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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and i still don't like her. *shakes head helplessly* this was a great chapter! so much going on and yet nothing gets done, haha. that is the mark of a true suspenseful author. i'm surprised no one bitched sakura out for coming in uninvited like that. cause i know the minute she finds out what's going on, she'll want to go along. ah well, nothing for it, i guess. this is such an awesome story, though, and i can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Dragon7
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!!!!!!!! this story is great I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon.
person Allys
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Hey sweetie, YAY it was like a whole chapter of adorable family relations XD. Sasuke and Hiroki are sooo Kawaii!!! I think I've his look all worked out, now it's just to get the three together. I like the theory that Leader is an Uchiha. He does have those funny eyes and it would be a cool way to explain them. The snails pace that they're moving at would irritate me if it weren't for the distracting cuteness, LOL, but that's perfect cause that's how they move in the anime and manga as well. That's my dobe streak shining through, Naruto would have been impatient as well. I love how you wrote Sakura. She's perfectly in character, especially the odd behaviour around Sasuke, and I was so happy when Hiroki was all "Who the hell are you?" LOL, it was a perfect reaction. I also love Sasuke's answer and the fact that Sakura remains as clueless as ever. I really want to see everyone's reaction to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, and boy does it crack me up that Hiroki refers to Sasuke as his nii-san, it's so innocent, yet incestuous, and could confuse the hell out of a person!! XD. Thank you so much for the update. :Huggles: I wanna go draw now ;D.
person DevilLived
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I love Sasuke and Hiroki moments. They make me squee.

(sighs) Only Kakashi could be so calm about meeting Sasuke again, especially with Sasuke's blue eyes. I love how you had Sasuke let Sakura know that there was nothing romantic between them. It was really cool and subtle.

I wonder how she'll react to the news? Very excited for the next chapter; keep it up! (cheers)
person mary
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sakura is in for a surpise!! i love this fic of yours! just how many more chappies are you planning? and keep cool for summer has hit!
person Ruffner
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooohhh! You are just cruel! How can you leave it there!? I wanna know what happens! Update Please! TToTT
person chineseartist
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh, i'm still crying about naruto's eyes. *whine*
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Talk about a cliff hanger!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
person StarDust--FireAshes
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I torture myself, I do. I'm on chapter 52, oh my did it look short(your upcoming, for me, fight scene!) , and I dont mean that in a bad way. I just mean even someone like me might be able to read it quick. But I've spent enough time on the computer today lol. I will look forward to your next chapters. The plot you've created is too intriging and now that I'm this far I guess its too late to stop, hm? (like I could anyways. Your story has some of the best naruto/sasuke interaction I've ever read!!!!) But I just thought I'd let ya know I love this story!

Please update soon because even though I am not at your latest chapter, I am anticipating every word of it.
SD&FA
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol - I loved Tsunade's reaction to Sasuke with Naruto's eyes. Can't wait to see how he explains himself. I love this story and I'm both looking forward to the ending, and sad that it'll be ending soon.