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I think sound is looking mighty nice right about now. It's the last stipulation that is the kicker. It's crap. Unless i see mpreg in the future.... Please god say sakura doesn't give birth to the next Uchiha...even if it is through artificial insemination. Anyone but Sakura. Best thing. they run off together and be happy. yes yes. its good that way. so naruto is screwed for a year. Sasuke for life as long as he stays there. I can't believe that Sasuke has to pay for Itachi's evilness. They don't even want him to have bastard children..no they have to be married. in the words of my adorable nephew "yuck-tooo" Sasuke can't marry some random girl!!! He can only marry naruto! Not even a marriage of convenience is good. AH! What are you going to do???

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::gapes some more:: AArgh!!! omigosh, just when i think the gut twists are over, you twist my guts some more!!!! and i'm working on the picture for you!!! hopefully it will be done soooon. it's a race against time!!! the story is almost finished, isnt it? ::big tears:: i think the picture is turning out nicely so far... i am still rather stumped by the snout thingy, haha. but my Rock-Lee-like love for this fic will allow me to endure! <3 x 1,000,000!

oh, since you mentioned revisions, a typo this chapter: "It was a physical manifestation of the power that lied within the dobe and Sasuke had always found power attractive.." 'lied' should be 'lay'. lay is the past tense of lie, as in to recline/rest. lied is the past tense of lie, as in to tell a falsehood. :)

::starts laughing really hard:: okay, not that i'd expect you to--or want you to, ew--because mpreg is retarded and absolutely ridiculous, but i just thought i'd point out that you have a once-in-a-lifetime Golden Moment here: to actually put mpreg into the realm of respectable fiction. ::gasp:: as in, you could knock naruto up, and there would be nothing bad i could say about it, since your story is so tightly told and seriously executed as a work of literature, i could only assume that you would make the mpreg work, too. HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAH

OH GOD...WHAT ANOTHER EXCELLENT READ!!! But the last part gave me the "oh crap!" face. Awww....I hope they can find a way to fix the 'revive the uchiha clan' problem. Naruto must be preggers!! Yes! I can't wait to read your next post. Thank you so much for sharing! :D

Wow, I'm not sure where to begin. I first started reading this ages ago, back when there were only about 30 chapters to it, and eventually checking for updates slipped my mind as is prone to happening as my bookmark list expands. I randomly wandered by only a few days ago to find that the story had doubled in length and happily dove in! A few nights of forfeiting sleep and staying up until well past 5am to read, and here I am, all caught up.

The plot has been interesting all along, and I've enjoyed the characterization a lot, although I always did prefer Sasuke cold and in denial, and Naruto chasing after him and trying to convince him of his own beliefs. Although I can't stand the canon Sai, I absolutely love your Sai and his interactions with everyone. He is, without a doubt, the funniest character in the story (and it helps that in this story he doesn't pose any real threat as Sasuke's replacement and all). It just feels like he's advanced a bit beyond where he's at in canon, which is a good thing, and I'd like to see that sort of progression with him.

Oh wow, I was originally going to say that the saddest and most alarming part of the story was back when Sasuke first realized that he had Naruto's eyes, that he had lost the two most important parts of himself - his eyes and Naruto - and was left with a constant reminder of what he had lost. But then Tsunade had to throw all these punishments onto him. I mean, I suppose it's workable; he could, erm, create an heir and then run back to Naruto and there's not a whole lot anyone could do to stop him. But I can't imagine either of them would settle for that, so I suspect they'll be running off or somehow proving themselves to the council instead. Or maybe both.

I'm not sure how to feel about furry!Naruto though, that's a bit disconcerting. I do hope they get him all fixed up in the end. And I think I'd be very sad if Sasuke lost his curse seal; somewhere along the line it's become a part of him.

I can't wait to see how everything turns out!

WOW.... I bet everyone is thinking that Sasuke is going to blow up at that idea(Im sure he will though).... But I cant wait until that sinks into Naruto..... The explosion is going to be MASSIVE. That someone would DARE try to take away HIS mate(hehe this otta get interesting.... VERY interesting*insert evil snicker*)Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

-shakes computer monitor- NOOOOOO!!!!

T-T Horrible cliff hanger!!!!

uh oh i wonder what they will do to gain an heir!! i do hope they find a way for naruto to give sasuke the heir needed. update again soon!! i hope things will turn out alright in the end.

why why sasuke! why does everyone have to force sasuke to have kids!

Oh boy! Well I don't see Sasuke or Naruto agreeing with the last part especially! I wonder how they will get out of this?