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Argh! No, not now! Why must it end now?
one week... I don't want to wait one hell-ish week for update! You're so mean...
But a nice chapter! Keep it up!

Awwww, you are a sadist. How could you top where you did on chapter 71?
Now I have to wait a whole week! What torture!
I really enjoy this work. ANd each week it just gets better and better. Well thought out and very well written. Kudos to you Zrina!!!

LOVED IT! Can't wait for more! You always leave me reeling with your cliffhangers!

ZRINA! WAH! I’m sorry!!! (mum issues)

I LOVE the chapter, with all the different POVs

this time all my favourite bits included parts with Sasuke

him brushing off Sakura

the hugging Hiroki part and looking stoic at the same time XD!!!

oh and Iruka! Usually I’m not a huge fan of him, (other than when he’s in the abridged series XD) but I really liked him here, you got him perfectly :D

and then you went cliffhangery again *shakes head* you’re an addict!


*LOVE*

Hey sweetie, yet another wonderful chappie. The first thing I want to say is that it didn't seem disjointed at all. It flowed really nicely. I liked the little look we got into Iruka's head. He's so smart *gives Iruka a cookie* and Naruto's reaction when he asked about Sasuke's 'punishment' was adorable *huggles him and you* And Sasuke being all Daddy-full pwns! *melts into happy mushy fangirly puddle*. LOL, not to mention now you have me wanting them to have sex in Naruto's soul XD. Not only is the entire concept hella kinky, but there's really no way you can closer than that is there?? LOL, only problem will be the giant spectator XD, but LOL, that only makes it more kinky XD. You do realise though that you set us up for disaster in this chapter. A couple paragraphs after Iruka says he doesn't think Naruto would do too well in a secret relationship that's exactly what Tsunade requests. Not to mention the actual, more immediate disaster from seemingly hurting or at the very list pissing off the fox. I'm always excited to see where this is gonna LOL, even now when it's winding up. I'm so totally supporting a sequel right now (not that I wasn't before :)) But now it's easier to see what you meant. *hugs u* Take all the time you want though *loves*.

Ouch ><

I don't know why, but haha I really want some Sakura-bitchiness/jealousy/trying to make sasuke seee that "she's" the one for him/confrontation hahahaha. (I don't like Sakura very much haha)

The only confort for me in regards to the elders is that Sasuke and Naruto are powerful, so if they want to lock Naruto away, I know Sasuke is gonna take him and run away from the village,. Hopefully. I don't like the elders. Gar/

This was great as always! The fan art was smex to. The way you have Sasuke with the boy just warms my heart. His love for Naruto is *oh* so smex. Like soon as he enter his mind he was on him:)! You have once again filled my mind with happy smex thoughs for the week:)

poor naruto more pain. Liked the chapter wished there would be more. But I can wait! Thanks for the chapter! : D

poor naru-chan!!! i hope things work out for the best in the end. update again soon!!

I really love Hiroki, it's just so unbearably cute and funny when he call Naruto, Mommy! it's really awsome story you have here at. I hope you will continue to update and write more.