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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, you're killing me! You've made me hate Orochimaru in a way I never thought possible. Gah, if I don't know what happens next I'll absolutely crumble into tears!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Things are coming to a head! I'm super super excited about how you plan on ending this fic! BTW, the whole Kyubi-obsessed Orochimaru trip is just OMG awesome! <3
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your fanfiction! Its mazingly awesome! Sai's personality, hilarious XD
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'The boy had too much of a history of pulling last minute plans out of his ass for'
heh I loved that line it made me grin widely despite the situation that naru-kun is in which when i think about then wiped the smile from my face, and then there's Itachi, despite him speaking with no emotion - I got the feeling he really wants to kill Sasuke this time roun *sigh* well...
on the bright side lol, every time Orochimaru thinks about the demon fox heh I get that grin right back :D heh, bastard he deserves it, wanting Kyubi against his will - heh, *sneers* bastard
*clears throat* anyway cool lool and thanks for the update ^_^
Hina xXxx
heh I loved that line it made me grin widely despite the situation that naru-kun is in which when i think about then wiped the smile from my face, and then there's Itachi, despite him speaking with no emotion - I got the feeling he really wants to kill Sasuke this time roun *sigh* well...
on the bright side lol, every time Orochimaru thinks about the demon fox heh I get that grin right back :D heh, bastard he deserves it, wanting Kyubi against his will - heh, *sneers* bastard
*clears throat* anyway cool lool and thanks for the update ^_^
Hina xXxx
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo!!! This is depressing. And I miss Naruto and Sasuke.
*sniffles*
*sniffles*
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Orochimaru is a very very sick man, but I guess we all knew that already. Still, every time he does something it brings up the whole subject again.
Great chapter! Things are really starting to build up. I'm really excited to read the next chapters you have planned out. Keep up the awesome work!
Great chapter! Things are really starting to build up. I'm really excited to read the next chapters you have planned out. Keep up the awesome work!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alas...However will the evil Orochimaru (sp) be banished from the sweet Naru? I await your next chapter with bated breath.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for clearing that ryou thing up! and this plotline is so going to drive me insane! is sasuke ever going to wake up? is naruto? kyuubi? is itachi going to help naruto regain control before trying to kill sasuke? so many questions! i wish i was a mind reader!
wonderful and suspenseful chapter! i can't wait for the next chapter!
wonderful and suspenseful chapter! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy fucking shit, soooooooooo much has happened while i've been gone! and i don't even have time to comment on everything i want to, even though i wish i could *sigh* so i'll hafta be happy with saying: story's still crazy awesome, fucking orochimaru goddamn you! i'm glad sasuke stayed with naruto and gave in to his desires to "be with him one last time" (though i hope it really isn't/wasn't the last time of course!) and he actually said he loves him! even though naruto apparently couldn't understand what he said(?) >.>
anyway, gahh, like i said, crazy! and the prospect of sakura coming into the scene with them is exciting to me. i like sakura, and even though i don't want her coming between them, i like having her around. i also enjoy seeing what reaction sasuke would have to how she's grown as a kunoichi (especially considering his subtle attention to everyone else he's seen again so far). also, i'm glad you acknowledged sakura's crush on BOTH of her teammates (in tsunade's thoughts). it'll make things even more interesting to see all of their reactions to each other if she does end up getting sent after them. i was actually hoping for that since the mention of her possibly having shika help her find them on her own >.>
ummm damn, lots more i wish i could say, but chibichan2 needs attention asap so i g2g!
love the story still, laters!
~ lg
anyway, gahh, like i said, crazy! and the prospect of sakura coming into the scene with them is exciting to me. i like sakura, and even though i don't want her coming between them, i like having her around. i also enjoy seeing what reaction sasuke would have to how she's grown as a kunoichi (especially considering his subtle attention to everyone else he's seen again so far). also, i'm glad you acknowledged sakura's crush on BOTH of her teammates (in tsunade's thoughts). it'll make things even more interesting to see all of their reactions to each other if she does end up getting sent after them. i was actually hoping for that since the mention of her possibly having shika help her find them on her own >.>
ummm damn, lots more i wish i could say, but chibichan2 needs attention asap so i g2g!
love the story still, laters!
~ lg
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn oorochimaru STILL trying to make the perfect host. I'd forgotten that Tsunade knows nothing about Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. At this point I'm sure Sakura would just be glad if they were safe, but I do look forward to the various reactions other Konoha ninjas will have to it. Hee hee! A team of Jiraiya, Sakura and maybe Shikamaru going after Naruto sounds good to me. I'd like to see them with a little more screen time. I hope Sasuke wakes up soon, without a dying girl pregant with his child. I hope the good doctor will come up with something!