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Ack! You left such an evil cliffhanger! Despite that, I loved the chapter! How could I not? Tsunade is going to fully support Sasuke and Naruto, Sakura is not going to attempt to stand in the boys' way, and best of all, Sasuke and Naruto were reunited.

The passion! When you described how Naruto latched onto Sasuke and how Sasuke clung on just as desperately, I was happily sniffling! Heck, I'm still sniffling just remembering it! It was perfect. I honestly believe the reunion scene could not have been written any better.

Naruto's lack of modesty was quite amusing, and I loved the image of Naruto stroking one of his tails. Now, they just need to complete their happy reunion *wink, wink* and then reunite with the youngest member of their family. I'm so happy. I don't envy you as you write and plot the boys out of the troubles they will soon be facing, though.

I must admit, I've been in a bit of denial since you wrote that the story won't reach chapter 70. Of course, I'm glad that the end is near, because I'm anxious to see how everything will resolve, but once it's over, it's over! That's horrible! What will I do every Tuesday? I am so attatched to this story and your writing style that I cannot even imagine what the readers that began this story with you must feel as your tale closes. They'll probably need rehab! My thoughts and feelings are so conflicted! The idea of 70+ chapters is way too appealing when I know and ending must come...

Why do you do this to me? Noooo, not a cliffy, now I'm going to go into a comma until next Tuesday. I really cannot wait till the next chappie. I wanna what is happenig to Sasuke. Why is he convulsing *Runs over to Sasuke and hovers* I don't know what I will do if something happens to him. Also what will Naruto think when he wakes up and he finds out he was knocked out when his loveeeer boy was in dire need. Sakura is taking them being together very well. At the beginning of this chapter when Tsunade was talking about killing one of her shinobi I thought she was talking about Sasuke, then you said that Sai had written on his face I just cracked up.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

Why do you do this to me? Noooo, not a cliffy, now I'm going to go into a comma until next Tuesday. I really cannot wait till the next chappie. I wanna what is happenig to Sasuke. Why is he convulsing *Runs over to Sasuke and hovers* I don't know what I will do if something happens to him. Also what will Naruto think when he wakes up and he finds out he was knocked out when his loveeeer boy was in dire need. Sakura is taking them being together very well. At the beginning of this chapter when Tsunade was talking about killing one of her shinobi I thought she was talking about Sasuke, then you said that Sai had written on his face I just cracked up.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

I loved Naruto and Sasuke's reunion. It was so sweet (and hot too). It was cool how Sakura accepted them, even though she was jealous. But maybe she'll get back together with Lee again.

Beautiful writing, it flows very nicely. But now I want to know what's wrong with Sasuke! Could it be his eyes???

Can't wait for the next update (and the smut!! :D) Keep up the awesome work!

oh mi gawd (..sorry)
Missed your last update due to the fact that I haven't been on a computer with a working internet much in these past few weeks. But jeez, so glad I saw this update this morning so I could read the last few chapters. I'm so excited to see how you're going to end this and at the same time I'm quite sad to see this story almost coming to an end. This story is awesome either way.. I've probably said this in comments I've posted before but I must say it again. This is always the first story I'm looking for when I come on here. :D
Anyways, I look forward to your next update next week... and by then I shall be back at home with my nice high speed internet that works with my laptop. :D:D:D:D:D
Until next time,
Ja ne!
Fujinakaheero

I'm sorry... did you just put in a cliffhanger? Did Sasuke just start convulsing? I might take back all those nice things I keep saying about you.... nah. I'll only do that if you don't make things better next week... since your kind of promising smut next week one has to assume he makes it in one form or another.

Love ya work!
Kimra

Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

BAH! Didn’t get first review, *sulks* so you get no review! Aha! XD yeah anyway…. :D The first scene is so funny, you had Tsunade thinking such dramatic thoughts *snickers* I wanna see Sasuke lying there like that, face all inked in :D You know, if you uh, kinda killed Kishi, and um replaced him without anyone knowing, SoD COULD COME TO LIFE. O_O! Think about it…. I always love how you write Tsunade, her and Kakashi you do really well, in their different ways, but we’re not gonna talk about Kakashi because you might kill me with a spork.

And yes Sakura, you got it wrong, again you had two good men after you, like the sweetest most nicest guys (except when Naruto farts) and ya had to go and ruin it. WELL SERVES YOU RIGHT.

With Naruto thinking of Sasuke and him angsting Naruto style was way more heart breaking and optimistic at the same time than Sasuke could be, it’s why we love Naruto, he puts the angsting queen to shame XD I like how both sasu and naru have Itachi on the brain, the man leaves one heck of an impact.

And now, for my fangirl squealing, I advise you to ignore the rest of the review because I’m quite ashamed of my fangirl self and think she should go rot in a hole somewhere

SIDGJDA;LKFJG;LKFGJKLSDGJKLFGJKL I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THAT KISS SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was so hot and sexy and sweet and passionate and gah, all the things true love is made of, but still fucking hot at the same time!!! That kiss was as good a full out smut scene for me, I loved it to pieces, before I fell asleep on the sofa I had read it like 5 times and probably fell asleep with happy kisses floating my brain and drool slipping out of my mouth. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. It so RAWR, and the ass groping :D:D:D:D and Naruto being unaffected being nude with his half erection *whimpers* smexy Naruto. And the rough tongue! *melts into the floor* ooooooh shivers for the rough tongue. It wasn’t overly sappy and sentimental, just the right amount to let loose my inner fangirl trying to glomp you XD The second kiss was *dreamy sigh*

ok fangirling done, *cough* I think… XD I managed to spot the Sasuke C2 insert! YAY! go me! :D *does her happy dance* and I’ve already said what I thought of Sakura and her can’t see true love right in her stupid face ways. *snickers* They’ll love the cliff hanger, am looking forward to the next chapter, more so than usual :D:D:D:D

Manic review over. XD

Adi XX

A cliffhanger??? Nooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll knock myself out cold while you update so that when I wake up the chapter will be done. See ya then.

"Sakura wondered faintly if she had perhaps been chasing the wrong teammate."

*smirk* heh - well too late now lool but I liked the way Sakura realised things on her own, gracious lossing is something to admire I think and she did just that ^_^ but uhhh... the part where the convulsing started left me panicked... and we're only going to see it next week :( oh god - but I love the way Naruto scented Sasuke and then just came back and the kissing and everything loool LOVED IT!!! It was another great chapter as always and now I'm going to anxiously await next week - not just to find out what was happening at the end there to Sasuke but because I also want to read the smut as all yaoi perverts fo and perhaps there'll be a nother hint as to their position now in the village - that's what's worrying me the most - what that damn concil's going to do. They better not hurt the boys *glares* but we'll cross that bridge when we come to it i suppose. Anyway, thanks for the update.

Ja ne!

Hina xXxx