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Gah! For a moment there I thought, "What the hell is she DOING?!?!!!" Had me on the edge of my seat thinking NOOOO - Sasuke disfigured??? What a relief that no eyes were wasted...Gave me flashbacks to a scifi movie with tom cruise in it from a book written by Richard K Dick (I think). Freaky eyeball replacement surgery done in a motel room. Totally squicked.

Somehow there must be some HAPPY smut eventually, right? Great story and plot, I'm just a sucker for stories that end happily, and smuttily ever after. Thats me begging for an eventual happy ending. I'll stop begging now...*wimper* Ok, really stopping now...

I'm hyperventilating here!!! GAH! I love this story sooo much! We're getting to the action stuff now! And... and their eyes actually got transplanted!!!! That's both awesome and horrible! *weeps* Those chapters they were unconcous were torture, but everything's going to be okay now! *rocks self back and forth* I so look forward to seeing the other konoha residents in the story again. So much to do! How many chapters are left now? I really don't want it to end! I'm here every tuesday! Saturdays too, just in case. Then sometimes on other days just to see what other people have written in their reviews... I'm not obcessive! What are you talking about?! *shifty eyes* I'm so sleepy...

Now I don't think you need anyone else telling you how great this story is because after 1000+ reviews it should be a given...but I'll say it anyways, this story is fantastic and has kept me captivated more than any other fanfiction I have read. Now just to comment on the most recent chapter, while reading this I couldn't stop thinking that this has to be the ideal punishment for Sasuke: to lose what makes him special, his chance at revenge, the one person in his life who cares about him and knows him for who he is and to top it off, having the daily reminder of exactly what he's lost staring him in the face in his reflection. Now I know you won't leave poor Sasuke off like this, but I just love the idea of it and I think it makes for a great addition to the story. I am anxiouly awaiting the next installment, but at the same time I am dreading the day this story ends! And when I think back on all my favorite books and stories I've read throughout my life, I think that statement applies to them all. You are a very talented writer and I am sure I do not only speak for myself when I say I enjoy your work immensely.

wow never saw that comming! that is just fantastic!

That came as a shock: Naruto enclosed in Orochimaru, and Sasuke losing his Sharingans. The latter was worst. At first I thought he would be blind altogether, but the doctor was gracious and gave him Naruto's eyes... This was really cruel. I hope that you find a way that both boys will get their own eyes back in the end. I know, you might take to the message: Loving and being loved is more important than being a genius with Sharingan eyes; still they are an important part of Sasuke's identity and I hope he will get them back.
Of course Naruto is in a worse state than Sasuke, but somehow I trust him to come back again - he has shown that this is not irreversible.

Okay, being reasonnable again. I like your story, read it in a few days (or rather nights). I particularly like the love story - [i]all[/i] the interactions between the two boys, from musing about each other to talking to having sex. The smut scenes are great: Sometimes I cannot help thinking that you must be a happily married woman. I don't mind the one or two rape scenes - you make it clear that [i]good[/i] sex is consensual, even if it means that one is in control and the other give up control - it is a matter of trust.
I like it when they talk. They are just so funny. Though I wish that it would not only be Sasuke who is irrational all the time, while Naruto knows what is good for them and their relationship.

So I hope now for some more great love scenes and a happy ending. :-)
kind regards

susanna

::screams!::: ahh!! how could you take sauke's EYES?!?!?!?!?!?!? and, uh, the sharingan in in his DNA in his entire body, since it's hereditary. soooo, there's a posibility that if sasuke's own body's cells take over his eyes over a period of months or so, it might grow back? i dont know, since working eye transplants arent really possible yet. i wonder what happens if you sew a black person's thumb on a white person's truncated hand? would the skin color eventually change? i have no idea.

and shouldnt naruto, aka, orochimaru's brain be hard pressed if not incapable of using the sharingan properly? look at kakashi; he cant do a lot of the stuff the uchiha brothers can, and he has to keep the eye covered constantly since he cant seem to turn it off. not to mention, i heard itachi's eyesight is going bad from over-use of the sharingan? <--rumors, i havent read tht far in the manga. either way, i seriously cant believe how much you torture them. :'( i mean, it's realistic and all.... just very sad. and im worried about what's going to happen with sasuke's spunk and orochimaru's daughter, ew.

naruto, sasuke, you see, guys??? this is what happens when you pathetisad seal-it-yourself really evil people into your mental demon cage! u couldnt have had jiraiya take a look at it, or tsunade? not going back to konaha and your pride was worth all this?? and you have to go back now anyway. >:l

:s oh god that bastard got his eyes and naruto can't get out this really isn't going well for our boys :s but Sasuke being so worried about Naruto to the point where he'd consider going back to Konoha (swalllowing his pride lol) to get help from Kakashi had my hear going all warm :) And I love how Naruto just thought of Hiroki as his own when Kyubi made that crack about him wanting to have kids. Anyway thanks again for the update ^_^

Hina xXxx

oh what an evil ending. but i really do hope that things get better for them! hopefully ryou will be able to help sasuke out.
keep up the good work!

I just went back and read like 10 chapters... that was intense! OMG I can't wait until your next chapter, this story is wonderful as always!




P.S. Sorry for the brief review but I'm in quite the hurry!

O.O Zrina love, I'm so fucking horrified. :deep breaths: They took out Naruto's eyes ;_; but I love Naruto's eyes. In Naruto's head! They would look so odd with each others eyes, and poor Sasuke, he really doesn't have a prayer now does he. That's really depressing. Although I guess it is sort of fitting. But who knows, it is a blood line limit, maybe he can still develop the Sharingan and then they can both have it. As for stupid Orochimaru I hope it doesn't work for him. Although sadly, that's highly unlikely - Kakashi and all, but one can still hope right?. I'd wish that Itachi could kill him for taking something that's not his, but the bastard is vacationing in Naruto's body, so that wouldn't work either. That really upsets the power balance though, between Naruto and Sasuke. They can never fight like they used to anymore. It's horribly sad. Their eyes are such a large part of who they are, especially Sasuke. All the dark looks are gone, and Naruto with dark eyes is so unnatural. I think I'm in utter shock here. I still love you, and I still adore this story, but wow, that last bit hurt. I'm sorry I'm fixating, I'm just such a visual person, I still can't fully conceive it. I need huggling!!! I'm serious!! :sighs: It was sort of genius though, most people would never go there, you and Arora, holds heart, have you ever read "Broken"? She's the only other person I've ever read rip out Naruto's eyes, but it was ok in the end, I don't wanna tell you anymore in case you want to read it and haven't. I'll be waiting breathlessly to see how this turns out, especially now. That was completely unexpected, I'm still reeling. Ja, sweetie, til next Tuesday, maybe sooner (crosses fingers) XD.