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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good babe. I love the battle strategy and the set up and everything. LOL, I've told you already, it's good enough to be on TV XD. Can't wait to see what goes on with Itachi and Sasuke, not to mention orochimaru, Kakashi and Naruto. :Tackle glomps: Thanks for the update!! Can't wait til next Tuesday XD.
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now this seems to be promising. I think i like this already. It seems like it is going to be good and it is only the first chapter. That’s wrong that they want to keep naruto there, just because he has the fox within him. Keep him like a slave to the village...so they don't have to worry about him falling into the hands of the enemy they would ruin any dream he had. So he was trying to learn how to control his own chakra, that’s good. he shouldn't have to rely on Kyuubi's all the time, ne?
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was just like watching TV. I could see it all happening. I loved it:) You are a wondeful author, that was an increible chapter!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 31: Story is getting good so far. I was listening to my Radio Blog while reading, and Michelle Branch's song All you Wanted started playing, and I realized how much it kind of fits Naruto and Sasuke. Some lines fit how Naruto can see Sasuke and some lines fit how Sasuke can see Naruto in my opinion. And to me, the chorus represents how Sasuke left Konoha to go to Orochimaru for power, and how Naruto vows he will save his friend, even though it doesn't seem Sasuke really wants to be saved, but oh well. I like finding songs that fit anime.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, that ending was amazing. That last line absolutely destroyed me. I can't wait for more! As usual, your story is the most addicting thing I've read in years.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pant* Must *pant* Have *pant* More! *passes out* It's the build up before the final bang and it's killing me! I love you! <3
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don´t know if you would care to know...or if you know of this...I have some terrible news.
Whlie on the way out of the hospital, yura and her daughter were caught in a terrible car crash...they didn´t make it...
Please inform as many people as you can, even though you may not know who this person is or if you´ve even read her fic...
-Damp
I hope she get´s all of the yaoi she can get.
Whlie on the way out of the hospital, yura and her daughter were caught in a terrible car crash...they didn´t make it...
Please inform as many people as you can, even though you may not know who this person is or if you´ve even read her fic...
-Damp
I hope she get´s all of the yaoi she can get.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally caught the "shirotora" before you translated it at the end. At first when it appeared, I didn't think of it, and then as I was reading it to myself, I was all "Hey wait.. shiro... tora... white tiger! Anyways, this is getting good. I'm off to read the other chapters now.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's little thing there at the end of ch. 15 was so priceless! I want to read it over and over again. Now if only I could actually see them do something like that in the anime. Of course, then they'd have to change the majority of the current plot and change the rating. But oh well. It would be worth it to see him do that at least 1 time.
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay - they've finally arrived to save Naruto. I can't wait to see Sasuke & Naruto's reunion (especially in front of the others). I can't wait to see this story end, but also once its finished I'll be sad cause there'll be no more :(