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OMG! i had tears in my eyes when sasuke hugged Hiroki! man i love this fic so much! please keep writing.

Aww man so now they're back in Konoha and it looks like Sasuke is going to have to talk pretty fast otherwise Tsunade is going to take out his head. I loved how Sasuke was with Hiroki though, it made me go all warm inside adn then when he showed them his eyes my chest started to hurt *sigh* this is a really tough situation they're in and to know that that snakebastard in inside Naruto is making me really really angry lol, heh but yeah ^_^ lol as always, great update, I can't get over how good this story is and I can't wait for next week to find out what happens next ^_^

Hina xXxx

aaaaaaaah!! are we going to see what hiroki looks like in his other form now? is there gonna be more trouble because of it? aaah poor sasuke!! i know it's shocking to suddenly see sasuke with naruto's eyes, but DAMN... sometimes tsunade's reactions are so rash and naruto-like lol.. anyway, omg, this chapter was great. i'm glad they found and were able to help sasuke, as much as it hurts his pride. and between him telling them what happened, and it being obvious how he felt about the situation (kyaa he called naruto his home ne), and how he responded, reacted and interacted with hiroki i was on the verge of tears!!!! (aww, even though it wasn't a willing trade for the eyes, hiroki's comment about hoping he was loved that much by someone was still sweet, though also depressing. a child's perspective putting a different spin on the situation... kyaa and when sasuke hugged him..just..*squee* i wanted to cry and squeal at the same time) omg i'm so impatient for the next one!

*hugs* I love you. Anyone who can write that well deserves love and adoration. This is me throwing it your way (wherever you are).

Now, I've just recently being doing a whole lot of assignments so I'm in the mind set to notice mistakes... which sucks for me because I hate noticing mistakes. Anyway, I think "and gently laid a hand" should be "and gently lay and hand" or not. Hell I suck at English. there where one or two other tense things that weren't quite right, but they hardly matter and I'm toast.

Anyway. Story story story. I love it, I'm waiting for more. I love you heaps and heaps and I'll never criticise again... unless you give it a sad ending, then I'll criticise and cry. :D

ACK! Must know what happens next!

You know, I had a little debate with myself when I saw that Believe it! in there...and I have to say, that is the one and only time that I have actually enjoyed that phrase being used! Its amazing that you got it to actually work.
I'm really excited to know if Tsunade can bring herself to work with Sasuke, and especially how Kakashi will react to Sasuke's presence. This is an amazing fic, and I just wanted to say that you do an awesome job actually getting it out there on time every week!

oh, so much damn suspense!! there are no words to describe how much i love this story, and how good this story is. there's just so many times an author hears it before it becomes mundane, at best. but seriously... I LOVE THIS STORY. IT IS SOOOOOOO DAMN GOOD!!

i expected tsunade to act that way, but did she have to slam him against the wall? he's a recovering patient, for crying out loud. and i sincerely hope she won't put the whole blame on sasuke with what's happened. i mean, naruto was the one to dump all kyuubi's chakra like that.

anyway, i am honestly dying to read the next chapter, so if you only update on tuesdays *has no idea b/c she loses track of days*, then i seriously hope this week goes by super fast. ^_^

Zomg! I want to read more NOW!! LOL, Hooray they're back in Konoha, well ;_; most of them anyway. We need to bring Kakashi quickly, or are they going to stay in Konoha and let Orochimaru come to them? I see Sasuke didn't stop to get good old what's his face (Ryou?) This whole chapter was just heart wrenching with some cute bits. Hiroki ssaying believe it was unbelievably adorable. And him being all defensive about Sasuke. I just hope he doesn't hurt Tsunade or get hurt himself when they try to stop him. They need to be a family! What does Hiroki look like? I have to go back and check, I want to do a family portrait when I get time, with baby and mismatched eyes. Sai hanging on to Sasuke was kinda sexy in an odd 'uhh, be careful dude' sort of way XD. And poor Sasuke cracking up and hugging onto Hiroki. That would be another adorable pic... omg, I really need to know what Hiroki looks like now. You have once again rocked my world. I'll be vibrating impatiently while wishing for next Tuesday to come faster XD. :Huggles:

Glee! I really love Tsunade, she's so protective of Naruto. Hopefully Sasuke can keep cool under her questioning. And we're back in Konoha! Yay! Uh-oh. Almost feels like they're going to have to prepare for a war. Epic battle! Will we be seeing Akatsuki again? I guess Itachi still has to bring in Oorochimaru for questioning. Sigh. Sai really doesn't know how to handle things. If he's not saying something that makes everyone uncomfortable then he looks like he's hitting on someone. Poor boy really doesn't know what he's doing. XD His arguments with Shino amuse me.

Hey hon, I would have completely missed this, and then where would we be? lol I see you got around to doing the next chapter even with me monopolising your online time XD I haven’t read this yet, can you tell? I just wanted to comment on the fact that in your summary there is “Rim” now unless I’m mistaken (which I’m not because I read your smut at least 3 times XD) THERE IS RIMMING TO COME! *passes out*

Right, onto the reading! I hope you know I can barely keep my eyes open, I had some really REALLY evil customers today, one almost made me cry! I may have to reread this in the morning.

lol! The Kiba petting Aka and the kid is so damn cute!! lol see, it’s when I read this kinda stuff and then you come out with your pervertedness that leaves me all confused XD

I LOVE THAT SASUKE HASN’T GONE ALL DAREDEVIL! He probably thought he would, the smug bastard XD

aww, Hiroki such a cute little thing, yes thing, you won’t convince me to call it anything else XD So freaking adorable, though he’s got a death wish throwing himself at Sasuke.

“And when you pass out we can always tie you to Akamaru’s back. I’m sure that will really make you look like you are returning voluntarily when we enter the gates.” This is why Shino wins everything.

You know I keep wanting to quote your entire fic at you, but that’s just stupid XD Kiba is making me grin like a moron.

Ok fine, I love Hiroki, and when I pop out kids, I want one just like him. Are you happy? O_O “Believe it” no comment hon.

*sniggers* Sai! He’s perving on him! Shino wins again, this fic is making me giggle (yes giggle, dammit) out loud.

Ok the dramatic unveiling of Naruto’s eyes in Sasuke’s head, was completely cancelled out with Sai. LMAO!!! If this way your reason for the utter angst in the last two chapters, then it is completely worth it XD

I know you’re probably worried you’ve made Sasuke OOC with his reaction to Hiroki, but he isn’t, you’ve developed him so much throughout this fic, he’s become more mature, and so he wouldn’t push Hiroki away now, you’ve developed a more grown up Sasuke, and it fits the fic really well. Is this making sense? I always get confused when I’m trying to explain what I mean XD

*snicker* Sasuke went through unmolested, please, everyone was eye raping him XD

FUCK ME! TSUNADE! okay not really, but holy O_O She went all momma on Sasuke’s ass! and Hiroki at the end finished the chapter nicely.
God, woman, I love you. XD There was no porn in this chapter and yet I love it as though there was porn in it! How did you do that?!

*hugs you* My eyes are seriously sore now, but your fic has me all awake, bouncing up and down for more!

Adi XX

p.s Let me know if me reading while I review is annoying, I only do it because I want to make sure I remember to comment on everything XD Though I do feel as if I’m just quoting the chapter..