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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person Kimra
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your so mean. Your gonna drag it out to the end. I'll die from the anticipation of an ending long before an ending is forthcoming. this is actually fine. I don't mind because it's a great story and I love reading it. Bah. I look forward to your next update. :D
person Dragon7
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO Sasuke can't get married and have a baby with some bitch. The only person he can have a baby with is Naruto. Is this going to be a Mpreg? If so then PLEASE let this be a SASUKE mpregs story because their are not to many of them out there and their are way to many Naruto mpregs stories. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is a horrible place to stop and i hate you.

j/k but, my god, did tsunade really think she could drop that bombshell and not be in danger!? i mean, she may believe that naruto would stop anything sasuke would do, but she's not realizes that naruto is part fox now, and will have the instinct to protect and stay with his *mate* at all times. whatever. she makes me mad... well, i guess i can't blame her when it's the council's decision, but dammit! couldn't she put her foot down or something? she's the hokage, for fuck's sake. you know, "the strongest shinobi in konoha"?

i also find it interesting that the council didn't say anything about sasuke's revenge against itachi. i mean, yeah, he can't leave the village without an escort ever, but they can't honestly think anyone can stop him when he really wants something. urgh!!!!! i am so frustrated!!

and i totally just realized that that's not a review at all, but i have to vent, i just have to. but it's such a great chapter, and i kinda want to read about that BJ with the new, rougher tongue. >___> wanna slip that in there, ne? heh heh... but i feel for them so strongly (as one can probably guess), and i want them away from that damn village ASAP. konoha's not their home. not anymore.
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its getting good, i mean them council people are harsh but that last equirement, i dunno sasuke and naruto just might make a get away wit hiroki. hope things work out for them and great job wit this story. its really good
person Allys
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o Oh God Zrina honey, In the beginning you were killing me!! I had no idea whether to be killing myself laughing or fricking upset XD. By the middle I was reassured and completely drowning in sweetness. Domesticity and smut XD, what could be better (um a *cou-Quickie-gh*) LOL *Glomps you* you re-enacted one of my all time favourite smut scenes so I definitely am NOT complaining XD.

But Zrina ;_;, Zrina!!!! WTF!!! That ending... Oh gods... HELL NOOOOOO!!!! They have got to be out of their Collective Fucking MINDS!! Can't they just do the artificial insemination thing!!! Do they want those two to mutiny!! What am I asking??!! OF COURSE THEY DO!! They have NO idea wtf they're in for, Stupid BASTARDS!! God bastard is too good a word!! I could accept ALL the other stipulations, ALL of them, but NOT that last one!! *seethes*

Hmmn, I read it over, it's not so bad. There are loop holes. He can get married to Naruto and then try the artificial insemination thing XD. Okay I'm good now. LOL. *Huggles and Squishes* Tsunade will have to help them, for the good and safety of the village, it's the only reasonable outcome. Unless of course they up and get the fuck out of there. I'd be happy with that outcome too! Thank you so much for the update sweety *loves u*.
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shrieks* NOOOO!!!!! Oh my gods! How could they be so mean!!!!

Update soon please...this can't be kept this way!
person hina88
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O Oh my OMG omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg BASTARDS O_O
I hate the council so much - you have no idea how much I want to hurt the right now HOW COULD THEY!!!

okay breathe - let's breathe and calm down *breathes in* o-kay... I can deal with this... I can deal with this... F*** THAT! I HATE THEM AND I HOPE THEY SUFFER!!!!

Okay - now that I've gotten that off my chest, brilliant chapter as always - even if it made me a tad homicidal but hey, that's a testament to how good you are ^_6 but as I have always said, I have faith in you, you'll make things better for them right? Otherwise you'll make me cry :( but heh thanks for the update

Hina xXxx

p.s. I hate the council
person Avonne
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that last little bit there was quite a shocker. Poor Sasuke and Naruto!! I think that the consequences are quite fair for the two of them until the last tidbit was added for Sasuke...That's going to tear the two of them a part. :(((

Mpreg, anyone? :D
person bluesake
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that was a joke...you must be joking....don't make him marry someone...nooooo what are they gonna do..
person Lila
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Boy...Things are about to get really really really violent around Konoha...The council is about to get their butts handed to them (literally)..Tsunade better watch out and start heading for that door real soon...Unless you got a magic wand to make it All go away this story could last for more than seventy chapter's easy...(claps hands together and prays feverishly).. Anyway another freaking awesome chapter can't wait till Tuesday (glares at the now starting college classes) I'll definitely make time to read Believe it!