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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person DevilLived
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UUgh, that scene with the Elders made me so angry! I'm happy that Sasuke seems to be scheming up one helluva evil plot. (muwhahaha). That was a tension-filled chapter. XD Wonderfully written. Can't wait for the next one!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is some shit, right there. i hate those goddamned elders!!!!!! *pulls hair* i hope sasuke fucking kills them... discreetly... so that he's not killed for doing it.

and omg, kyuubi. that is just an angst puppy waiting for the gate to be left open, damn. i certainly hope that line about him killing sasuke the next time he takes over is just wishful thinking on his part and not foreshadowing, you know?

geez, i suck at all things reviewing. but i love this story so much, just know that. i fucking heart this story. XD i look forward to the next chapter!!
person Kynight
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been thinking about this for a while, I was wondering if you might sell a data CD with the story, once its finished? I really enjoy it and would love to have it anytime, anywhere for reading. I have bought a few stories like that and thought I would ask... thanks for your time, Kynight a.k.a. Babs
person fangirl
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great chapter. You're really wrapping it up...which makes me pout cause I don't want it to end. I have faith in you to give us another 20 or so awesome chapters =) I can't wait for the council meeting! Poor Naruto, losing the tails = bad bad hurt. I hope the rest of the changing him back goes smoother. I just love Hiroki so much, he's so perfect. You've made some wonderful original characters.
I'm not sure if I just missed it in later chapters, but in the boys' first shower scene, Sasuke noticed the crystal necklace of Naruto's but didn't ask about it. Does Naruto still have/wear it? Did he ever tell Sasuke where he got it? That would make for a great conversation.
person Gwyllion
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! Naruto!!! I hope he'll be alright. Another excellent chappie. Can't wait for more. Thanks so much for sharing! :D
person littleolmee
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waah, Naruto! Oh no just as things are looking up what is going on? Liked that Tsunade is trying to help them by giving them a new apartment. I just wonder if Sasuke will really be able to work around those restrictions. Like Iruka pointed out Naruto often just pulls people in certainly even if he is trying to 'hide' it he won't completely from those who are his friends and it will just work out from there. . . *hoping* I think Iruka will once again have a small boy causing mischief in his class again; and have another thing to be connected with Naruto with. Well sitting on pin and needles waiting for the next installment *don't worry I put a pillow down first so it doesn't hurt, I'll patiently await the next installment* Take care.

person lonelylulaby
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness poor Naruto. That last scene about the tail sounded horrendous. If it was going to go like that I would have found a way to hide those tails. Wonder if the fox lost something, when the wires were cut, too. Why does he scream? *Runs from the room and hide behind door* I hope nothing to crazy happens. Darn Ren get up and help Naruto get out of this mess.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto!! Looks like the tails are going to be a bitch to get rid of. And that was only one tail! Kyuubi sounds pissed.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no - O_O is Naruto okay? He'll be okay he will >.< - okay let me skip away from that before I make myself panic lol. Iruka-sensei! He always cheers me up ^_^ he's perceptive and he judged the situation pretty accurately, he's also someone else who probably would do his best not to let anything happen to Naruto. I kind of slumped when Sasame said she couldn't do anything to help, I was hoping she would *sigh* but it'll work out - heh Tsunade placed them in the same apartment and Sasuke's already getting ideas - but I'm a little anxious as to how the meeting with the Council is going to go for them *fingers crossed* I hope everything go's okay.

Thanks for the update! It was great I didn't get confused or anything with the changes of p.o.v. you warned about, it's all good. I shall await next Tuesday XD

Hina xXxx
person Kimra
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bah. not short... but... not long enough. :D I'm a word whore, I need more! :D

I await, as always, your next update on anything you feel like writing. :D (but this inparticular since it's so close to the end).

Kimra