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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why is it, that the council never ceases to piss me off? i think naruto and sasuke should just run away. i mean, "devastate"? what the hell is tsunade thinking? so they'll still be alive, big whoop. if it'll "devastate" them, i'm sure they'd rather be dead.

anyway, wonderful chapter! confidentially, i was hoping naruto would top and it be all wild and animal-like, but it was great regardless. ^__^ and i hope ren can reverse the effects of the threads, 'cause that'll help naruto's case a little, at least. though, i would seriously just unleash manda on the council. can't mete out punishments if you're dead, old geezers!!

and thank you. i was so stressed yesterday and work was so hectic today, that to see your update made me so indescribably happy. i look forward to the next chapter!!!
person littleolmee
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter as always. Of course someone had to watch Sasuke and Naruto, glad to see Neji got the prize. Those eyes of the Hyuugi can be a blessing and a curse at times it seems. Now how did the council know so much? Just who is feeding these people? Will Tsunade find out? Hmm will be an interesting blood part to read if she does. Hopefully she can help the old man and in turn in can help Naruto. Does the council know about Sasuke and Naruto's relationship? Hee, hee too bad they didn't walk in on that little display they had earlier.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! BTW, smutacular sex scene there. I wondered how Sasuke was gonna make do with those tails. The humor definitely smoothed it out. Oh, the love and the smex! Great chap!
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Awesome as always! I really like it!!!
Also I have another picture in mind for you . . . I'll probably e-mail it later today if I can finish the lines.
person fangirl
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The transition from the last chapter to this one felt a little choppy, and seeing as I haven't noticed a single loose end in your story that you don't seem to be right on top of, I can't wait to see if there's going to be some interesting repercussions with both Sasuke's new Mangekyou and the dream he had at the beginning of the chapter. Everything is so well developed in your stories and so interesting, I hope to see you published one day if you're not already...you are so talented.
The scene with Sasuke and Naruto circling each other felt like a Tango...I could almost hear the beat as I was reading it. It was pretty powerful and playful at the same time. Poor Naruto feeling a little anxious. I hope that's not your last lemon of the story...they're too hot for that to be the last. Yes, I'm greedy, I know.
Looking forward to next Tuesday!
person roro237
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MMM that was good with the fuzzy guy:)
person lonelylulaby
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Neji seeing everything when he only wanted to check on Naruto was hilarious. Sai didn't even warn him that, that was going on. I almost believed that Sasuke had killed Naruto while he was dreaming. Hopefully Ren will wake up and can fix Naruto; even though I think they're getting use to his new form. I wonder how the council new about EVERYTHING. "There is a spy among us." I have no idea what movie that is from. So this story isn't making it to 70 is it? *wiggles eyebrows* Well if you have really long chapters I think you shall stick to what you said. Oh yeah and it was really nice of everyone to lool out for the boys while they had time together.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person nawatia
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter!!! Please don't let Naruto be stuck with the fox features! While it may be kinda hot right now, the poor fella needs to overcome the demon, or blend in a nicer way. The poor demon fox is suffering too...is there a way for it to be more at peace?
person kms
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I just found it and spent almost the whole day reading all 66 chapters. Since it was so long I thought it might have already been complete, but towards the end I knew it wasn't over yet, and I'm glad because I don't want it to end! Now I just have to wait for the next chapter to come out...I can't wait to read it! This is one of the best Sasuke-Naruto fics I've ever read. I hope you write many more stories when this one is finished, as well. In Sasuke last fight with Itachi, what he said to him about hate, and how it was hollow, but then he talks about another feeling that 'lights up your whole world'- that was so moving. I reread it a few times.
person saihihi
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please have a NaruSasu smut. ^_^ You really are the master of smut for this pairing. =D

Yes...Just one more day of waiting....*anxious*