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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best things I have ever read. I can't even begin to write how much I truly loved reading it!
For 73 long chapters it was such a well written and constructed story!
I can't wait for the sequel! I'm sure I'll be really excited to read it when you post it! =)
For 73 long chapters it was such a well written and constructed story!
I can't wait for the sequel! I'm sure I'll be really excited to read it when you post it! =)
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Augh!
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Greetings, Zrina! :D The preceeding 'Augh!' comes to you courtesy of the fact that adultfanfiction.net denies me two very very important pieces of information. You see, they do not tell me when your story, The Sound of Dreams, was posted, or last updated! As such, I have no means of knowing whether or not your wonderful story is still going to be receiving a sequel, or if this was posted years ago and abandoned. :( I hope you'll be kind enough to drop me a note, and give me some hope that more will be forthcoming in the not tooooo distant future?
Either way, I want to thank you for the enormous amount of work that must have gone into this 73 chapter tribute. I very much enjoyed, and am now going to have to archive this for preservation. ^.^
-Max
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Greetings, Zrina! :D The preceeding 'Augh!' comes to you courtesy of the fact that adultfanfiction.net denies me two very very important pieces of information. You see, they do not tell me when your story, The Sound of Dreams, was posted, or last updated! As such, I have no means of knowing whether or not your wonderful story is still going to be receiving a sequel, or if this was posted years ago and abandoned. :( I hope you'll be kind enough to drop me a note, and give me some hope that more will be forthcoming in the not tooooo distant future?
Either way, I want to thank you for the enormous amount of work that must have gone into this 73 chapter tribute. I very much enjoyed, and am now going to have to archive this for preservation. ^.^
-Max
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story and waiting for the sequel. When exactly do you plan on posting the sequel? You said something about updating by the start of the year... you meant 2009? Also, do you have a mailing list? Can you add me? I have read all your stories... I love them all. Is there going to be a sequel to "Wrong number"? I would love to see Naruto's reaction to Sasuke's conversation with Sakura...if you can call that a conversation. Qwiky lube... I want to see the interction in college between the two. Please do post that sequel soon too. You are a great writer and your style is awesome. I am a fan of your work. Please, write or post something... Sasu/Naru or Naru/Sasu...I don't mind the order as long as they are together and you don't share Sasuke with no one but Naruto. I am very posessive of Sasuke.
Also, for some reason the idea that Oro will make an apparition in the sequel wont leave me alone. The fact that Ren is alive but in critical condition and what Tsunade said about being in that condition because of Oro makes me think that we haven't seen the last of him. Am I wrong? How is the new revelations in the manga going to affect your plot or are you totally going to disregard the new developments? Is just sad what the elders did to Itachi...and how Sasuke is reacting...makes me question if I really want to see where the author is taking Naruto. I haven't seen the last three to four chapters because I just know that I am going to be so upset when I see Sasuke's idiocy. Somewhere I saw that he made Naruto cry... really I have no words for what this makes me feel. I know that I would like to grab Sasuke and ....but then again what Itachi went through and he killing him...anyway, please drop me a line at: marqqui @ yahoo . com , without the spaces.
Sorry for rambling like that is just that it makes me so mad and sad at the same time... makes me want to kick Sasuke but kiss him and hug him too. Poor Naruto.
Thanks for the great stories and waiting for more and soon please. Please let me hear from you!
Sincerely
Moonmoore
Also, for some reason the idea that Oro will make an apparition in the sequel wont leave me alone. The fact that Ren is alive but in critical condition and what Tsunade said about being in that condition because of Oro makes me think that we haven't seen the last of him. Am I wrong? How is the new revelations in the manga going to affect your plot or are you totally going to disregard the new developments? Is just sad what the elders did to Itachi...and how Sasuke is reacting...makes me question if I really want to see where the author is taking Naruto. I haven't seen the last three to four chapters because I just know that I am going to be so upset when I see Sasuke's idiocy. Somewhere I saw that he made Naruto cry... really I have no words for what this makes me feel. I know that I would like to grab Sasuke and ....but then again what Itachi went through and he killing him...anyway, please drop me a line at: marqqui @ yahoo . com , without the spaces.
Sorry for rambling like that is just that it makes me so mad and sad at the same time... makes me want to kick Sasuke but kiss him and hug him too. Poor Naruto.
