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*speechless*
Why do you stop there? *cries* This week will be very long...

Chapter 60: I completely welcomed this chapter. It was a perfectly placed humor break. This is not to say that I don’t enjoy the angst, but every now and then a little lighthearted humor helps to balance the story. Chapter 60 reminded me of the “Porter Scene” in Shakespeare’s Macbeth in the sense that it was a bit of comedy relief before the real fluff hits the bunny, so to speak. I can confidently say that your humor is well intact.

Chapter 61: Chapter’s 60 and 61 juxtapose each other really well. Because 60 was so humorous, 61 does an excellent job of showing the gravity of the situation. You also did an excellent job in showing how powerful Orrochimaru has become as a result of having both Kyubbi and the sharingan at his disposal. I’m also glad that we finally got to see Naruto again. I was really starting to miss him. Anyway though, I’m quite curious to see what the next chapter entails, seeing it could be so many different things. I eagerly await the next chapter. My best wishes for you and your writing.

Ooh, I loved that last line. It was so cool but saddening at the same time. Loved this chapter, we got to see more Akatsuki action. Man, I'm cheering for Itachi but what would that mean for Naruto? Damn, this is hard! Who do I want to win?!

Well, I guess I want Naruto to get control back.

XD Can't wait until the next chapter. You're doing an awesome job!

Grrr... Zrina love I'm so sad. The fight is fantastic but I'm soo sad. It hurts. Having Orochimaru in Naruto's body hurts so much, and his having stolen Sasuke's eyes. How are they gonna fix it? You handicapped the good guys. And Naruto is hurting. And Sasuke is torn and confused. And Oro-bastard needs to die, but they can't kill him because, Naruto. I have faith though. I know you have a plan, and I know that it will be okay. I'm not expecting sunshine and rainbows, but okay would be nice. You're very very good at angst, have I ever told you that. Maybe you're too good, or maybe I'm just too into it, because it hurts. You write too well, I get too deep and too caught up. :huggles: needs to go look for something fluffy now.

oh so wonderful! i love fight scenes when they're choreographed so well! and i did enjoy that little spat between naruto and kyuubi. even though it was short and took place during a very tense situation, i thought it was quite humorous. and how can orochimaru withstand the pain that comes with calling the fox armor like that, when he didn't before? and poor sasuke! does he try to kill the man he's been after since he was eight years old, or does he try to save his lover of one year or so?

i can't wait for the next chapter!! so much is going on, and it's so exciting!

god I love this story. can't wait see see what happens next.

My gosh this is so intense, I love it. Your Deidara is so well done, new info is so great isn't it? Well hanging on the edge for what you have planned next. Take care and thanks so much for sharing this story.

OH, i hope sasuke doesnt dieee!

oh fuck me.. what a mess they all crawlled into. i maybe drunk as a skunk right now but man are those boys im for it now!!!
any ways a very good chappie! gladly waiting for the rest!!

woooohoo.......hope more smut comes!

Kyaaaaaaaa! Just the thing I needed after my net-less holliday time!
Can't wait for the next, just like always, right? *laughes* You rock!