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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“My home currently has an unwanted occupant.” *Sniffles*
Gawd, this was sad. It was like a total suckfest for poor Sasuke. Man, i felt so bad for him. *Sigh* Anyway this was a great chapter, and if ANYONE doubted Sasuke's feelings for Naruto i think it's apparent how he feels in this chapter. I really hope they are able to save Naruto AND Konoha.
Gawd, this was sad. It was like a total suckfest for poor Sasuke. Man, i felt so bad for him. *Sigh* Anyway this was a great chapter, and if ANYONE doubted Sasuke's feelings for Naruto i think it's apparent how he feels in this chapter. I really hope they are able to save Naruto AND Konoha.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiroki saying 'Believe it' was so cute and precious!! I love him so much. It was heart breakingly sweet when he said "When I grow up, I hope someone loves me that much." I nearly cried.
Though, I hope he doesn't kill Tsunade. But I guess she has the right to react like that, since she doesn't know the whole story.
Can't wait until the next update! Awesome work so far!!!!!! (cheers)
Though, I hope he doesn't kill Tsunade. But I guess she has the right to react like that, since she doesn't know the whole story.
Can't wait until the next update! Awesome work so far!!!!!! (cheers)
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are forgiven... Anywho the story is really leading up to the climax. I can't wait till you describe what Hiroki looks like in his experiment form. Without his eyes will Sasuke be able to turn into his experiment form? I don't really know if the mark is connected with his eyes or not. Well can't wait till you update again
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! what a cliffy!! i love the look that tsunade gives sasuke and what she does! *chills running down the spine* i would love to seee the ending for this fic!
keep up the good writing!
keep up the good writing!
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! lol, you had me practically rolling on the floor laughing with chapter 46! Damn... lol. I think that's a good place to stop for now, since its pretty late. If not for that I'd be bumming around for longer. that... hmm... I liked Sasuke being on top. I wish he would be more often, maybe not so aggressive, though I do like him to be aggressive, (does that even make sense? lol). And so I'm slowly catching up to your latest updates. Wow, still 11 chaps behind. The thought of reading makes me sick, but its your great story so I might not kill myself. lol. (reading juss isn't one of my hobbies, with the exception of fanfiction heheh). So I can't wait for more. I noticed one thing tho, I'm pretty sure it was in this last chapter, where 'and' should have been 'an' (a sentence that also had Kiba in it). eh, my minds fuzzy. Maybe I'm tired. So good night. Hope you update your other story soon because that is quite intriging too. (I almost thought it was going to be a Sasu/Naru. I was alllll excited! lol)
SD&FA
SD&FA
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay - another awesome chapter!!! I can't wait to see Sasuke return to Konoha, he has to save Naruto. *sobs hystericaly*
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please tell me your not going to have sasuke permenenatly keep naruto's eyes and vice versa because that would be soooo very WEIRD!! I mean sasuke with blue eyes *shivers in disgust* it's just not right. and naruto with sharigan eyes who boy that is really creepy. well hope you update soon. ja ne ^____^
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't get over the fact that Sasuke no longer has his eyes but Naruto's. (I hope he gets them back) I really can't wait for the next update!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn, Naru and Sasu got their eyes switched. Now they really can 'see things from the others perspective'. Not that I think that Sasuke will appreciate that.. Too bad for him. Things are moving forward, can't wait to see how things happen and- are you /sure/ you're not tapping into Kishi's brain? Just read the latest chapter, where Oro is sorta making a comeback (won't say more to avoid spoilers). And here you are, having Oro make a comeback and oi vey... I love you, keep up the excellent work
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Nooooooooo! Sasuke's eyes! And Naruto's eyes!!! Orochimaru really IS evil ins't he? I went and played with a few screencaps in photoshop after reading this. Just so I could really SEE the change. Sasuke looks so soft and innocent with the blue eyes. And Naruto looks so much angrier. I wish I was a better artist and could truly draw how they look for you, but my only skill is in manips. Seeing Sasuke that way though, makes me wonder how people are going to react to him when they see him. He's not going to be able to hide his emotions nearly as well this way. I can't wait till the first Konoha ninga sees him! Talk about a shock! And Sakura.... Wow! I can't wait to see where you go with this! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!