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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person animehead
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you and I love this story. I suck at reviweing. My favorite part besides Naruto all angsty and flipping out is his reaction from seeing the tails. GODDDDDD that is so easy for me to imagine. You rock so hard. I mean really, really, rock!!! I always end up speechless when I read your work. *swoons* You amaze me. <3
person lonelylulaby
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, Tsunade should have kept someone in the room with him or monitored him for if/when he woke up; so someone could tell him his love was still alive and that they had just swiched eyes. I can't wait till the next chappie, I wanna know what they are going to say when they find that he had woken up and had a mental breakdown. This is making me wonder if Kyuubi and Naruto are going to merge or something, seeing how there emotions are bringing them closer. How will Sasuke take not being there when Naruto needed him? Will the doctor and his group make it in time to correct their mistake before the Hyuuga's do something that will do more harm than good? I guess my questions will be answered next Tues. Man I love this story.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn good chapter i must say. poor naru-kun, no matter wat the bright side is he always has that darkness lingering near him and to see that he possesses the sharigan its just too much for him. i hope things finally work out before he goes on a rampage. cant wait for the next update. ^_^
person darquiel
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are really working for the title of cliffhanger-queen.^^
Your work is wonderful and I can't wait for the next chap, eveb more 'cause of the Naruto+Kyuubi scene you are hinting!! I love the way you portrait the demon inside Naruto. I feel bad for Kyuubi, he seemed to to really in love, but Orochimaru... I felt sorry for him too, because of the rape. I hope that there is a possible company for the demon in the future... could be that Narutos intens feeling corruped his demon nature and now he wants love to... or company. Naturally I'm hoping for a possible Naruto/Sasuke reunion in the next chap.
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* poor little Naruto-kun, what a horrible thing to wake up to, all demon-like and thinking that his lover is dead. On the other hand, the scene with his tail was pretty funny (or is it just my warped little brain??). I laughed and had an imagine of him chasing it, kinda like my dog used to :).

Another fantastic chapter, I do love this story!
person Onawa
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the ANGST! Kind of speechless, Wow. Loved how you described Naruto waking and discovering his physical changes, realizing he had Sasuke's eyes...How his brain couldn't wrap around and complete the idea that Sasuke might be dead... EVIL CLIFFIE!!!! Must...Hold on...Must...Hold on...The wait for the next installment of this saga is killing me! I have been enjoying this series immensely!
person Adi
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eheh I was reading the first scene again I burst out laughing all over again about Gai and his comments about Kyuubi *sigh* I love Gai, I love Kyuubi, I miss my OTP -_- XD I love the way your wrote Tsunade, all concerned mother figure while giving everyone orders, you did well with her chica! I’m still waiting on Neji’s hardon, if it doesn’t happen, it will have in my head XD

Oh oh oh! Naruto is back, I so miss him half the time he’s not in the scenes XD heh comforting Kyuubi, you’re never gonna get me to shut up about my OTP you know? :P
AH!! He woke up :( with claws and sharingan and ah :( bah! you call me a meanie! OMG I don’t want to read this anymore, you had to put a mirror there didn’t you? *whimpers* you made the poor thing chase his tails

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HOW COULD YOU DO THAT! *bawls* XD
aw, Zrina, seriously, my heart is clenching at this, I know you’re gonna fix him, but ah, the fact he has to go through all this and Shino didn’t exactly make it all better either *sulks* give him Sasuke so that they can be together and be mushy, gah what have you done to me woman?! “angst for the sake of plot” PSSH! PFFT! BAAAHHH!!!!

. They would chain him down like a dog in a kennel and he would never see the proverbial light of day. I will never forgive you! BELIEVE IT. *hugs Naruto and half dead Sasuke* -__________________________________- I even knew this was coming, I was prepared you know? *drags them away* XD

Ok that was my orginal review, now I’m just gonna whimper at you, and yell and scream and bash my fists, that was cruel, you shouldn’t have listened to me! you should have know better Zrina! WAH!!! :( Kyuubi despairing, Naruto despairing, you love the angst deep down, it was a really emotional scene to read, and Naruto got all violent and upset, it was realistic and touching, but at the same I didn’t want to hug him because I didn’t want to get ripped to pieces. Heh him getting cut with the shards, and then healing, for all our talks of sporks, that part was seriously heart wrenching



Adi XX


schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man :s Naruto... I just wanted to hug him and tell him that Sasuke was okay, on top of everything else, it's just sad :s I have to say though - the bit with the tails lol where he tired to catch them - that made me grin lool - but other than that you were right to warn about the angst *sigh* at least I guess its a good thing that they're all back in the village safe and sound - although for Naruto it might not be so great stupid f****** Council. Well thanks for another great chapter ^_^ can't wait for next Tuesday loooool ^_6

Hina xXxx
person Dragon7
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!:) I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Allys
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Oh my God you Meanie ;_;. I'm dying here!! :Glomps you and BAWLS while huggling: When you do things like this you have to post the next chapter right away ;_;!!! It's okay, i know it's okay, because he'll go in and snuggle Kyuubi for a while and they'll give Sasuke back his eyes so he can take Neji in there and FIX THIS!!!!!!! Oh God!! You've turned me into a needy little prat! LOL, I need reassurance!! Oh God!! You're just trying to get me to draw aren't you ;| !!! :Bawls some more: Okay, I'm over the melodrama (no, I'm not really but it's still okay). I'm really happy that everybody is alright, and I'm so glad you have NO idea that the boys have a chance of being back to normal. :Crosses fingers: in hopes that when they get Naruto untangled he'll go back to being himself. It was almost funny seeing him chase his tails though, if I didn't want cry at the same time. It was funny when he pulled the one though :). For all of about a minute. I kept trying to get him to leave the mirror alone cause I knew he would freak out if he looked at his eyes too closely, God I hate being right. That was heartbreaking, the only saving grace is that I know he's not dead, but DAMMIT still can't get into the computer, so I stopped myself from bawling "NO, He's NOT Dead!!" at the stupid screen, aren't you proud of me, LOL, I'm proud of me. I usually do it anyway. I was kind of scared that he would hurt himself or damage the eyes but then I remembered that Sasuke didn't and that Naruto wouldn't, especially if that's all he had left of him. :_; Okay I'm good now. Thank you so much for the update :Huggles you some more while wheedling and BEGGING for the next one to come faster!: Please PLEASE!!! I'm gonna go work on a bribe!! But LOL, with the rate I draw next Tuesday might get here first O.o Oh well at least it'll distract me ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