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Review for Chapter 52

"After a long considering look, Itachi calmly reached behind him and drew his own weapon, the same one that had slain his family. The one that would now either finish the job or bear witness to his judgment being rendered."

I love that line. It summed things up very nicely, genius line.

I like that Naruto got irrationally jealous about how Itachi and Sasuke had beautiful graceful fighting thingys (don’t look at me like that, makes sense in my head!) lol Zrina, you’re hinting at Uchihacest in Naruto’s thoughts there XD

AH the fight scenes were amazing!!! The fight between Sasuke and Itachi almost felt like it could have been the anime.

Ok I’ve just finished reading the rest of the chapter, lynch rope? What lynch rope? Ah yeah, that lynch rope over there, come along Zrina, you knew this was coming XD lol The whole Orochimaru thing makes me really frustrated, just when Naruto and Sasuke where getting somewhere! Okay off to read the next chapter :D

he wasn’t sure if he should follow Sai’s advice and call Naruto Otousan and Sasuke Okaasan

Holy cow, that line made me choke. Sai is a complete, uh there are too many words to describe him.

“Snog!” Sai cursed

Ok I almost fell out of my chair with that one. Honest to god.

AW the Hiroki and Akamaru thing was so freaking adorable. You make me like kids in this fic :S

lol I love how ol Oro likes to plan things out, he’s one small step away from getting a cat and stroking it while evilly laughing, what’s disturbing is that he’s like that in the anime too, he’s very smug XD

I think the Togimeishu is part of another filler episode? Hmm I’m not sure, lol I don’t need to ask sily questions anyway before the next chapter is but a click away. *dork*

Review for Chapter 54

NYAH! I was just about to give up Togimeishu as a lost cause to some filler episode that I couldn’t remember and then you went and pulled a fast one on me! Damn you plan in advance! *in awe*

NYAH! Again! Orochimaru is a daddy! lol sorry I’m easily excitable at the moment because SoD is doing wonder’s for my reward system :D

Oh I caught a typo “He ran a hand of the visible seal” “over” instead of “of” :)

I’m not going to say the whole Oro jerking off thing was hot. Because it wasn’t. Oh who the hell am I kidding?! I, Adi, think Oro is hot. What the hell have you done to me? Him visualizing Kyuubi only made it hotter. I am so corrupted XD

O_o Oro went a little crazy at the end there. Demented Sannin fun! XD

ok I've finished reading the last 2 chapters, but I'm also really sleepy. I really enjoyed them, and the I like the perspective from Orochimaru's POV, I sometimes find myself cheering for him until I realise he's the baddie and Naruto and Sasuke are glaring at me XD heh for all Orochimaru being all evil villany he doesn't come off that villiany, but in a good IC kinda way, oh I'm probably not making sense and have just been converted to the KyuOro pairing so I'm probably sprouting gibberish XD I am amazed by how you've managed to plan all of this, it must have taken quite a bit of effort and time. O_O ok hon, I think I'm all reviewed out, well just really sleepy, if I remember more to say in the morning I shall come back, for that is my ninja way *does good guy pose*

*hugs*

Night night

Adi XX

You certainly do weave a tangled web don't you, and thats putting it mildly. I'm very curious to see how you will handle all the plot twists you have created. It should be more than interesting to see where the story goes now. I look forward to the next chapter(s). My best wishes for you and your writing.

OH please,i hate it when it comes to these things,LOL,i hope this stupid snake man dies in a lot of pain for what he did,keep going like that your story is perfect,^^,hope we see a little Narusasu soon enough,i already missed them,lol,^_^

omg! Crazy ass chapter, i was pratically on the edge of my seat. >_<
Poor Naru-chan and Sasuke-kun, not good.

But good story non-the-less. Love it and i am quite glad i am keeping up with this story on a regular basis.
One of the reasons why i come to AFF is because i am always checking for a new update on this story.
Anyways, just dropping one of my very random comments onto your story ( i am sure i have comment before.. XD)
So hopefully i have time to comment again when your next chapter comes out!
until next time,
ja ne!
Fujinakaheero

hmm, i love ur story i really do but i hust hate how orochimaru is winning! its so unfair! damn it! isn't he dead already anyways! really, could i least get two minutes of naruto and sasuke winning!

“You, I will pull back within these bars and I will make sure you never escape again, Little Bitch"

hehe I am so looking forward to that, you have no idea how much and what was that? Naruto was coming to? oooh *eyes shine* hope :d but then again... Sasuke..., I have faith though you'll get them out of this situation somehow right right?

*takes deep breath* okay okay, I'm okay heh, can't wait to see what's going to happen next, as always great update and thanks ^_^

Hina xXxx

Oh no, is Sasuke going to lose his eyes? I sure hope he's saved by that doctor before it happens! I also hope that Naruto regains consciousness and figures out a way to get his body back.