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Hiroki is just so cute!!! I love how he understands things! The part with him playing with Naruto's tails and then Naruto swatting him with one of them was very funny. I loved the part where Sasuke let Sakura know that she had no chance with him and that he had really chosen Naruto. I also love how Sasuke couldn't say no to Hiroki after Naruto told the kid to cry. :D

... it's rare that I ever read a story this long. You have the characterizations down so well though... if it weren't a semi-family show... I would almost think it could run like this. It's great and I'm looking forward to reading more!

Aww clever Sasuke, should have known he'd find a way around the crazy council's mandates. Horray for more chapters, cant wait to see more of the "dysfunctional" family :)

I just read nine chapters all in one sitting, I've just finally found the time to get back to your wonderful story!

Think my favourite line out of all of the nine chapters was:
“What? Never heard of a ninja turtle before?”

I swear I cracked up!

I just want you to know that I've had an incredibly wonderful time reading this story, and I can't wait until the next chapter.

Wow oh wow! I love this story I couldnt stop reading it! Please keep updating :D

*yawn*i m o irn*yawn* o my god i stayed up all night reading this i started reading this at 10;00pm and stoped at 4;00 i had to keep drinking coffee all night to stayay up so i had to keep stoping every now and then to make coffee and i ad to be at work at 7;00am this mornin i so almost died buuuuuuut it was so worth it to read this fic yes i read it all the way through now i will go die keep up the wonderful writing *falls over and starts twitching* =)

I really love your story! all the trials and struggles they're handling fairly well... you gonna do like others and have naru-nii-chan 'mother' the Uchiha heir? can you picture everyone dealing with him staying in the sexy-jutsu long enough to get pregnant and carry to term??

Ah so wonderful. I was glad to see Tsunade allow Sasuke to help, a little disturbed at the thought that went through my mind on where that thread he first started pulling on was located at though; especially for Hinate to blush about it but, then again she blushes when recognized for something she does. Of course Sasuke would be wondering if the Naruto's tongue was fixed; heck he hadn't gotten to try it out yet better be getting it while the getting is good. Naruto makes such a good mommy! Good for Sasuke, it seems some of what Kakashi taught him about how to do things sunk in; see what is underneath. I just wonder what the elders would say if they saw Naruto in his current state and what they would think about Sasuke, Naruto, and Hiroki living together as a family; especially with the boy calling Naruto mommy? Is there going to be problems with Hiroki staying with them? How will he be accepted? I know it's getting close to the end, I'm going to miss this story so much. Guess that means you'll just have to write another one right? Cause you know after such a great story as this no one is going to leave you alone! *pokes Zrina* "Hey Zrina, Zrina, Zrina-san, ZZZrina-san. . . Hello!" Yes that will be me! Lol! Take care and thanks for the update.

Chapter 69 and no smut?

Nah that wasn't really what I was thinking, it just occured to me randomly there and I felt the need to write it in. :D

I love their little dysfunctional family. It's so cute. You actually managed, despite the odds, to introduce a child character and have me like it! I'm in awe. That kind of skill is nearly impossible to find or achieve.

Anyway. Readinging and waiting as always. :D

so sweet and fluffy at the end. I loved it.