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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the sequel. Thanks for all the time and hard work you put into writing this story.
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a truly awesome story and want to know that i really enjoyed it. until the end when you meanted sasuke's semen sample missing. is there going to be another uchiha after all. and he or she is going to be sasuke's kid or have his dna like a clone. i want to say thanks for turning me onto narusasunaru stories i was a hardcore and still am sasunaru fan but you made sasuke have all the same attitudes of a seme so i really found it an entertaining and interesting read. can't wait til the new year for the sequel.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! that bastard has a spy, poor Naruto to be humilated like that when he tries so damned hard to be seen as a true ninja of the leaf, and truly kind caring individual. Sasuke is evil, planning something but then again those old bastards really need to change their ideas a bit. so awsome can't wait to read another chapter please update soon.
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just to spread the Good Words around - This is now put on my Recommended Reading list (yes, it's finally back folks). Because it is Good Reading and I really do Recommend folk to read it. *lol*
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been gone for a while and I come back to THREE chapters of this and I'm all LOVELOVELOVE for you. Hiroki is just too adorable. Everyone's so much in character! I have endless love for this fic.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow it seems that you are not ending anytime soon.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the most amazing story I have ever read. Very novel worthy. I hope to gods you're going to be a writer, it would be a waste otherwise. I wish I didn't have grad school, just so I could keep reading tonight. Gods that was good. The characterization, the plot line, the detail, the flow of consciousness and action is all perfect. GREAT JOB!!!!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AGH! I'm so angry it's not even funny! There better be some form of payback or I'll...get angrier! AKA Write more!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luvd it luvd every minute of reading it. sasuke i luv him and naruto i just want to cuddle to death, hiroki he's just too precious and those damn elders, i wish i knew a fireball jutsu so i could fry their asses but alas i cannot. so you will hav to fufill my wishes lol ^_^
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok official review time XD I really enjoyed this chapter, I thought it was just gonna be more tying up lose ends, but it was excellent, as usual I love the little Hiroki parts "Go give your Nii-san a big kiss and and hug" its so freaking adorable and Naruto is just, hes just brilliant, he always will be my favourite in this fic, despite me going all MY OTP etc, which I do have to grumble about, Kyuubi is in pain, at one point there I thought, "hey it wouldn't be so bad if Kyuubi ripped off Sasuke's head, as long as he feels better afterwards :D" XD!!!
When Naruto took Sasuke's hand just as Neji was gonna remove the next tail, I was jumping all over the place, for me you always keep their relationship fresh and new, but with this underlying stability that they won't ever be seperated :D
I really hated the evil bastard council guy, like seriously hated him, I thought maybe they would manage to get away with it, but no, no the evil council guy had to be all argh :( the meeting was really tense and wonderfully pulled off.
*LOVE*
When Naruto took Sasuke's hand just as Neji was gonna remove the next tail, I was jumping all over the place, for me you always keep their relationship fresh and new, but with this underlying stability that they won't ever be seperated :D
I really hated the evil bastard council guy, like seriously hated him, I thought maybe they would manage to get away with it, but no, no the evil council guy had to be all argh :( the meeting was really tense and wonderfully pulled off.
*LOVE*