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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah i love it. great plot, original. can't wait for updates ^_^
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ps. love the ugly bow bit...seems lots of authors have sasuke scoffing at naruto's choice of clothing... so much so that I can't remember if he does it in the actual series....? but yeah, big fugly purple bow? if sasuke's gonna dress like a fag he could at least be one of the fashionable types! hahaha... yeah, outta everyones new costumes [most of them an improvment] sasuke's got the most worst. [kay i know that sentence was awful...if you can even call it that.] k that was my 2 cents on ugly purple bows....sasuke's pant/skirt thing's ugly too...i think....makes him look fat!...which i find hilarious, k maybe the outfit isn't so bad, good for comic releif
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 10 chapters in 2 days, awsome story!!! Brilliant plot, full of action and SasxNaru-ness ;p
Cant wait for more! Please update soon ne? XD
Cant wait for more! Please update soon ne? XD
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
I LOOOOOOOVE this story! Your characterizations are right on and your fight scenes are teh awesome! Sometimes, when I am reading fanfics the authors are unable to convey the speed and detail in fight scene w/o bogging the story down. I am sooo glad you don't appear to have this problem.
I like the sublty taht accompanies SasUke and Naruto's budding (or re-budding?) relationship. I can barely wait for the smex. I hope there will be smex.
Good job! (I have you bookmark-Ed btw). Looking forward to seeing what else develops!
I LOOOOOOOVE this story! Your characterizations are right on and your fight scenes are teh awesome! Sometimes, when I am reading fanfics the authors are unable to convey the speed and detail in fight scene w/o bogging the story down. I am sooo glad you don't appear to have this problem.
I like the sublty taht accompanies SasUke and Naruto's budding (or re-budding?) relationship. I can barely wait for the smex. I hope there will be smex.
Good job! (I have you bookmark-Ed btw). Looking forward to seeing what else develops!
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i just started reading this today and am only on chapter 6 right now but i just wanted to stop and say how much i'm loving it!! the plot is so good and i wasn't expecting the twist of orochimaru possessing naruto, this is awesome; i especially love sasuke's raged reaction to it. and your conspiracy theory about orochimaru's involvement with the kyuubi attack makes a lot of sense, truly! i just wanted to mention though, you have mispelled a couple names. specifically: Akatsuki (you spelled it Ataksuki all times it was used, i believe) and I think you spelled Shukaku wrong also (i may be remembering wrong but i'm pretty sure) just thought you'd like to know.. anyway, back to the story ^_^
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... the damn purple bow. I have to agree... it's a rather 'special' fashion statement. Then again... at least Sasuke doesn't look as shitty as Orochimaru always does. Thank god for small blessings.
Oh yeah. Great again. I can't wait for the next bits. I don't care what you do as long as their's Sasuke and Naruto interaction! Besides your writtings brilliant... I doubt you'll go wrong from here on out. :D
Oh yeah. Great again. I can't wait for the next bits. I don't care what you do as long as their's Sasuke and Naruto interaction! Besides your writtings brilliant... I doubt you'll go wrong from here on out. :D
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! oh *ahem* hi, me again... now back to what i was saying.. kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! omg, so fuckin awesome, i LOVE this story! naruto's take down of sound was awesome, the way sasuke was involved was cool too, soooooooooo much i wanna say that i can't articulate, LOVED the way sasuke drooled over the outfit naruto chose that oro decided to wear defiantly and the way sasu decided he was dobe-sexual (lmao that's cute) and the way sasuke also came to think about how naruto was more of an exhilarating challenge than he'd had his whole time in sound, how they're both dreaming of each other, and i totally squealed at the end of ch. 10 when sasuke fixed naru's hair and told him he was beautiful ^______^ (also when he was cleaning naru up after the rampage through the lair, kyaa)
ummm so yeah, hope you post more soon, i simply can't bear to wait, awesome fucking job
~ lg
ummm so yeah, hope you post more soon, i simply can't bear to wait, awesome fucking job
~ lg
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! just found this story and fell in love! really looking foward to the rest. Me
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT~!
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh... now I get it.
Sasuke's plan is very good!
And I agree with Naruto, stupid horrible purple bows...
Sasuke's plan is very good!
And I agree with Naruto, stupid horrible purple bows...