. I just HAD TO write something, to "thank you" for your efforts.

Your story is wonderful and REALLY interesting. At first I thought that Naru-Sasu-Naru part is a bit slow for my taste (he-he *wink*), but later I changed my mind – it is better this way – makes it more believable... I always wondered how the hell "manga-Naruto" is going to bring back Sasuke only with his current training - what, he will beat him to near-death with his new jitsu, drag him "cave-man" style back to Konoha and lock him in a dungeon to prevent another escape??? – NOOOO :-) Well, your version here is interesting and believable (for a "boyxboy love" fangirl like me of course *wink*). I’m glad the story will be long and plee-e-ease finish it – I’m really curious how you will solve the "Itachi and Akatsuki" problem.

P.S. Sasu-Naru exchanges are priceless – the yellow spiral and Uchiwa-fan in the snow, the “big pointy thing” and all ;-)

P.P.S. *whines* - oh, Orochi is back – oh, no-o-o-o everything was going so well for them... please don't forget your impatient "rabid fangirls" here and your Tues/Wed update... or when I finish biting my nails, I’ll start with my fingers (he-he-he *wink*)... phew, I hate that Orochi *angry*

*hugs* no prob!
So Orochimaru is back huh? That bastard just can't stop being a nuissance and die once and for all?
Kuso....

Damn! As i kept reading, i found myself leaning closer and closer to the screen. So Oro is still hanging around? He better not be a cockblocker here, lol. The 'big pointy thing' convo had me laughing. I find myself wondering, what would have happened if Naruto had caught on and hadn't freaked out when Sasuke made that crack. *light bulb goes off in head* You should write another one and actually have Naruto make Sasuke be taken aback. I lurv seeing the teme surpised. Anyway, enjoyed this chap. Update soon!

I KNEW YOU WOULD DO THAT, GODDAMMIT! i hate that snake bastard, i hate him, i hate him, i hate him!!!!!!!! but it was a good chapter nonetheless. ah, i loved the whole sword innuendo scene, but i'm telling you, if naruto doesn't kick kyuubi and orochimaru's asses pretty soon, i'm just gonna have to write a one shot where he does, very bloodily and painfully, to vent my frustration.

keep up the great work, and update soon!

so you are really updating twice a week? :0 tell me it's true, and my life will be saved :DD i'm waiting for the next chapter, please update soon! <3

Oh. My. God.
This is probably one of the best SasuNaru fics I've read in QUITE some time.
I just finished reading all the currently posted chapters in one go.

I absolutely ADORE Sasuke's and Naruto's interactions with one another!
I have yet to see them so in character/perfectly written by anyone.
Especially the latest chapter caught my interest. The whole 'marking in the snow thing' just struck me like something they'd probably do (or perhaps even did) for real. And the 'flirting' is out of this world!
The whole 'pointy things' scenario had me cracking up.
The 'balls' comment oddly reminded me of Sai's obsession with Naruto's genitals XD

I love this fic more then in a platonic love kind of way, but in the 'have my bebbes kind of way' XD
You have officially left me eagerly awaiting for more! X3

Greetz,
Kirikou

nooooo! come on it was getting gooooood!