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Chapter 64?:
Yes, wonderful. I love it. Naruto got tails, cute! He also got a muzzle...i wonder how he will be able to work it. He still has some of those strings on him right? The ones that connected him to Kyuubi? Poor Fox, i feel so sorry for him when he is back in the cadge crying. He really did like that Snake bastard. KYUUBI COULD DO BETTER! But now i guess he has the Mangekyou Sharingan. Sasuke is going to get his eyes back yes? But will the old man Ren be able to undo what he did? AH! And there are no more chapters for me to read!!! So i can't find out yet!!! DAMN~

Ok! i sent you an email, with subject: "fanart". :d yay for another great chapter!!! i am looking forward to hearing about this scene from chapter 66. ♥ aaahh, but poor naruto!!! does he, uh, have a "snout" now?? ;A; at least he's alive and in control, haha. hmm, and i cant imagine it would be very good on one's optic nerves to get a second eyeball transfer surgery any time soon, but Sasuke without the sharingan is so sad, and naruto with permanently spinning red eyes is creepy. ::worryworry:: i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! =D

So, I was re-reading this last chapter and I admit to being a little slow on the uptake, but the physical fox changes to Naruto's appearance aren't permanant are they? I mean the fangs and claws and pointed ears I can sorta see cause when he really pulled on the fox's chakra, those changes did manifest...but the tails seems overboard, cause they were never more than chakra tails from what I could tell from the Anime/Manga and your story. The idea of Naruto walking around with tails is kinda right there with MPreg...it has it's place in some stories, but just doesn't seem to fit here, in my oh so humble opinion. And it doesn't seem like a very nice thing to do to Naruto.
Then again, in 64 chapters of story, that you should probably be getting paid for, cause you are one awesome writer...that is literally the only thing that I'm not all about. So, as always, looking forward to your future updates!

*hugs*

I can't believe this story is coming to an end. It's so sad *sniff* the end of an age even! But awesome none the less. I love you story so much, and when it's done I may even ahve time to read through the whole thing again... dear lords time is a blessed thing I have a little off. BUT! I'm reviewing for hte sole purpose of reviewing and telling you that your awesome. I can't wait to read the rest. Oh and I also read your other story B&B (bed and breakfast or blackmail and betrayal... your choice) and I don't htink I reviewed it, but I'm also reading that and looking forward to the next update.

Cheers! Kimra

Ah! Oh no! Hiroki! Please be okay!

Ok so I meant to post this on Tuesday, but I got side tracked.

I found this... well I guess I should say I decided to take a looksie at this story after passing it every once and a while. I kept skipping it because it was long and I have severe attention deficit issues. So I promised myself if I wasn't interested after the first chapter, well, I tried and I would let it go. Needless to say, that did not happen. I was completely and utterly enthralled by this!! Every chapter I read I was wide eyed and had a racing heart. Your ability to draw in a reader and keep them is truly admirable. Your story telling skills are superb! I mean, how do you do it?! Your story is more interesting to me than the manga is right now(sheesh don't get me started on that) Everything I was supposed to do went out the window because I had to read what happened next. I even printed up some chapters to read in between my break between my two jobs, which is precious time (See on the weekend I work two different jobs back to back and I have very little time in between which I usually reserve for a quick sandwich or downing a Redbull) but I just could not put it down.

I'm usually not one for OCs but I love Hiroki! He is so adorable! I liked when Sasuke woke up and Hiroki was on the other side of Naruto's chest. It was so...awww! And him doing the good guy thumbs up? Aw, so cute!

I also like how you interweave the characters and their lives and how everything connects in some way.

Your Sai: Priceless.

Oh man and that flicker chapter?! I loved it! It was like watching a horror movie! So vividly described, I could just see it before my eyes! Awesome dude, awesome!

The Uchiha fight was wonderful! Looks like Naruto rubbed off on Sasuke in more way than one.*snickers at horribly lame innuendo* I loved how he kept getting up and pissing Itachi off in the process. How he was also able to get through to Itachi enough to stop him in his tracks and even have Itachi save him from the explosion.

GAH! So much, that I liked!

I finally finished reading your fic at 5 am Tuesday morning and it was a bittersweet experience. Sweet because I finally caught up and bitter because, well, I finally caught up. But then when I came back to the site a little later I saw a new chapter and I did my patented update dance. When Ren clutched his chest and fell I was like O.O! &*$#!!! I forgot he was connected to Orochimaru! So then I was torn for the rest of the chapter because I was hoping there was a way that Orochimaru wasn't dead so that Ren would survive, but I really really REALLY wanted Orochimaru dead!

Now that I am caught up I have to be a good girl and patiently wait for updates (damn!) but I guess that’s kind of a good thing though because I can finally do the things I was supposed to be doing before I read your story.

Sorry if my gushing is off putting, I don’t mean to freak you out. I am usually not so... *sigh* *starry eyed* uh... yeah… usually not so that. But you are one of the best authors I’ve read in a long time and I just thought you should know that. Sorry… *goes back to shadows*

-Rai

Oh, I like your other stories too, but I will review them in their designated… uh… review…area… (O.o;) Um… *retreats back into the shadows*

LOL, ninja turtle! very clever. the end is coming! can't wait for the next update.

Noooooooooo I've finished reading the chapter already. I think I'll have to go back to the beginning and re-read it. Another awesome chapter, I can't wait to see how you wrap everything up :)

I’ve been reading the story for the last couple of days and I just wanted to tell you how amazed (an understatement) I am by it (although I’m sure you already know that you’ve done a wonderful job with it). It’s obvious that you put a lot of work in it because you seem to handle the characters better than the creator himself. Such a long story, yet it seems so short to me; *that’s* how much I like it.

You’ve managed to make your story not look rushed but not look slow either and that’s quite the accomplishment if you ask me. When it comes to long stories I sometimes tend to skip parts because I get bored somehow, but I can assure you I’ve read every single word you wrote.

I could comment on a million things I liked in all the chapters you wrote but that would apparently take too long. The humor, the angst (which was just the right amount for me. I can’t handle too much of it :p), the slow progression in the boys’ relationship, Sasuke becoming more of a human without losing his character, even the battles (something that I can easily get bored with, only that you depicted everything so perfectly that I just couldn’t not read it).

The only thing I’m sad about is that just when I got excited about finding such an interesting story, it’s coming to an end. I know I’m not the first one to say this but I hope that you would consider making a sequel out of it because it’s just too good to end; either continue with the boys or even Kakashi and Iruka (A small appearance in the story but still such a cool interaction between them and well… I can’t help the little fangirl in me *blushes*. I don’t know but I see a lot of potential in you writing an equally great story about them). Even writing some one shots in the SOD universe about Naruto and Sasuke would cheer me up any day :p. Oh well… I know you can’t just write without inspiration so you can consider that last paragraph as wishful thinking.

Whatever you do, keep up the great work and oh… thanks for helping me practice English by reading yaoi. Never thought it could be so entertaining :-).

I'm so glad that Naruto was able to get Kyuubi back in his cage. I also thought it was so caring of him to try and comfort Kyuubi. I wonder if the changes in Naruto are permanent?