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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZRINA!!! WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! What do you mean convulsing!! Don't do that shit to me... Dammit!!! Grrrr..... Uuuhhuu... breathing breathing... Most evilest cliffie. Dammit. Thank God Naruto is out. Uuugghh I can't believe that a minute ago my biggest trauma was being skeeved out by eyeballs and wondering if Naruto would fuck Sasuke with the tails XD. Who would have guessed you were a closet sadist XD. LOL, oh God. Well that was definitely an interesting chapter. Naruto all over Sasuke with the tails and all nekkid in front of Sakura and Tsunade O.O, damn little exhibitionist, LOL, Mark your territory boy XD. Heh, beat that Pinky. And LMAO you just couldn't resist could you? "Sakura wondered faintly if she had perhaps been chasing the wrong teammate." LOL Smexcellent! And oh God what a display XD. :rubs hands together evilly: I love how Naruto just flew up, didn't miss a beat did he? Fantastic, and Oh sooo yummy. God LOL, So Hott XD. Thank you so much for the update!! And 70 chapters :FOX GRINS: I hope so XD ♥♥♥
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, my god ! NO! come on! you got them together to let him die now! I'm going to cry now! (sobs)
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful reunion between Naruto and Sasuke!! So loving! But you ended it with Sasuke in trouble! I sure hope he is going to be okay!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my opening thought (after reading the AN): there better be a ring. after all they've been through, there better be a ring.
my closing thought: oh crap.
i think those say more towards your writing than anything else. the first shows how enthralled i am by the whole thing, how much i am pulled into the story and how emotional it can make me. the second shows that i am so wondering what the hell's going on that all i can do is wait impatiently until next week's update.
anyway, this was wonderful to read after a long day at work. the scene where naruto woke and jumped sasuke... one of my very favorites of all time. it was a perfect reunion, i swear. i look forward to that promised smut, now, but i think even more so to the conclusion of the recent drama, aka "what the hell is happening with sasuke?" ^__^
my closing thought: oh crap.
i think those say more towards your writing than anything else. the first shows how enthralled i am by the whole thing, how much i am pulled into the story and how emotional it can make me. the second shows that i am so wondering what the hell's going on that all i can do is wait impatiently until next week's update.
anyway, this was wonderful to read after a long day at work. the scene where naruto woke and jumped sasuke... one of my very favorites of all time. it was a perfect reunion, i swear. i look forward to that promised smut, now, but i think even more so to the conclusion of the recent drama, aka "what the hell is happening with sasuke?" ^__^
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZRINA!! This is one(1)of your greatest chapters yet:) I flew (ok drove) home from work to read this weeks chapter. I was having with draws,because Naruto and Sasuke not being together for so long. And Naruto thinking Sasuke was dead. So I could wait to see this chapter. It was so wonderful how Naruto smelled Sasuke and was up and over to him in a blink. I needed that fix:) And the cliffhanger you left us with,(heart beating out of conrol) well I'll be flying home again:)
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you I hate you I love you. I can't form a coherent thought at the moment, but I don't want to review and just say "MOAR!" Poor Naruto! OMG Poor Kyubi! I never thought I'd feel sorry for the demon. It makes Orochimaru's death bitter-sweet instead of victorious.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say this with absolute honesty: I look more forward to your updates than the manga updates. Can't wait 'til next week!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I'm glad I didn't scare you with my last review, it's just that your story is among the few that make me giddy.
Poor Naruto! All rampage-y and stuff! Sasuke's not dead!! *huggles* Hey watch where you swing those tails! I hope some one can come in there and clear everything up before things get worse seeing as he just retreated back into his subconscious to Kyuubi. Hurry someone wheel Sasuke in there!
Not to ruin an angsty moment but that part when he discovers his tails kinda reminded me of my dogs chasing their tails. XD
Hurry up Ren and Togimeishu and fix what you did! Now! Before it gets worse. (O.o It can get worse? Yup!) That is if Ren makes it *crosses fingers* Nothing against the Hyuugas but I rather have a pro working on Naruto (*snicker* like he's my child or something)
I love your story and you have me loving Tuesdays now. Excellent job as always.
-Rai
Poor Naruto! All rampage-y and stuff! Sasuke's not dead!! *huggles* Hey watch where you swing those tails! I hope some one can come in there and clear everything up before things get worse seeing as he just retreated back into his subconscious to Kyuubi. Hurry someone wheel Sasuke in there!
Not to ruin an angsty moment but that part when he discovers his tails kinda reminded me of my dogs chasing their tails. XD
Hurry up Ren and Togimeishu and fix what you did! Now! Before it gets worse. (O.o It can get worse? Yup!) That is if Ren makes it *crosses fingers* Nothing against the Hyuugas but I rather have a pro working on Naruto (*snicker* like he's my child or something)
I love your story and you have me loving Tuesdays now. Excellent job as always.
-Rai
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, write more and make it all better. Please. I'm so glad Naruto's new appearance is being dealt with like it kinda would be in reality. Way too many stories have it being just fine that Naruto has tails when it's obvious it would be a great deal more like how you're portraying it. I cannot wait for an update!
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just want to cry...
cant wait for next chapter...
keep up the fabulous work!!!
cant wait for next chapter...
keep up the fabulous work!!!