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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person llyoung
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Oh, please,” Kiba said while rolling his eyes. “Are you trying to say you didn’t know what it was for when you were twelve?” For some reason I just found this line hilarious. I also enjoyed all the lines that followed it as well. Fun chapter and thanks for the update.
person Kira
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Note to self: Never EVER trust Sai with a secret. *laughs*
person fangirl
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that I've been a loyal reader but haven't reviewed yet...so, here we go. I LOVE this story!!!! Practically perfect in everyway...well, except that I have to wait a whole week between updates...pout. Seriously, I just wanted to say how awesome I think you've made the story and how rich the characters are...I love all the sasunarusasu action, be it smut or fluff. I'm so impatient for them to get back together, but you're making the whole events so interesting that it's ok to wait...a little. =)
person roely
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! sakura IS STILL INDENIAL! i love Lee he is so funny! the whole thing was funny!
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, so much hilarity in a tense situation!! that was great. and i love your characterization of lee. it's like, right out of canon, haha. and i'm so excited to see what happens when they all face orochimaru, as i'm assuming will happen, though maybe i shouldn't (assume, that is). and even if kakashi can enter naruto's mind, how will he undo what ren set up? how is naruto doing after the sharingan was placed in him? will the gang run into ren and ask him to help? gah, so many questions!! i so look forward to the next chapter, so maybe i can get some answers, ne? ^__^
person Onawa
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The scene where the group got a look at Sai's scroll was hilarious! BTW, what were the names that were given as options to Hiroshi? Tou - father, nii - older brother, I don't know the others...
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! THIS IS THE BEST CHAP YET, AND THERE WASN'T EVEN ANY SMUT!

I enjoyed this one so much. I love seeing the former Rookies together again. That Sai...Anyway, it's so cute to see that they are going to be quick to defend Naruto and protect him. It had to have hurt him to leave them behind. I think he'll be touched. And who says Sasuke aint a father? Wise up Saukra, Sasuke is a daddy already ^_^. Great chap.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't expecting the eye change in the last couple chapters... I can definitely tell you are having fun with this story. One thought crossed my mind earlier on with the... ah... 'hotter' scenes, either your husband is absolutely amazing in bed leaving you with all sorts of unbelievably sexy ideas, or, he is lacking, leaving you to daydream through fanfictions... heh^^;
Anyway, I hope you keep it up to the end, I am loving it thus far.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww I loved this chapter :D you just reminded me of why i love the rookie 9 so much :D loooool and Sai!!! man looool :d 'snogging' looooool :D i love how he just attached himself to that word lol, and I loved how they all threw in their version of what naruto and sasuke were doing in the scroll that Sai showed them heh and Tenten, a little hentai isn't she :D anyway, I really loved this update ^_^ can't wait for next week for the next one ^_6

Hina xXxx
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my soul, I absolutly adore how each character described what they saw. It was perfect. I laughed soooooo much. Please, update again soon.