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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I loved your plot and the way you've executed it so far. You are loyal to the original and maintain your own style. Would you mind to send me an email when you update? And I hope I don't have to wait for long. ^ ^
- ching1
- ching1
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Oro merged with Naruto! You must update soon!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch,that's all I have to say right now
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what an odd and angering turn of events! but, i must say, that was masterfully done. oh, but now naruto has to destroy orochimaru within his own body! that's going to be exciting. and i want to know why kyuubi really attacked konoha! oh, please update soon!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O MY GAWD!!!!!!!!!! That was a bloody brilliant way to end that chapter! I hope you continue soon! Pleaze?
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy jeebus! that last chapter was so exciting! love the action! and you know, THIS IS THE STORY I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR! I totally think this's got major potential I love yer style so far: good structure, good plot, good english, good pace, great characterization. I'm so glad you're writing this, I think I like it so much coz it seems to be like somthing i'd write...thanks goodness you're writing it first I'm sure youll do a way better job, and faster too! also glad you threw sai in there [seems like he disappeared from the manga.] guess he wasn't too popular. I like him tho! prolly coz he's sucha friggin fruitcake! oh man I LOVE your story so far. I do hope you post more soon, coz I'm prolly gonna be obsessed with checking back for updates till you finish it.
love ya for sharing this!
later
-FeatheredEdge
love ya for sharing this!
later
-FeatheredEdge
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK! O.o MORE!
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!! Are you seriuos!!! Tell me y our not! OH MY GOSH!!!!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, thank you! that was the bestest, most suspenseful chapter i've ever read! or that i can remember reading. that's not important. what is is that you wrote such a wonderful chapter, and now i want more! oh please, update soon!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOO oooo ooo, that was great I want to know what happens next. More please this is soooo cool and great!