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Awww, this chapter was the sweetest yet. I just love how Hiroki fits into Naruto and Sasuke's little family. He's so cute.

Can't wait till the next chapter- though I still can't believe that you're almost done! Wow...

Wonderful work!

Wonderful chapter!! I'm glad Naruto has his own face back again! It was sweet how Hiroki and Sasuke got to be with Naruto when he was being worked on and how Sasuke was able to help fix him faster. It was also sweet how Hiroki and Sasuke both got to stay the night in Naruto's room. I just love the family of Naruto, Sasuke and Hiroki! I'm glad that Sasuke found loopholes in the punishment for him and that he shouldn't have to actually have sex to have children. Having a surrogate mother (or even more than one of them) would revive the clan and allow Naruto and Sasuke to still be together as a couple. :)

Aww I loved this chapter!!! Loved it - loads of hearts for you ^_^ and go Hinata-chan ^_6 - when Hiroki cried out 'Mommy' before launching himself at Naruto I snickered loool that's Sai's work right there heh. And Sasuke bless - I love when Sasuke has his sweet moments, they're so rare so when they come round it makes them that much better - the marriage thing *melts into a puddle* really great chapter as always - can't wait for next Tuesday ^_6!!!

Hina xXxx

p.s. well done Sasuke for finding every damn possible loophole in the Council's sentence

Chapter 69! lol where beta said you should end *snickers*

This chapter left me so happy, it had WAFF! *smexes you* Ah! you hold the keys to my heart! *goes into romeo mode*

I still love your Tsunade, I would so do her XD shes smexy when shes angry, and even smexier when making sharp comments at Sasuke :D I was just rereading what Sasuke said to her about her absence, I was still half expecting a full out Sannin Vs Pretty boy fight XD

OK HIROKI!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! LITTLE BUNDLE OF FREAKING CUTENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so adorable, I can't believe I went nuts over a little kid and his cuteness. How he is with Sasuke and then with Naruto and then with Sasuke again, giving him a kiss on the cheek before bed *wibbles*

lol oh and the whole "flirting" thing, the talk about Naruto's face *dies* your humor is love, and should be smexed :D

How Sasuke managed to start untangling Naruto's and the demons chakra threads is so damn cool O_O I was reading it, and the pages just flew by, and then when I'd finished it didn't even occur to me there wasn't even any yaoi! XD though the kiss was nice :D:D:D

I'm gonna go back to loving you for creating Hiroki, such cuteness, O_O what have you done to me? *shakes head* must concentrate on hardcore yaoi! BUT HIROKI IS SO CUTE, especially with Naruto and with Sasuke, ah! they're all so cute together!!!!! *adores*

I want to see what you do about this marriage thing XD the fangirls are all gonna be in uproar.

Loved the entire chapter, even the little mention of Shino :D:D:D

I can already see Sasuke giving feedback on why girls suggested as wives are out of the question. Too soft, not motherly, to stupid, not Shinobi, Kuniochi ect. FUN!!

omg, yes. when you had sasuke retort about tsunade and jiraiya not being in the village for whatever amount of years, i had a frickin' party in my head. finally. someone threw that in her face. seriously.

and how sweet that sasuke wants to marry naruto!!! XD i am so excited about this!! wonderful chapter, especially with hiroki and them being a family, and sasuke's reaction to that realization... masterful! i can't wait for the next chapter, love!!!!!

=D

I am so much happier right now than last time, with that cliffhanger. xD Yay~! Naruto and Sasuke are gonna stay together~! And have a family aww~! NO OTHER WOMAN IS GONNA INTERFERE. NARUTO AND SASUKE MUST GET MARRIED DAMNIT.

Stupid Tsunade. I understand where she's coming from, but like Sasuke said, she's being a hypocrite.

^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter~! w00t~!

YAY! Best chapter EVER! I think my favourite line was "Promising himself to teach the little boy about dignity very soon, Sasuke reached down and lifted the tyke up to settle him on his hip." I definitely laughed out loud at that.

This is also one of the only stories I've read where Shino is a 3-D person. He's a hard character to write sometimes but you pull it off really well. Awesome job!

this is why you are my role model!!!!!!!

i loved this chapter so much! it made my heart swell. they're going to get married...eventually. lol it's so great. oh and this


“Hey!” he suddenly chirped up. “What if I want to ask you to marry me instead? After all, I’m the ma-”

“If you finish that sentence, you won’t be able to make the claim for long,” Sasuke suddenly snarled.


pawns ALL! god i love the way you write these two. the whole fic has made me love it and it would make an awesome book. and i am proud to admit that i snickered when i read Chapter "69". lol

i so don't know what i want to say. i loved how protective they are over their newly built family. it's so sweet. i'm in fangirl heaven right now. *loves on you forever*

OK! So Sasuke wants to make this work? I somehow can not believe, the council will be happy about Sasuke and Naruto marrying... And what about the kid? will it be Sasukes AND Narutos? Because you write midwife...
Argh! I would have been better, if Sasue and Naruto would run away from Konohe to start a new life... Maybe in a sequel? *grin-of-hell(C)*
See you around!