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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
WTF? That is NO option! Go Naruto, Sasuke run for your happy little family!!!!

*gasp* the council should really drop dead the old farts. dude, i've always wondered about them and why they're always so sour, the third wasn't like that. but besides that and the killer cliffhanger you left *banging forehead to desk table* i had a good hearty laugh with neji's message: "the farmer is going back to the hen house, get the chicken away from the fox" PURE HILARITY! loved it, just loved it sooooo much. the smut was reallu nice too mmm-mmmm! looking foward to the next update.

I knew it would be something like that! Damn council! I hope that they leave, even if they could live with the other stipulations- which I don't think they should- Sasuke won't marry anyone except Naruto! They really have to leave! I cannot wait to read the next chapter!

Oh, evil, death and destruction is sure to follow. Can't wait.

Oh my god! This chapter had so much to offer. The smexy-ness was oh so hot(mmm). The convulsions and the one unspeakable thing "The Heir". Zarina, I'm thinking about missing work next week to be here when you posted:) This is getting to good. Are you still thinking about ending this in 70?( tears falling as I ask that) Even though I am enjoying Blackmail and Betrayal very much. I have read and reread Not my lover about 8 times:) I love it! This story has just been so wonderful It's like saying goodbye to an old friend:) But hey as long as you keep writting stories I'll be a very happy reader.:)

oh, holy shit, NOOOO!!! i mean, i knew that was coming, but noooooooo!! ohh some shit's gonna go down now! it's one thing to put ninja restrictions on them (though still shitty, even if it's also understandable from a "best interests of the village" perspective), but forcing sasuke into a marriage and away from naruto?!! no fuckin way man... omg.. ack, i still am so in love with the story and lament not being around for EVERY update lately (even though i eventually do catch up ^_~) and you're still doing an awesome job, keeping the plot going at a good intensity and full of suspense, and HOTNESS! of course, can't forget that!!!! omg i think i've told you before how much i love naruto fucking sasuke's mouth and sasuke gettin' off on naruto being rough in that way, and the hair/head pulling, etc... yeah? just to reiterate: IT'S FUCKING HOT!! and ohhh, i know some shit's gonna go down now that they've heard what the council decided, but i share sasuke's hope that he gets a bj before naruto's appearance is changed back!!!!! (yknow... idk how i feel about the whole sort-of-muzzle thing, though it's cool sasuke don't mind, but i wouldn't mind the tails and tongue stickin' around >.> )

&hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts !!!!!
~ lg

...or we could just kill the council? I like that idea. ;) You always get me so worked up! Can't wait for more!

oh you are so mean! a part of me loves but i fell bad for them. if narto cant have his babys can they at least get married? PLEASE!

Damn Zrina you really are out to keep it less than 70 aren’t you? -__- almost 5000 words O_O!!!!

the fluff, omg the fluff, its so cute, Naruto crawling into Sasuke’s lap, omg, the adorableness will kill me, so damn sweet. Sasuke wanting to leave and take Hiroki and make them a little family, even though he’s such an ass half the time, there are times like this, that I completely and utterly forgive him and love him as much as Naruto, and then I remember that you don’t write the anime, and I die a little inside. XD

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice kissing, I’m such a sucker for it, and the whole dodging the fangs thing XD *snickers* THERE IS ALWAYS TIME FOR A QUICKY NARUTO you should learn not to ask, and just ram into the bastard *nods wisely*

erm ok, I’m just as surprised as Naruto with the smex, you just brought that one out on me!!!!!!!!!! now shush, its zrina-smut time :D:D:D holy fucking cow. Naruto fucking Sasuke’s mouth, and Sasuke encouraging it… holy mother of god. Fuck fuck fuck fuck. And the necklace detail. God. OH MY FUCKING GOD.

A CUM SHOT. A CUM SHOT ON SASUKE’S FACE. Are you trying to kill me woman? YOU WROTE ANOTHER FREAKING CUM SHOT ON SASUKE’S FACE. damn. god. wow. I cannot express how unbelievably hot I find that image.

lol and Sasuke wanting a BJ with the rough tongue, the dirty boy!! WAH I LOVE YOU HARDCORE! yes, I realise you’ve been quickly backing away from the computer and looking for escape routes *clings* but surprise!smex is the BEST THING EVER.

I’m never gonna get tired of reading about Sasuke doing Naruto’s hair scenes, there’s something therapeutic about reading them, as if all is right with the world XD

Naruto’s punishment is so harsh -__- he’s gonna have a baby about it, *nudges you* have I told you how much I would love it if you wrote MPreg? *snickers* ok I’ll stop giving the other fangirls ideas XD

You know, I knew it was coming, how many times have you told me about what’s gonna happen? And I was like “yeah that sounds fair enough, sounds believable” and yet, THE CLIFFHANGER STILL GOT ME. wth?! how how how is that possible?! HOW?! now imagine how the other fangirls feel, they never even got any warnings, you are a cruel woman Zrina XD!!!

I can’t scream at you because it’s for the sake of plot, and because my brain is telling me that I already knew, so why is it such a shock to my system when you wrote it? -___-

WONDERFUL chapter (as I have come to expect from you *snickers*) you knock the fangirls dead *nods*

OMG.................... no those council-bastards can't do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!