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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aweome chapter; I loved it! Is the doctor Kabuto or am I way off the mark? I guess I'll find out soon.
Orochimaru has to be stopped ASAP! (cheers for Shino and Co) Go team, go!
I can't wait until the next chapter and I'll be very very happy if you do update Saturday.
Keep it up!
Orochimaru has to be stopped ASAP! (cheers for Shino and Co) Go team, go!
I can't wait until the next chapter and I'll be very very happy if you do update Saturday.
Keep it up!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I have finally caught up - No lie when you said poo would fly - geeze I must be tired if I just typed that...
Wow, this story has kept me going one chapter after another...I await the rest of the story with bated breath!
Wow, this story has kept me going one chapter after another...I await the rest of the story with bated breath!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*groan* I want to know what happenes! Why do you do this to me?!?!! LOL This was a wonderful, action packed chapter. You never cease to amaze me. I've long grown addicted to this story. *sigh* I guess I have to wait until Tuesday for my next fix. XD
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your so mean. If you let Orochimaru hurt Sasuke sexually I think I will hunt you down and... do bad things. :( But I trust you to write the rest brilliantly, and all I can do is pray you don't go to far down the angst road that I can't forgive you. :D
I'm glad Itachi didn't die since Naruto and Sasuke have to deal with him together. And I'm glad you updated... I was a bit concerned because these longer gaps make me forget when you last updated etc.
This is a crappy review and I'm sorry for that. But I love your work and that's about all I can think to say.
Kimra
I'm glad Itachi didn't die since Naruto and Sasuke have to deal with him together. And I'm glad you updated... I was a bit concerned because these longer gaps make me forget when you last updated etc.
This is a crappy review and I'm sorry for that. But I love your work and that's about all I can think to say.
Kimra
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zrina! You reviewed my fic! *dead* I haven't read the recent chapters of your fic because along with the newer episodes of Bleach, Naruto and Death Note, your fic is included in my reward for finishing my bloody exams :D :D :D So yeah on May 16th so long as Adi isn't dead, you'll get a page long review XD
Take care hon!
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Take care hon!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. God!!! I can't even put into words how much I love this story. The action is just as addicting as the romance. Brilliant! I'll be biting my nails until the next update, I swear. MORE!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick question. Did you ment to say "Tried to kill Gaara" or "did kill gaara", because he still is alive. I was a little confused on that one. Fight scence! Man, I thought it would be more to the final showdown of the Uchiha's but damn that Oro! Always have to get in the middle of things. I hope the Kyubbi really has his way with him one day...D/s anyone?
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am both scared and excited about the next chapter now!
Cant wait...but must!
Cant wait...but must!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do believe that you actually enjoy torturing us, you evil thing. That was awesome now where's the update!? I think you nailed Itachi, and I like how you had him regard Kisame's death. It felt right. I can't wait to see what happens next. See you next tuesday! Ja ne
A.S.
A.S.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I’ve finally caught up with you! It really bites when you’re out of town for a while and have no opportunity to read your favorite fan fictions. Anyway though, more importantly, WOW!!! These chapters have been fantastic! You had it all: intrigue, action, drama, comedy, mystery, romance, and sex, can’t forget about the sex. I also would like to say that this chapter was just perfect and you have no need to be paranoid. I thought it was very interesting that you brought up the fact that “Either way, Sasuke would lose and Naruto might very well lose Sasuke.” Is that supposed to be some form of foreshadowing? because that seems to be your favorite literary technique. I really hope not, I think our boys deserve some form of a happy ending; after all they’ve been through so much….Anyway though, I have a feeling I know about where this is going and I’m very curious as to how you will handle the story from this point on. I look forward to your next chapter.
P.S. This is officially the longest fic that has held my interest. You are a great writer!
P.S. This is officially the longest fic that has held my interest. You are a great writer!