Thanks for the great stories and waiting for more and soon please. Please let me hear from you!
Sincerely
Moonmoore
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the sequel!!
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DEAR LORD, WOMAN
(I assume you are a woman)
73 CHAPTERS?!?!
are you out of your mind?!
and a sequel to boot...!
I think my brain fried reading this humongously long story
seriously, I think it's now golden brown and delicious
not that I didn't enjoy the story, though, babe
but I'm thinking that I probably shouldn't have tried reading it in huge chunks like that
it's just waaay too much plot for my mind to completely process at one time, you know?
on the other hand I can't wait for the sequel!
just give me some time to recuperate first, ok? (XD, j/k j/k)
and
'til next time, babe~! ^o^
(I assume you are a woman)
73 CHAPTERS?!?!
are you out of your mind?!
and a sequel to boot...!
I think my brain fried reading this humongously long story
seriously, I think it's now golden brown and delicious
not that I didn't enjoy the story, though, babe
but I'm thinking that I probably shouldn't have tried reading it in huge chunks like that
it's just waaay too much plot for my mind to completely process at one time, you know?
on the other hand I can't wait for the sequel!
just give me some time to recuperate first, ok? (XD, j/k j/k)
and
'til next time, babe~! ^o^
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly done. I caught myself thinking over some of the plot points in your story, and really seeing them work with the canon story/plot.
I can't go on enough about how well you done this story was, especially the development. You managed to get the characters to grow through the story. Even Sai. That's an achievement.
Seriously good fic. Thank you for writing it.
I can't go on enough about how well you done this story was, especially the development. You managed to get the characters to grow through the story. Even Sai. That's an achievement.
Seriously good fic. Thank you for writing it.
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah, hey, was Naruto fighting Envy or something?
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMFG OMG OMG OMG
This has officially become my favorite fic - EVER! Kishimoto should bow down at your feet and then licence you to have THIS made into a spin off anime! (R rated of course)
I said this once before, in a review I left about halfway through the story:
I FUCKING LOVE YOU! :)
And I wish I was Sasuke...so Naruto would be 'mine'.
(PS: I know how Sakura felt when the boys were snogging nude, in front of her and Tsunade when they were reunited. I got a freakin nosebleed! Thank you thank you thank YOU :bows down at your feet: then :runs off to glomp Kiba:
This has officially become my favorite fic - EVER! Kishimoto should bow down at your feet and then licence you to have THIS made into a spin off anime! (R rated of course)
I said this once before, in a review I left about halfway through the story:
I FUCKING LOVE YOU! :)
And I wish I was Sasuke...so Naruto would be 'mine'.
(PS: I know how Sakura felt when the boys were snogging nude, in front of her and Tsunade when they were reunited. I got a freakin nosebleed! Thank you thank you thank YOU :bows down at your feet: then :runs off to glomp Kiba:
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I. FUCKING. LOVE. YOU.
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*is amazed*
Ehm... I'm truly sorry for this but I'm just too caught up in it still to be able to give you a proper review (not that I have the skill to give one anyway *rubs back of neck*). I think your story is truly awesome and I can almost promise you that next time I read it (because believe me when I say there WILL be a next time) I will give you one of my usual reviews; complete with points on every single thing I found funny/eciting/interesting, qoutes I liked, stupid ramblings, and a lot of my bad english *wince*.
I will definitely keep an eye open for the sequel! Believe it! *laugh*
*still amazed*
Anyways; expect to see more from me in the future, both when I read SoD again (and give you a crazily long review that you aren't gonna want to read because it will bore you to death (sorry I'm rambling again)) and when I read the sequel. *wink*
See ya!
Ehm... I'm truly sorry for this but I'm just too caught up in it still to be able to give you a proper review (not that I have the skill to give one anyway *rubs back of neck*). I think your story is truly awesome and I can almost promise you that next time I read it (because believe me when I say there WILL be a next time) I will give you one of my usual reviews; complete with points on every single thing I found funny/eciting/interesting, qoutes I liked, stupid ramblings, and a lot of my bad english *wince*.
I will definitely keep an eye open for the sequel! Believe it! *laugh*
*still amazed*
Anyways; expect to see more from me in the future, both when I read SoD again (and give you a crazily long review that you aren't gonna want to read because it will bore you to death (sorry I'm rambling again)) and when I read the sequel. *wink*
See ya!