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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person Allys
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM

*Screams at Sasuke* "Take the chance Sugar!!! Nothing really good is ever without risk." *Glomps Zrina* Family XD. I love that you used my argument!! *Huggles u* We think alike ne? Great minds and all that good shit. I love this chapter XD. It's was sweet and funny in a way this story hasn't been in a while. Not that exciting and heart wrenching wasn't amazing! But LOL, sweet, funny and just good are most definitely welcome. Hiroki was a love in this, he was behaving like a child. A really sweet small child, instead of a mini adult. It was good :), teary type good where you're just so thankful for small mercies, like a child being able to be a child. And Naruto's well on his way to normal again. Thank you! Lots to give thanks for here. God I need to go!!, I'm so late for work I'll be there until 8 pm tonight, but it's okay. This was worth it. *loves you* There's a lot more I want to say but I have to run. Thank you again ♥
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww so kawaii!! hmm you know i think hinata or sakura would be more than willing to carry the kids lol. maybe both can be pregnant together ^__^ hinata pregnant with naruto's kid and sakura with sasuke's kid hahaha that would be hilarious!! update again soon!!
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chap. The one thin gi love most was your use of Chichi. That's actually what my family calls my dad. Anyway nice to see that Sasuke and Naruto have a plan. I think they'll make a great family.
person nawatia
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Fabulous chapter!!! Smooth writing, easy to read. Hiroki is such a sweet little character!
person Avonne
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that part with Hiroki, Sasuke, and Naruto was just too perfect! It was so good to see the little family back together again, however dysfunctional they may be. :D

Also, I really loved the Sasuke admitting that he's gonna ask Naruto to marry him, that scene in my head just played out so well and in-character. Man, do I love this story!! :D

I know you said that you've given up on guesstimating the ending (hehehe, you've been doing that for about 20 chapters now!!), but is there going to be an epilogue to this? Also, is Blackmail and Betrayal going to be your only writing project after this, or do you have any more Naruto/Sasuke fanfiction ideas swimming around? You're justsuch a great and reliable author that I'd hate to see you go away!! *chains you to her wrist* <3333333333333
person roro237
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(with a very warm smile) Zrina...I absolutely loved it:) I was wondering all week(Tue to Tue) how the boys could stay together. And BAMB! (Loopholes) I didn't take that into account. Ok! I think it's time for me to sing "Zrina number #1 Zrina number #1" I'm singing that while spenting around in my compute chair:)
person Gwyllion
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lordy.....I was cooing and squeeing over Naruto playfulness with lil Hiroki! That was the cutest part I have ever read. Naruto would def make a good father figure. I also hope that Sasuke will find a way to revive his clan without causing further problems with his beloved. So far, I'm enjoying this fic immensely! Tahnk yous o much for sharing! :D
person kynight
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa, that last one got me! Married! Kids! could it be, Mpreg? mmm......... what are you planning? interesting, I will keep reading....... good story and very well written.
person T
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I truly have no words to even begin to describe what a wonderful and gripping fanfic you have written. I really don't! lol


Um...a little silly but...Oiroke no jutsu? lol
person DevilLived
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! At first I was thinking that their punishments weren't that bad, but then it just got worse. What are Naruto and Sasuke going to do about the heir?!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Wonderful job!