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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto! Those elders want to lock up Naruto permanently! I hope something can be done to stop them.
person Kimra
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D Love you!
person Allys
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay really wanna kill the council now. If they used their new big-assed exploding jutsu they could do it all in one shot. No, seriously, it would take what... 10 secs?? Come on Zrina, lovey, baby!! Can we kill the council?? Please? Pretty please?? Sugar and cherries and all that good shit?? *beats head again a pillow*. Thanks so much for the update honey. I missed you terribly on Saturday, but it's all good, this Saturday will just be more exciting. *Muah* seriously take all the time you need. Poor Kyuubi (would hug him, if I didn't think he'd bite my head off). But why's he gotta be mad at Sasuke, well no LOL, scratch that. never mind XD, just by virtue of birth, he's got rights to be mad at Sasuke so... yeah never mind *Hugs u* I feel really bad for the old fox though. he does have his good points, and he's completely lovable in his own way (you write him loveable anyway ;)). Stupid Oro-bastard had to go and fuck up Everything!! There's precious little that he hasn't tainted. And LOL, tiny peak at jealous him ;), poor Hinata. Hiroki just keeps getting more adorable, and ONLY Naruto!! Would tell his child that a little trouble is okay it keeps their 'baby sitter' on his toes XD. *Glomps him and U and huggles for dear life* Thank you so much for the update love, Ja na.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stupid bastards - god I just wanted to strangle them at the way they treated Naruto - after all he's been through he does NOT need that but I'm comforted by the fact that I know that at least the Konoha 11 will back Naruto up - and Hiashi-sama refused to use the Hyuga seal on them so that's something too. Man, this chapter made me feel so sad. They're such bastards *sigh* on a brigher note Hiroki likes Iruka-sensei! that cheered me up and made me go all 'awww' about it and another thing that appeased me were Sasuke's thoughts at the end. *snickers* that's right Sasuke, they won't live forever. It was a great chapter as always and thanks for the update! Can't wait for next week.

Hina xXxx

person Anon
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now, I really HATE the council... f***, why don't they just run away? make some great outlaw group and be happy forever? Argh!
Anyway, there i not much to say but: a very nice chapter!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, they didn't get them all off in time and that jerk of a council member making Naruto show the last tail. Of course the rumor will spread but why does he want to hurt Naruto like that? Sasuke was so pissed I'm sure if they aren't careful something will befall them. Are you sure we are getting to the end of the story? It just keeps building with every chapter!
person kms
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Those council bastards! I loved what Sasuke said at the end! He won't let anything happen to Naruto! I cannot wait to read the next chapter, I love this story! You write so well!
person kms
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Those council bastards! I loved what Sasuke said at the end! He won't let anything happen to Naruto! I cannot wait to read the next chapter, I love this story! You write so well!
person roro237
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very sad to me. I know it had to come but it still sadden me. I do see what the old goat is trying to do:) The added fact that there was a spy. I love it! That's why Zrina #1. It's all the little things that bring life to your stories. I'm going to go read "Not my Lover". I'll see you next week same bat channel same bat time:)
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Tsunade quickly discovers the plant the elder council used to spy on her, perhaps with Kakashi's help. I also hope Sasuke puts whatever plan he has into action a lot sooner than expected. I think the council needs to get what they deserve for their bigotry. They can't seem to differentiate between Naruto and Kyuubi, and because of it, Naruto's suffering will continue. I love this story, can't wait to read what happens next.