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Wow! That was great the way you handled Sasuke and Itachi. I csn't wait to find out how Naruto's going to get outta this.

ok a lil' confused on the last part, did kyuubi kill orochimaru or did he just go beserk? oh and great chapter i think its about time itachi realized that hate itsnt everything a person needs. and did kiroki survive, dont kill him off, i fell in luv wit the lil hybrid. cant wait to read more so update soon.

DAYUM! Amazing chapter!!! So much happening in such a short span. Darn cliffies, I hate 'em and love 'em at the same time. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!

you know i feel sorry for kyuubi. i mean it seemed like he liked orochimaru. you know like a mate. but orochimaru, the snake basterd just had to go and hurt kyuubi. i feel real bad. well can't wait for your next update ja ne ^___^

BWAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAHAHA another freaky ass review XD :D Ok so I’m not a fan of OCs because they require too much imagination when I’m trying to read smut, but yeah, YOU MADE HIROKI SO COOL. I still love the twisty twirl thing in the air, I CAN SEE IT. You put Kishi to shame *nods* I’m reading Hiroki getting pierced for like the 3rd time? and it still shocks me -__-. *still snickering about ‘furball’ XD see little comments like that just tossed in are my Zrina-sensei’s genius :D Ok the whole imagery with the champagne I really like, and Naruto’s using his head, *squishes him* Ok I’ve come to the Kyuubi and Oro bit, and I’m scared to read it again because I feel so bad for Kyuubi -__- damn you Oro! You enjoyed the rimming didn’t you?! You could have had it all!!! I read it. -_______________________________________________- Am I the only weirdo that feels bad for Kyuubi? Ooooh I loved the little scene with Gai, you did him perfectly. AND NOW FOR THE UCHIHACEST! *cough* I mean… XD

OMG ITACHI CHOPPED OFF A WING. How many times can you shock me in this chapter? “He makes me strong,” Sasuke countered softly. *flails* I want to huggle you sooooooo bad

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Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Oohwee, I'm speechless from that chapter. Thank goodness I don't have to speak to write a review huh? Naruto is not someone to just sit there and let someone else do everything is he? Loved how he was working while Orochimaru and Kakashi were fighting. Orochimaru's mouth once again got him in trouble huh? I suppose this means we don't have to worry about Orochi getting out of the seal again. When you mentioned that Kyuubi was getting something from his connection with Naruto you really showed it in this chapter, killing Orochimaru was hard on him and with the gaining of the Mangekyou Sharingan it proves just how much Kyuubi did feel. The twist with Itachi protecting his brother was great, personally I always felt there was something to the reason Itachi didn't kill Sasuke. I mean he killed all the rest of the Uchihas and there had to have been other children and even infants, those other children couldn't have been a challenge to test his power on. Anyway it was a great added bit. Ah Naruto what the heck he's like a werefox or something . . . that's kind of cool; sort of like in the manga when he gained the fourth tail but more fleshy. I'm with Kakashi, seeing that would make you mess yourself on top of having nightmares, you know first you say it and then you do it. Well they saved Naruto from Orochimaru but how do they save him from himself? How has Kyuubi taken him over? How will they bring him back to his self? Hopefully Sasuke can do that. But then what? They will obviously be heading back to the village, they will in no way be in shape to escape their friends to continue to hunt Itachi. Will Tsunade be able to help them? Will she be able to give them each back their own eyes and how will the gaining of the Mangekyou Sharingan effect Sasuke if he gets his own eyes back? I mean it wasn't his deed that gained the Mangekyou so will it stay if the eyes return to him and isn't it the Mangekyou that is leading to Itachi to loose his eye sight? How will this come into plan for Sasuke? I what will the council do to the two of them when they return? I mean Naruto is already in hot water right plus Sasuke's desertion to Sound can't hold any good for either of them. I know this story is on the way to the ending so I'm sure most these question will be answered in the upcoming chapter or chapters; depending on how much story is left. The chapter was a great read, it was a chapter that drew me even more into the story than I was before. A great work really. Thank you so much for the update and sharing this story, I'll be watching for more. Take care

*sulk* and yet it's still got a long way to go doesn't it? I'm going insane with this story. Everyweek without fail I'm checking on the Tuesday (because it is tuesday for me when you update) for the update. I'm more compulsive about this story than I am about Naruto right now... though I do like the nice yummy pictures of Sasuke that often appear... err off track. Point? I'm reading, I'm addicted, I'm waiting once more for when you update. :D

Thank you for writing sugh a wonderful story, I can't wait to get to the end... but err I will... if I have to. :D

Ohmygodohmygod! Blimey o'Riley's trousers! That was the most exciting chapter yet!! I don't even know where to start spazzing from!!!

The ItaSasu fight was really really cool! I loved Sasuke's speech to his brother and how Itachi reacted to it. And what about Naruto and the Kyuubi and Orochimaru!? I'm on the edge of my seat here. Excitement!!


This was an excellent chapter- you're a great writer and your fight scenes are /amazing/. Keep up the awesome work!

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Oh please say there is a way oh please. Also Tsunade thinks Sakura will have to make a choice, she doesn't realize that both boys already made on. hehe