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Wow, poor Kyuubi having to deal with emotions he was not programmed for. I almost started to cry when he asked Naruto why it hurt so much. Also I wonder how Naruto is going to deal with his new form, I hope Ren makes it so he can fix what he has done, but I think it's too late. Glad that Sasuke doesn't have any qualms about Naruto's appearence.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

Aw, I can't help but feel sorry for the Kyuubi and it's sweet that Naruto can relate to him too. This was a great chapter, very emotional and exciting. I loved it! Keep up the awesome work.

I'm sad that the story's coming to an end but I'm also excited to see how you will do it. ^___^

back in Konoha. can't wait to see the big showdown.

Naruto certainly got the shitty end of the stick, my poor baby :huggles him: It was cool though how he comforted Kyuubi and how things ended up. Glad to see that Hiroki is okay, and hope Naruto doesn't stay all monster like. He's had a tough enough time as it is, I really want him to be Hokage and I really want him to be happy. It sucks that Sasuke just seemed to get more beautiful and Naruto ended up looking like a monster. People are cruel and it's gonna suck to be him. Ugg, at least it looks like he'll get to have his family though and we know they won't care. I feel kinda bad for Ren and Kyuubi, and I think Oro-bastard got off too easy, but there's nothing that could ever happen to him, as one selfish man, that would ever make up for the atrocities he's committed in his lifetime. It's a shame. I hope everything works out alright. It'll be really nice to see everyone sitting together calmly after all the confusion. It'll also be interesting to see how and where the three boys end up. This is an awesome story and so far it's got your classically tragic anime ending XD. You're so good at this XD. Thank you so much for the update, now I'm all excited about next week!!

“What? Never heard of a ninja turtle before?” Very cute and funny. Liked that Sakura's yelling was able to help Naruto fight back. I kind of feel sorry for Kyuubi too for being locked up all alone. Thanks for another chapter.

lol when you said you were wrapping things up, I thought it might be fillerish. BUT IT WASN’T! Aw love you’re pulling at all my heart strings with this and B&B seriously. Kyuubi’s pain, ugh :( I felt so bad for him, taken away from his one true love/mate/fucktoy MY OTP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you probably did it on purpose because you know how addicted I am to them. “hrmm what better to destroy adi’s heart than by killing her OTP completely and torturing a demon?” Poor Kyuubi, Oro deserved it, but gah ah! I remember in one of the chapters you mentioned about Kyuubi affecting Naruto, but also Naruto affecting Kyuubi, so you were planning to break my heart about 40 chapters ago. XD

GAI!! You make him so cool, and you brought back his turtle summoning :D I really loved that. Oh and Sasuke demanding Naruto get up :D:D so Sasuke I was so happy to see you didn’t go to the side of wailing and crying about Naruto. But the way he collapsed on Naruto’s chest. -__- that was so sweet, with a little angst, really good.

I liked the beginning and ending of the chapter too with the OC’s, are you killing Ren as revenge? XD Please don’t he was a sweet old man, he’s got his clan and everything to live for. lol well I don’t want anyone to die (even Oro) but if it’s necessary.

HIROKI IS TOO CUTE. YOU KILL HIM AS REVENGE AND I'LL DO SOMETHING DRASTIC... *all hot air* XD

I want my OTP back, gimme gimme gimme, all that fur and the tails and the licking with the rough tongue, and the licking and the furs and *repeats over and over again*

*sigh* it was nice while it lasted, my poor Kyuubi... *tries to hug a demon* uh... maybe later :D

YAY!!! We won!!! ähä... *grins* you know what I mean ^________^
A great chapter, though it was a bit short. What do you mean, the end is near??? Noooo! you can not end this fic! It's far to good to end it! *puppyeyes* a sequel, just maybe???
I wait for the next chappy! bye!

Hey, just for the record, chichi is the informal word for father (most young children would say tou-san, though)
Dunno if you speak any japanese, but the ue that follows chichi-ue is this kanji, 上, meaning above. chichi-ue (父上) is almost never used, perhaps only by the children of the royal family. (though I did overhear one guy on his phone refer to his mom as haha-ue) I don't really know the history, but maybe pre-meiji it was used more??? I'm not saying you should change it, but I thought I'd let you know the connotations of the word.


PS love the story!!! =)

GLEEE! I really feel for Kyuubi. Poor thing needs some love! Won't reach chapter 70?!!! NOOOOOO!!! Sequel? Maybe not right after this is finished, but eventually a sequel would nice. ^_^ Gah! More smut before end?

*cough* SAKURA not SASUKE :P