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Wonderful chapter!!! The gang talking about Sasuke and Naruto's relationship were so funny!!! I'm glad you are going to keep continuing the story longer than you had planned. There is so much that can be in this story and you are one of the best writers I've ever read. I could keep reading this story forever! :)

*busts out the champagne* YOU MADE IT TO THE BIG 6-0!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *grabs zrina and twirls her around and around and around and around* XD

Ok it’s official, this is the longest fanfic I’ve ever read and that has managed to make me addicted and still hold my attention. AND I HAVE THE ATTENTION SPAN OF A FRUIT FLY.

The first Orochimaru scene had me itching to see him do something pervy again, I have such a one track mind :D

The fight scene with Oro’s daughter was done really really well. I loved the whole tongue wrapping around the neck thing, it was just all very cool and dramatic!

“Kaa-san,” Sai supplied.

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok you keep Naruto, Sasuke, and Hiroki, just gimme Sai, I’ll keep him locked in my closet since I’ll only be able to handle him in small doses :D

Everytime Neji popped up all I could think about was him doing Sakura XD

Kakashi giving advice was meaningful without being overly clichéd. I love how Sasuke is developing more and more, he hasn’t lost his character, he’s just growing more into the type of person he could have been without his past.

Yes, yes Sakura, you want Sasuke to be your hubby. Tch, delusional girl, as much as I wish she could grow a pair, she’ll always have a weak spot for Sasuke, and that came across really well without turning her into the love sick gennin she once was.

HINATA! *hugs the girl* I hope she’s the one that manages to break the news to Sakura, because Naruto might get killed and Sasuke will just be Sasuke, he’s changed, but not that that much XD

AND FINALLY THE GOSSIP. You did warn me, but I paid no heed and insisted on eating cereal while reading, and what happened? well.. I dropped the bowl, we’re just lucky it didn’t break XD

My favourite characters for this scene was undoubtedly ROCK LEE! and Chouji XD How could I not love them? not to mention Sai, but that’s a given :D

“Are you trying to say you didn’t know what it was for when you were twelve?” LMAO! Kiba wins.

No.. wait… Shikamaru tops that line “Having anal intercourse.” I was in fits of giggles and then Shika sent me over the edge, I could just see him saying that with his bored off his arse face XD

Poor Lee XD you do an excellent Lee, this chapter is just, ah my sides hurt from laughing

“bright-eyed and bushy-tailed tomorrow” You know what? I give up trying to pick my favourite line. This was a hilarious chapter, not in the cracktastic way, but the funny in the anime way XD just pure gold. *steals Lee while Zrina isn’t looking… she won’t notice*

Sorry about leaving, I was just really upset, I'm sure it'll get sorted out in a few days or so,

take care

Adi XX

I love Lee. I love Sai. Hell I love them all, and you write them well... though Sakura still doesn't know, nor Ino... so that'll be interesting. :D Anyway. I wait every week for your updates, and I'm always glad to read them, than sad when they end... well disapointed that they end not sad because I've got a stupid grin stuck on my face (a result of reading this). One of these days, when I have a lot of spare time I'm going back to the begining and reading it all again! Awesome. :D Thus ends my review. :D

Oh, I loved Rookie Nine's reaction to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, especially Lee's.

Awesome job. I would say more but I'm brain dead right now. Keep it up!

Lmao I loved this chapter!! Such comedy relief I love it! You have such a sense of humor and I thank you! You made my day. Please update soon!

LOL, That was most welcome and appreciated. Hooray for humourous reprieves, and Hooray for extensions!!! So does this mean that you're incorporating the sequel or just relaxing the structure of your plan? LOL, either way it gets me more chapters and will be most welcome :D. I love how the idiots just gathered around to gossip XD. Oh my god and Sai drew Yaoi :Drool: LOL!! I want a copy too XD, maybe I'll try my hand at it :rolls eyes:, if I can get my shit together. Everytime I sit down to draw these days something comes up :(. I love how everyone classified 'the deed' LOL, Kiba's is my fav though - bumping uglies XD. Now I'm really curious as to how Sakura will react to it, cause everyone else knows, will they tell her? Hmmmn, I'll be good and wait. Does this mean that the big fight begins next week?? Ganbatte!!! You can do it!!! (insert waterboy voice), LOL. And I'm really happy that Ren and Togimeishu, made it out, and I like what you did with Oro's daughter, she'd look so cool as a purple Naga. I begin to buzz with excitment everytime I think about this story, LOL, not to mention that I'm really excited to see the reunion of the boys, hell even kinda excited to see Sasuke confront Oro, I know he's gonna be rude about it and a riled up Sasuke makes me happy in the most shameful of ways, LOL, especially when he's riled up because of Naruto. Seriously, whether it's out of concern, aggravation or lust, I just love to see Naruto get under Sasuke's skin XD. Wow, that brings up improper thoughts XD, LOL, sooo excited. You have such a fantastic sense of humour XD. Sorry o.o;; I know this review is all over the place, :huggles again, I was so happy today was Tuesday XD.

Hahahahahaha! I KNEW Sai wouldn't be able to keep his mouth shut! Damn, that was funny! The way each of them described sex depicted their personalities. Teehee! Hinata is sooo sweet!! She's trying to let Sakura down easy, I guess it's good Ino wasn't in the group with Sai because then EVERYONE would have known. Lee is really too great. XD As per usual, Hiroki is adorable. I'm think I'm a Sai/Shino shipper in this story... ^^; Heh. It's too bad Oorochimaru's poor daughter died. I'm really glad you're letting the story play out instead of trying to end it prematurely. You know I won't mind if it got to be a hundred chapters even (not that I expect that) but you know what I mean, it's good. Really good. I'll probably re-read the whole thing when it's finished too. YOSH!

LOL I love this chapter! The interaction between everyone was great and very IC. When Sai drew the picture and they were discussing it I was laughing my ass off. Awwww I like this new Sasuke that has emotions. It makes me all fangirly and stuff. LOL *huggles you* You rock and I will forever be your slave. <3

Hey!! This is my first time reviewing, but I've been reading this story for awhile, and I must say it's my favorite! I really love this!! Keep up the good work, and try to update as soon as you can!!!

i have only one complaint! i wish you write more! good chapter! i hope that when sakura finds out about sasuke and naruto she doesn't hurt much.