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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o yea of the evil cliffhanger!! As always, lovely chapter...and waiting (again) for the next update. Thanks
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Oh - Jeez," I thought to myself. "Not another fight scene" I was pleasantly surprised, however, when I saw how you handled each of the characters' fighting styles, and didn't rely upon the names of the jutsus. Each part of the battle felt like a real part of the story in furthering plot, and not a D&D role-playing game recitation. While using dice and a D&D format might make for an interesting experiment, I am so pleased that you relied upon your skillful style of writing using all of the senses.
There was one thing that threw me. I have only watched Naruto up to the end of the chuunin exams, so I knew about the marks on Sasuke from O. but didn't realize that it turned him into what he did.
There was one thing that threw me. I have only watched Naruto up to the end of the chuunin exams, so I knew about the marks on Sasuke from O. but didn't realize that it turned him into what he did.
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AUGH cliffhangeer! *falls over and dies*
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im going to cry! you always leave off when its getting good!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh this story is... I just can't put it into words I love it sooooooo much. Can't wait till next Tues. The finally is coming and I can't wait till we find out what happens to sasuke and Itachi, kakashi and orochimaru.
ja ne till next time
ja ne till next time
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my snogging gawd!!! i've spent the last two days reading all the way up to chapter 60 (acutally reading up to 52 and skimming the rest) and i just have to say that this is the most awesomest...i can't even find the right words. this fanfic so pwns!!!! and i wanna be sai's best friend!!! that way i can get free yaoi illustrations of our favorite blonde and brunette. i just luv the way you don't miss anything, even the convo between the team members in ch 60 that i mucho enjoyed. pure hilarity. and little hiroki is so dang adorable! the smut is totally awesome as well. keep it up *nice guy pose*! alrighty, one more chapter to go until i await your updates. how often do you update?
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY you managed it!!!!! lol see I had complete faith in you. (though I feel bad for Beta dealing with stressed-ready-to-kill!Zrina)
SHIKAMARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol I have to stop doing that every time a character I like gets a line, though if there is Gai in here I will die :D
Ok so obviously I hadn’t read the next sentence XD
Shika giving orders is good, even though he’s a lazy arse, he does rise to the challenge when needs be, you did well with him :D
The Deidara scene was good, I like that he was just gonna walk off and let them kill each other, he seems like the type to abandon a team mate (drawing from anime here)
I’m glad Team Gai were kept together, their tactics were good, intelligently thought out!
:D LEE GOT BIT!!!!!! ok, that’s not so good, you hurt Lee, Zrina! The poor thing has been in hospital enough times :( Tenten is cool, she doesn’t get enough credit in the anime ^_^ She’s a weapons master! People should get that more XD
Also genius idea to have Shikamaru observe everyone so that he can describe what’s going on. He’d be the least biased after all
O_O for all your “pink haired wrench” stuff, Sakura separating Oro and Itachi like that is pretty damn cool Ah KAKASHI. walking through rock? I don’t know if that’s in the manga, or you actually thought of that BUT DAMN! O_O!
“Gotcha” *giggles*
and then… GAI-SENSEI!!!!!!!! you have no idea how exciting this chapter is. It’s like the anime condensed without the flashbacks and constant pausing. O_O gah woman seriously.
LMAO! Sai, you’re not getting anywhere near Naruto or his consoling
and I didn’t know Sasuke had it in him to say that. It works!
Smack talk between Sasuke and Itachi! Itachi talking smack is great XD They were always better with actions though, the kunai bit was good. Itachi backhanded him, that’s as good bitch slapping. I can so see that happening, one fluid elegant movement. C2 Sasuke… O_O
Cliff hanger… *dies* but but but but… I wanna see!
This chapter was too cool. too cool The fights were all amazing, and I could see it all happening.
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SHIKAMARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol I have to stop doing that every time a character I like gets a line, though if there is Gai in here I will die :D
Ok so obviously I hadn’t read the next sentence XD
Shika giving orders is good, even though he’s a lazy arse, he does rise to the challenge when needs be, you did well with him :D
The Deidara scene was good, I like that he was just gonna walk off and let them kill each other, he seems like the type to abandon a team mate (drawing from anime here)
I’m glad Team Gai were kept together, their tactics were good, intelligently thought out!
:D LEE GOT BIT!!!!!! ok, that’s not so good, you hurt Lee, Zrina! The poor thing has been in hospital enough times :( Tenten is cool, she doesn’t get enough credit in the anime ^_^ She’s a weapons master! People should get that more XD
Also genius idea to have Shikamaru observe everyone so that he can describe what’s going on. He’d be the least biased after all
O_O for all your “pink haired wrench” stuff, Sakura separating Oro and Itachi like that is pretty damn cool Ah KAKASHI. walking through rock? I don’t know if that’s in the manga, or you actually thought of that BUT DAMN! O_O!
“Gotcha” *giggles*
and then… GAI-SENSEI!!!!!!!! you have no idea how exciting this chapter is. It’s like the anime condensed without the flashbacks and constant pausing. O_O gah woman seriously.
LMAO! Sai, you’re not getting anywhere near Naruto or his consoling
and I didn’t know Sasuke had it in him to say that. It works!
Smack talk between Sasuke and Itachi! Itachi talking smack is great XD They were always better with actions though, the kunai bit was good. Itachi backhanded him, that’s as good bitch slapping. I can so see that happening, one fluid elegant movement. C2 Sasuke… O_O
Cliff hanger… *dies* but but but but… I wanna see!
This chapter was too cool. too cool The fights were all amazing, and I could see it all happening.
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOH! Your fight scenes are always so exciting! XD There are so many cool things that happen in them. Lee's reaction to Deidara biting him made me grin.
I also loved Kakashi's thought about coming to poke Kyuubi. XD
Awesome job!! (bounces) I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!
I also loved Kakashi's thought about coming to poke Kyuubi. XD
Awesome job!! (bounces) I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Maybe later he would come back and poke at the animal in the cage for fun.'
YAY for KAKASHI!!! Kakashi-sensei rocks!!! looool aww this chapter made me so happy!!! loool :D i know they're all in a difficult postion heh but it's just good to see Leaf stand up to those pricks (gomen Itachi :s) and the fight scene is not boring at all!!! Really liking how it's building up too, especially now with Sasuke using the seal so can't wait for next week loool, you've mae Tuesday's one of the best days of the week lol ^_6
Hina xXxx
YAY for KAKASHI!!! Kakashi-sensei rocks!!! looool aww this chapter made me so happy!!! loool :D i know they're all in a difficult postion heh but it's just good to see Leaf stand up to those pricks (gomen Itachi :s) and the fight scene is not boring at all!!! Really liking how it's building up too, especially now with Sasuke using the seal so can't wait for next week loool, you've mae Tuesday's one of the best days of the week lol ^_6
Hina xXxx
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Really. No other word for it. But you've heard that a thousand times. Yay! I'm glad this story is so popular!