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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah nice story so far!
I would be very glad if you continue this ^.^
I would be very glad if you continue this ^.^
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!!!!!
I can't beleive you wrote that!
You MUST give us an explanation for that one, do you hear me?
UPDATE!
I can't beleive you wrote that!
You MUST give us an explanation for that one, do you hear me?
UPDATE!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So has Orochimaru taken over Naruto? Is that what that means?! Please please update soon!
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, naruto defects! ... kinda heh heh, good chapter, though the suspense is going to kill me. keep up the good work! can't wait for an update!
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far. I think you've got good insight into the characters.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
guess what? i like it! i can't exactly put my finger on why yet, but i know i definitely do. oh, and i want a sasuke pov of their encounter, if that's at all possible. i can just feel the drama building up...
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool, I applaud you on picking up where the manga is! It's fun to read about it, and you did a great job with Naruto's wind chakra training! All the analysis of what's currently happening was right on, I thought, and all the allusions to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship (as teammates and whatever) makes it seem so... LOL canon! Cuz it is?
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Now, don't miss the beat and let the fangirls climbing up the walls. I can tell this is gonna be a looooooooong fic, with lost and lots of angsty moments. Just like i love them. But, of course, I love more when Naruto is bleeding because he protected Sasuke.
I just love to see the raven suffer a little ecause of his stupidity. (Because you can't tell me he isn't stupid by going to Orochimaru...)
UPDATE SOON!
I just love to see the raven suffer a little ecause of his stupidity. (Because you can't tell me he isn't stupid by going to Orochimaru...)
UPDATE SOON!