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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person RoseHime
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool battle scene! WOO! The big bads are about to duke it out! Can't wait to see how Sasuke takes watching the two most influential people in his life about to kill each other. Find a way out soon Naruto!!! Or Kakashi! Help!
person dragondancer
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really so good i cant wait until the next ch
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes yes, Kyuubi is so right~!

Orochimaru soo belongs to him~! xD (You have actually made me a KyuubiOro fan, but just with this fic:P)
person Adi
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh *sigh* I’m sure I could give it a read…

GIMME! *GRABS!* XD

You already know I was all for the Itachi, Deidara and Oro action. I transformed into my 8 year old self going “POW! Yeah! Kick his ass!” XD

The Kyuubi and Naruto convo always cracks me up. “on his hands and knees with my dick up his ass” :D:D:D Oro wanted it. Kyuubi wanted it, I wonder what their babies would be like XDXD

I already read the bit about Naruto thinking about Sasuke but it still got me the second time round. WAAAAAAAAAAH! Comfort me!! :( I had to go read it again, I’m such a masochist.

“His possessed lover and his psychotic brother faced each other and for the life of him, he wasn’t sure who he wanted to confront first.” Sasuke! you run and comfort Naruto right now! I always love your ending lines, I’m not sure if they come to you in some sort of magical dream or you sit there pondering it for days, but it’s always good.

Love love LOVE the chapter, I loved the action, am an action girl at heart, so it’s all “OMG THIS SO COOL!” for me :D

YAY! for you meeting the deadline XD Means I’m gonna be working on porn today. Been sitting here for 2 hours, nothing is flowing :(

schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit.

loool sorry but that's what completely describes my thoughts as Sasuke found that scene before him. GAHHHH!!! i don't know what i want to happen :s (not that what i want matters lol) so - i shall place my faith in your capable hands and hope that you kick orochimaru's ass and... hmm if itachi dies... O_O that might be painfull for me, bastard's grown on me *sigh*... man i'm getting sidetracked with this review lool :D anyway thanks for the update!!! the start of the fight's got me all pumped up and we have to wait till... next tuesday *droops* heh ^_6 and i'll be tuning in on saturday too for your AU

Ja!
Hina xXxx
person Arcueido
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm always looking forward to your next chapter and with each chapter I can never get over how good you are at describing the battle details... so much so that I feel I'm in the battle itself. I love the way you kept the story so close to the actual manga and anime and how almost everything falls into place, making this Naruto manga/anime extension definitely THE best by far.... Thank you for writing this.....
person Kimra
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So mean. So soooo mean. Okay. Okay. I might manage this if I breath slowly and count the seconds until your next update. Dear me but I was worried as well for a bit there, this update seemed to be posted later tha usual, and you didn't post anything on the weekend. I was worried for you! well it was purely selfish, because without you who's gonna write the awesome? But I'm glad to see your back and writing. But dear me, could you write any more tension into a story, could you make me feel any more anxious for hte characters? If you could I don't think i could stomach the story. I think any more tension would be my undoing.

So yes. Excellent, and horrifying and tense and all those thing I'm sure you where aiming for. I pray you post more next week, and I await you updates. :D

Kimra
person Cin
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's great!!! It's simply wonderful yet again! I wonder if Sasuke would give up persuing his brother right now and try to save Naruto??? Yaaaa!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter?! Keep writing!
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. i can only day wow at the moment so i will also conclude this by saying great chapter and update soon. wow.
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Everyone's in the same place now! If only Naruto can be saved! Great drama in this chapter! :)